Barrister Babu - Love or Revo...

By __SabMayaHai__

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Jaisa Loha lohe ko kaatta hai Waise hi uss Daur mein Ek pratha Dusri Pratha ko tod rahi thi... Prathaon ke B... More

Prolouge
Going To Her New Home
A/N
Heartbroken
Outburst
New Beginning
They Came Face To Face
A/N
Some Alone Time!
Tum Theek Ho?
Back To Haveli
Pehela Tyohaar Ya Pehela Vaar? (1)
Pehela Tyohaar Ya Pehela Vaar (2)
Tum Yahan Kya Kar Rahi Thi?
Woh Mere Pati Hain!
Waise Tumne/Aapne Mujhe Maaf Kiya?
Yeh Meri Patni Hai.
Family time / Alone time .
Bewajah!
promo!
Himmat.
Kismat yaa Saazish
Saazishein
Maaf Kar Do Naa.
kyun kiya?
Promo (II)
Adhikaar.
Pehela Din.
Badlaav.
Care
Vanvaas.
Prem
Close yet Far.
One Last Time.
Promo(III)
Kyun
Dukh Bhara Samah.
Calmness before Storm.
Saiyam
Kon?
Promo(IV)
Vaada.
Fanfic Awards 2021
Nayi Shuruwaat.
Mulakaat(1).
Mulakaat (2)
Anokhi Holi.
Aawaaz.
Dard (1)
Dard (2).
Virah
Das Baadi[character sketch + Arrival]
Glimpses of 10 years.
And They Met but...
promo
Promo.
Majboori.
Promo.
Promo
Sachai - 1
Sachai - 2.
Sachai - 3.
Promo
Vivaah.
Upcoming Track.
Lost.
Acceptance.
Promo
Lafzon ka Yeh Rishta Nahi.
Ashiyaanaa.
Promo
8 Year's Later - Apharan.
Promo.
Helplessness.
A Promise.
Rescued.
Returned To Home.
Old Relations.
Vivaah Sampan.
Grihepravesh & Aftermath.
Study Romance
Two Souls United For Forever.
Maa
promo.
Attacked yet Happy.
Little Outburst/Insecurity
Together Forever.
Bonus Chapter 1 : Ashiyana.
Bonus Chapter 2 : History Repeats.
♡ Reviews ♡
A/N
Promo
New Book
A/N
Promo
New Book

Maa

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By __SabMayaHai__

After entering into the village Devipur  Bondita couldn't control her excitement. Every five mins she was asking som how much time is there to reach her house. Somnath being irritated by constant questions said

Somnath - Boudi! Agar aap baar baar puchegi toh mein Gaadi chala ne mein Dhyaan kaise doon! Baar baar ek hi sawaal puch rhe ho! Agar aisa kiya na toh mein Gaadi ghumake wapas Tulsipur ke liye nikal jaunga. Samjhe!

Bondita made a face. Naina laughed aloud seeing her while Anirudh just rolled his eyes and chuckled.

After 5 mins,

Somnath - lo pahunch gye!

Bondita who was excited couldn't wait more and ran to her house. She was about to enter into the house when maami shouted

Maami - Ohh Kaali Maa! Bondita tujh mein zara si bhi tameez nhi hi na! Jamai babu ghar mein aaye nhi ki tu chali maa se milne! Pehele jamai babu ko aane de, aadar satkar karne de phir jo karna hai karna. Aur waise bhi teri maa toh vidhwa hai, toh vidhwa kisi bhi rasam mein bhaag nahi Lete.

Bondita - koi le yaa na le, meri maa zaroor legi! Aur rhi baat apke jamai babu ki toh woh wahan Gaadi ke paas khade hai jaiyiye, jo karna hai kariye. Mein chali maa se milne.

Bondita was about to enter when Maami dragged her to the car and made her stand beside Anirudh. Aniruddh was back facing her and Bondita stood there giving stern look to Maama Maami. Anirudh when turned was confused to see Bondita there. He asked

Anirudh - Tum yahan?

Bondita - peeche dekhiye!

Anirudh was shocked to see Maama standing there with a garland and Maami with Aarti thaal.

