Yours Till Eternity

By Taani10

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this is a Story which will define love emotions family bonding and many more..... As itz my story it will no... More

Introducing the Characters
1. Facade of Happiness
2. Clouded emotions
3. Hearts Interconnected
4. Brothers with golden heart
5. Day of Arrival
6. First Day of joining
7. Adjusting with the New normal
8. Equations
9. Bickerings
10. spatting at each other
11. Unknown meeting
12. Never ending fights
13. Not being rational
14. Secret that is known
15. Rift
16. Picking up fights
17. Incomplete meeting
18. Convincing
19. Finally meeting
20. Shocked with the reality
21. Taking care
22. New revealation
23. Desperate attempts
24. Twisty situation
25. Random bickerings
26. Trip
27. Kabir's revenge
28. Realisation of mistake
29. Appology
30. Taking care
31. Birthday
32. Hidden emotions
33. Pouring out feelings
34. Truth come across
35. Being emotional
36. Crazy Banters
37. start of a new bond
38. Turmoil
39. Piercing Emotions
40. Fragile moments
41. Understanding
42. Acknowledging the importance of life
44. Drunk
45. Something Suspicious
46. Hijacked
47. Shattered hopes
48. Remorseful situation
49. Stirred emotions
50. Care and Concern
51. Emotions
52. nostalgia
53. Accepting the allegations
54. Accepting the hidden emotions
55. Revealation and Conflict
56. Helpless
57. Truth Exposed
58. Puzzled situation
59. Blunt actions
60. Sinking in the new reality
61. New changes
62. Little sparkles of joy
63. Fun and Insecurities
64. Mixed emotions
65. Green with envy
66. Bottled up emotions
67. Misunderstanding at itz Peak
69. Realisation
70. Caring
71. Regretting
72. Expressing Regret
73. Complete family
74. Mischievous morning
75. Diversed life
76. Prank or Reality?
77. Tough times
78. Hopes
79. Getting back to the Track
80. Delightful moments
81. Blooming love
82. Cute banters
83. Conflict between heart and Mind!
84. Past interference
85. Point of Retreat
86. Pacifying
87. Irrelevant Accusation
88. Confessions
89. Confused feeling
90. New bond and jealousy
91. Heart has given the Answer
92. Engagement with a Twist
93. Irony of Fate
94. Failed Attempts
95. Reality
96. Confrontation
97. Outburst of Family
98. Confessing the reason to the Brothers
99. Brothers bond
100. Uncertain situation
101. Fear of death
102. Secret deceision
103. Taking a tough call
104. Epilogue

43. Valentine's party

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By Taani10

Scene starts from hospital

Kabir thinks - Ek taraf u r trying to be friends with me or dusru trf tu sacchai ni batana chahta to me kia karu kunj.. kese react karu me.. har roz dil or dimag k bich pis ra hu me ..  pagal hogya hu...  itna ssbkuch hogya h or me chah k bhi apn muh ni khol ra... 

otherhand

kunj thinks - Dadu ko kia hogya achanak vo wapas ese kyu behave kr re h shayed unka mud off h kisi wjh se forget it baad me baat karlunga

Preet came - Hey kunj

kunj smiled - Hey preet kesi ho

preet - me to thik hu tum kese ho... tumhe pta h meine tumhe kitna miss kia

kunj coughed - Huh? what?? i.. i mean why,??

preet - Aree tum mere kitne ache dost ho miss kess ni karungi

kunj - Ohh hehehe wese luv kaha h dikh ni ra

preet - kunj.. me yha hu or tumhe us stupid luv ki pari h ...

luv came - oye bandariya zaban smbhal k baat kar.... stupid kisko bola be

preet angrily - tu? bandariya kisko bola

luv - oye kunj lgta h iske ankh or kan dono khrb hogye h .. yha pe isk elawa or kon h jo bandar jese dikhta h

preet - what?? me!! u...

love - kia tu jo tariffo k pull bmdh ri thi uska kia ..

kunj chuckled - okay okay gyzz relax lado mat ab or love kha tha tu yr

Love - Are kia yr me vo ye kharidne gye tha showing a Rose

kunj - ye??

love - abe kal valentines h na to meine rose choclate teddy ssb kharodlia...

kunj - wah beta kisk liye

love - are vo h na humari doc twinkle

kunj widen hus eyes

love sheepishly - bari achi lgty h yr

kunj - doc Twinkl?? abe soch k bol ra h na kia bol ra h

love - to kia.. ye she is so hot

preet - ha itni hot h ki smne jate he tum pighal jata h or bolty kuch niklty ni h

love offended - oye chup kar haa ! kal me boldunga use ki i like her

kunj felt a pang of jealousy in him

kunj - tu.. kal he boldega

love - are obviously kal .. raat ko hum sab valentine's celebrate krne jaenge humare frnd k pub  me ..

kunj - nhi me .. vo mere patients h

preet - common kunj ek din manage hota h chlo na chlte h

kunj - are par mujhe khk kia hoga vo bhi to ni manegi na

preet - uff uski zimmedari meri ...  

kunj tens but agreed ..

Otherhand Harsh and Sanyukta entered inside hospital...

All staff greeted them..

Harsh sighs - itz good to be at home

sanyukta sighs - Ye hospital tumhare liye ghar se kuch kam ni h na

harsh smiled - bilkul ni.. infact ghar se barke h .. yahi to ek jgh h jaha me sabse zyada khush rehta hu apne patients k sath

sanyukta sighs - Khush rehte ho ya apni problems se khudko dur krk rkhte ho.. khudko uljhaye rkhtr ho taki koi esi yaad na aa jay jo tumhe prblm de

harsh stiff - esa kuch ni h... sanyukta and beside u might have forgotten u hav an important surgery today so i think u should check on ut patients ..

saying harsh left sanyukta sighs 

otherhand...

Kabir was in a call and nurse was passing by in her hand she wss holding all surgery equipments... n she dashed with kabir...  and kabir's hand got cut

Kabir - Oouch..!

nurse tensed - S..sorry sir m so sorry... 

but before kabir could say anything kunj was there he hold his hand tensed - O shit apko to khun nikal ra h...

kunj made him sit - Oh god...  sister plz first aid kit leke ao... 

kabir coldly - No.. choty si chot h thik hojaegi

kunj - will u plz shut up! and let me do my work... agar infection hogya na to lene k dene parjaenge... 

kabir irritated - tumhe ekbar me baat

kunj cuts - Apko ekbar me baat samaj ni aty kia jab me keh ra hu ki frst aid krna zarury h to mtlb h...

kabir mum

nurse bring the first aid.. kunj took it and started cleaning his wound..

kunj carefully - Dard hua to batana haa? i will try ti be careful...

Kabir sadly - Dard to ho ra h ...

kunj tensed - Kaha?? i.. i was so careful

Kabir sadly - Kuch chot esw bhi hote h kunj... jo dikhte ni h lekin dard bht dete h.... 

saying kabir left leavinv kunj confused

kunj - inhe kia hua h kyu ese ajib si behave kr re h..

kabir thinks - Kash tu mere dard ko samaj pata kunj.. kash!!!

While Time passes a bit

kunj went to his home and the first thing click his mind was to see ayu once...

kunj was about to go he heard some sounds from kitchen...

kunj thought to check upon once..  n went there and the scene jzz scared him..

Ayu was holding a knife... and gazing at it... 

kunj scared his instinct jzz scared him

kunj rushed there and snatched the knife from him - Ayuu!!! kia krne jaa ra tha tu ... (shouted in fear),

Ayu - bhai?

kunj scared checkibg his hand - tu.. thik h??

Ayu - bhai .. bhai relax me thik hu

kunj - To tu yha is knife k sath kia kr ra tha... 

Ayu sighs - bhai mujhe bhuk lgi thi...   fai or mumma ghr me ni h to meine socha apple he katke kha lu .. but ye knife dekho na sharp he ni h kia faltu sa knife h.... cut he ni ra (pouts)

kunj jzz have a sigh of relief and jzz hug him tightly.. his heartbeat rosw when he saw him again with that knife...

ayu - Bhai... i promised u right.. that i won't do any stupidity again..  to ap kyu dar jate ho...

kunj murmurs - tu ni smj skta ayu...  jab meine tujhe wese us halat me dekha tha mujhpe kia bity thi.. i cant even ..

Ayu - ssshh... ap he khte ho na bad memories ko jala deni chahiye to ap kyu paal re ho...  jzz frgt all those thing bhai and lets focus on our bright future...

Kunj sighs and then he jzz cutted the apple and gave it to him

kunj concern - ainda ese kitchen me ane ki zarurat ni h tujhe ata ni h kuch bhi... chot lga lega khudko..  so plz

ayu - haa vo to h... wese bhai kitne din hogye apke hath ka kuch ni khaya...

kunj gave a look..

Ayu pouts - okay i know u r tired..  sunday ko to bna he sakte ho... 

saying ayu was about to go

kunj - Kia khayega....

Ayu turned excited - what...

kunj smiled - jaldi bol... so that i can make it.. ab biryani mt bolna..usme bht time lgta h

Ayu - Are bhai ap kuch bhi bna do snacks..  

kunj - jo hukum mere aka

Ayu giggles

kunj - chl me fresh hoke ata hu fir um.. kia bnate h..  kuch sochtr h

While kunj fresh n up and came

Kunj - Kia bnaye soch

Ayu also thinks then both screamed - MOONGDAL k pakore!!

otherhand

Kabir was sitting near a bench gazing at thr moon..

suddenly muskan came.. n sat beside him

muskan smile - Hey

kabir - Oh hi Muskann..  tum yha

muskan - Ab kia kre tum jo esw muh bnake bethe ho itne din se acha thori na lgta h

Kabir sighs - iyz nothing like that ..

muskan - tumhe kunj se baat bhi ni karni confront bhi ni krna n andar he andar kurna h ye kia baat hui ...

kabir - muskan let it be na pls.. i dont wana talk about it

Muskan - okay but kal hum jaa re h na

kabir - kha ..

muskan - Are love ne bola na sabko raat me hum club jaenge valentine's manane

kabir - meinr abhi tk kuch socha ni

muskan pouts - kia yr akhru humesh ukhre rehte ho.. kha sundar gf bethi ho usk sath thora baat kro time spend karo but ni bas akar k bethna h

kabir - acha? or jab ne time mangts hu tab to tumhare pas time ni hota..

muskan - but jsb mere pas hota h na tb me aty hu ese time waste ni krty.. and tumhara sad mud thik krne k liye bhi kuch layi hu

Kabir - kia

muskan took out frok her tiffin box

kabir smelled it n happily - moongdal k pakore ??

muskan - haa janty thi ise dekh k chehre pe smile aa he jaegi...

kabir smiled..

muskan - Ab muh he dkhte rahoge ya khaoge bhi..u know what ne he khilaty hu...

Muskan then fed him ..while kabir also fed her but both were having a good time... 

musksn - kesa bna h

kabir - itz awesome..

otherhand

Ayuuu - yummmm bhai apke hatho me na jadu h.... ap doctory chork cook kyu ni bn jate

kunj - ha taki tere farmaishe puri kr saku h na

Ayu - ha to isme kia h . eklauta bhai hu me apka... mere farmaish ni puri karoge to kiski karoge

kunj stiff .. he think about kabir

kunj thinks - eklauts ni h. tu ayu humare ek or bhai bhi h .  par pta ni ye sachai me tujhe kbhi bata paunga ya ni....  

Next day...

in hospital..

kunj musksn love and twinkle were stanfing love and preet were excited

Preet - O ji aj raat 8 bje hum sab club me mil re h pkka h na

Muskan excited - m to super excited..

kabir roll his eyes

love - oye kabir esa kia mug bna rs h are aj valentine day h yr pyaar ka din.. 

kabir - ye sab bkwas h pyaar ka koi khas day ni hota... pyaar hum jisse krte h use har din pyar krenge.. ye spcisl ekdin se kis hojata h

twinkl - i agree faltu ki chize bas..

kunj - Pyaar hum har roz krenge i agree but saal me koi ek din to hona chahiye jisdin hum apne prtner k liye khas bna sake...  jwse birthdays or anniversaries hoty h wese he lovers k liyr ye din hota h to feel special...

muskan - rehne do kunj ye in logo k palle ni parega... palle parega to bas akar...

Twinkl - baat vo ni h... dean ki kia bolenge... hum sab 8 bje jma chahte h... valentine's prty me.. or tumhe lgta h dean jne denge??

Al grew tensed...

harsh came there - kyu ni jane denge

they shock n turned..

harsh chuckled - tum sab young generstion k ho n i know what this day means to u...  to dont wruy u can go... but ya apne phones on rkhna agar koi emergency hui to we need to call u right

muskan excited - omg dean u r the best... 

kunj ans kabir shocked

harsh - ab tum dono ko kia hogya...  ese kia dekh re ho mujhe.. jna ni h kia? ya koi duty assign karu...

kunj n kabir immidiately nodded in no and all rushed ..

harsh chuckled..   - pagal h sare k sare...

harsh turn to see sanyukta there

sanyukta - tumne itne sare doctors ko ek sath jne de dia?? n harsh tum kbse inssb me beleiv krne lge itni liberty dene lge

harsh sighs - Sanyukta kuch ghnto ki to baat h ek raat baki k doctors smbhal skte h .. n ye log bacche h abhi to umar h na inki

sanyukta - or baki k doctors agar is chiz se offend huye to.... kyuki in 6 logo k liye alag rule to set ni hosakta na 

Harsh sighs - sanyukta u r taking everything too seriously... 

sanyukta - and i think u r taking everything too lightly specially jab se doc kunj aya h . tum apne he rules tor re ho..  uski har befizool baato ko man re ho.... usne ek application dia tha baccho k liye alag se ek special room hona chahiye jha vo thora enjoy kr sake and u accepted it?? why??

harsh - Agar hum apne vip patients k liye unk hisab se chnges kr skte h to unk liye kyy ni.. doc kunj ki demand mujhe jaes lagi to i accepted itz no big deal... agar koi aur doctor bhi esa koi fruitful proposal leke ayegs to me accpt krunga.   

harsh left..

sanyukta sighs - tum badal re ho harsh n tumhe khud bhi smj ni ara tum kitna badal re ho...

Otherhand

Kunj twinkle kabir muskan love preet all reached in the club..

love excited - oy hoy hoy finally ... hum aj party kr payenge...

love sheepishly - And twinkle ji thank u for accepting my offer... of coming

Twinkle jzz nodded ..  while kunj frowns...

preet - oye kunj..  tum udhar kia kr re ho chlo chlo andar chlte h.. 

preet hold kunj's hand and take him while love and twinkle also entered...  kabir and muskan too...

love - o ji ye na mumbai k the best club h...

twinkle - acha??

love - or meine suna h ap to India me rehte bhi ni tha to meine socha kyu na apko dikha du . 

twinkl smile - thtz so sweet of u love.. 

love blushed a bit .

on the otherhand

kunj was looking at all these n thinks - love se kitne ache se baat kar ri h jabki jab me use ache se baat krta tha tb to kitna chirty thi... ap bhi chirty h .. but wait why n i thinking all these

otherhand

kabir - Muskan... lets go there in shor sharabo se dur we will enjoy our time

musksn - finally.. tumje suja to kuch... warna me soch ri thi abhi unk pas he chli jau

kabir - o plz me itna bhi boring ni hu jitna tum smjty ho mujhe

kabir and musksn left..

otherhand..

Love was talking with twinkle while kunj with preet..

twinkke thinks - Ye kunj ko kia hua ab preet se ajkl kuch zyada he close ho ra h...

preet - kunj chlo na dande krte h...

kunj - umm ya sure..  .
otherhand

love sheepishly - twinkle will u dance with me..

Twinkle - umm actually m not so good in dance

love - Aree to konsa hume compete kr na h baki me hu na.. vo dkho preet or kunj bhi to kr re h....

Twinkl sighs and nodded both went to dance floor..   

it was a prtner chnging dance and after every song they were twirling n then it was turn of kunj n twinkle...

both were startled.. .. for a bit..

kunj then hold her waist.. twinkle felt a goosebump in her skin

twinkl thinks - mujhe itna ajib kyu feel ho ra h.. 

kunj and twinkle started dancing..

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun
Zindagi ki shaakh se lun
Kuch haseen pal main chun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun

Oh seyo leyo sama leyo
Seyo leyo aa…
Oh seyo leyo sama leyo
Seyo leyo aa…

kunj thinks - Mujhe ab itna acha kyu lg ra h itne time se ek ajib si restlesnes thi jo abhi ota ni kha chli gyi h.. m liking the way twinkl is there with me ..

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun
Zindagi ki shaakh se lun
Kuch haseen pal main chun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun

twinkl look at his choclate brown eyes which was so beautiful ... she jzz noticed today she felt like...

twinkl thinks - ye  kesi feeling h or itni ajib kyu h... mujhe kunj k pass ese dance krna acha kyu lgra h

Jo bhi jitne pal jeeyun
Unhe tere sang jeeyun
Jo bhi kal ho ab mera
Usse tere sang jeeyun
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon
Unhe tere sang bahroon
Chaahe jo ho raasta
Usse tere sang chaloon

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun

Mujhko de tu mit jaane
Ab khud se de mil jaane
Kyun hai yeh itna faasla
Lamhe yeh phir na aane
Inko tu na de jaane
Tu mujhpe khud ko de luta

Tujhe tujhse tod loon
Kahin khud se jod loon
Mere jismojaan pe aa
Teri khushboo odh loon
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon
Unhe tere sang bharoon
Chaahe jo ho raasta
Use tere sang chaloon

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun

Baahon mein de bas jaane
Seene mein de chup jaane
Tujh bhin main jaaoon toh kahaan
Tujhse hai mujhko paane
Yaadon ke woh nazraane
Ik jinpe hak ho bas mera

Teri yaadein mein rahoon
Tere khwaabon mein jagoon
Mujhe dhoonde jab koi
Teri aankhon mein miloon
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon
Unhe tere sang bharoon
Chaahe jo ho raasta
Usse tere sang chaloon

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun…

Kunj and twinkle were so lost in each othrr that they didnt realise that it wss only them dancing.. and sound of claps broke them apart..

host - Wao wao.. wao mtlb ise khte h true love ... music ruk gyi lekin inki nazre ek dusre se ni haty...  lgta h bht pyaar h ap dono me...

kunj and twinkl emberass

twinkle - no.. no.. itz nothing like that we r jzz frndz

kunj - ya hun to bas ese he

while love n preet standing there like lost puppy

preet - oye love kia humara no kbhi ni lgega dekhna vo dobo kitna acha complement kr re h ek dusre ko

love - ha pr bola na dost h muh zara bnd rkh tu chudail!!

host - really ap dono coupl ni ho common i dont beleive this

twinkl - are sach me... n beside i dont beleiv in love... n agr kbhi hua bhi to ek sensibl ldke se hoga

kunj offended - excuse me tum khna kia chahty ho.. ki me sensible ni hu??

twinkl - isms bolna kia h tum ni ho.. to nj ho

kunj - o hello to tum konsa gyan ki devi ho.. tumhm bhi to heartless ho

twinkl - ee listen dont utter rubbish m warning u

Kunj - me to yhi karunga kia karogi batao...

twinkle angrily - dekha shuru hogyi na tumhari bkeas me tbhi ni ana chahty

kunj - really lg to ni ra tha .. and plz ha ye akarna bnd kro tumhare akar se tng aa chuka hu me

twinkl - or me tumhari bkwas se jb dkho irritate krte ho..

twinkle left otherside while kunj left other side

while love n preet - ye ab indono ka alag he masla h...  2 mint ache se bast krte ni h ki inki ladaia shuru hojaty h

precap :- Some more bickering of twinj... some fun.. and then some problems

Target :- 75+ votes

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