Anirudh - yeh sab kya hai?

Maama- woh jamai jab peheli baar vivah ke baad ghar aate hai toh unka aadar satkar karna rasam hai humara dharm.

Anirudh  was about to protest when Maami started doing  arti and Mama put the garland around Anirudha neck. Anirudh was irritated by this. Not because of the rasam but because of fake behaviour of Maama and Maami.

Bondita who saw this garland in Anirudhs neck, couldn't help but ask - sirf aapke jamai babu ke liye Yeh phoolon ki mala laye hai? Mere liye kyun nhi?

Maami - Bondita tu pagal ho gyi hai kya? Jamai ka pad tere se aur hum sab se upar reheta hai! Unka aadar satkar karna humara dharm hai!

Bondita - par Jab vivaah hota hai toh yeh kaha jaata hai ki Pati Patni ek dusre se alag nhi hote! Ek samaan hote hai! Toh jab vivaah ke samay yeh kaha jaata hai ki woh dono ek hai toh rasmon ke samay alag kyun?

Maami - Haan bhale hi vivaah ke samay kaha gya ho ki pati patni ek samaan hote hai par vivah ke baad sab badal jaata hai! Patni humesha pati ke piche chalti hai! Pati jo kahe woh karn padta hai, chahe woh galat ho yaa sahi! Pati se koi tark kutark karnaa bhi paap hota hai, nazren mila ke baat karna bhi paap hota hai! Humesha nazren jhuki honi chahiye patni ki pati ke samne!

Bondita - mein yeh sab nhi maanti! Bhala jab bhagwaan ne sab Aurton ko bachon ko, aadmiyon aur ladkon ko ek samaan banaya hai toh ladke aage badhte jayein aur Ladkiyaan piche rahein? Yeh kyun? Aap aurat hoke yeh sab sochti hai? Log kehete hai aadmi aurat ko apne kadmon ke niche daaba ke rakhte hai par dekha jaye toh aadmi ki galti nhi hai kyun ki auratein  pairon tale isliye dabi rehti hai kyunki hum auratein un aadmiyon ko dabane dete hai, agar hum log unki soch ko badal denge toh hum Aurton ko bhi unke adhikar mil jayenge.

By now all the villagers had come to see Roy Choudhary's son and his wife. They had come to welcome them but they were shocked to hear what Bondita said. They started whispering among themselves. One of the women started to taunt.

Woman 1 - bondita, tu yahan jab devipur mein rehti thi toh bhi tark karti thi aur vivah ke baad bhi karti ho? Sharam nhi aati tumhe? Yahi sikhya hai kya sumati behen ne tumhe? Haan?

Woman 2 - aree aree usha behen, Kaahan aap sumati behen ko ghasit rhi hai? Isme unki kya galti? Galti toh iske baaba ki hai! Jo unke raghon ka khoon isme dodta hai! Pata nhi kya paap kiya usne ki woh yeh duniya chod chala gya aur maa beti ko inke maama maami pe thop ke chala gya!Iske baba aur Maa ne toh prem vivah kiya hai ussi ka nateeja hai Yeh sab. Woh toh barri----

Bondita with anger - Bas, bohot hua! Aap logon ki himmat kaise hui mere Baba ke baare mein aisa bolne ki? Haan? Unhone aap logon ke liye kitna kuch kiya hai! Bhool gye aap? Haan? Haan mere baba ka khoon mere raghon mein dodta hai, toh, kya aap logon ke zehen mein apke baaba ka khoon nhi dodta? Sirf maa ka khoon dodta hai kya? Nhi naa? Toh phir aap kis hak se keh the hai ki mere andar kiska khoon hai kiska nahi? Aap log hote kon hai? Aur sarita kaki jis aadmi ki aap burai kar rhi hai ussi aadmi ke wajah se aapki beti ka rishta itne ache ghar mein hua hai! Bhool gyi aap? Aur usha kaki, aap ke pati ke jo gandi se gandi aadatein thi na woh bhi mere baba ke wajah se chooti hai warna aaj aap itni sukhi nhi hoti? Bhooli nhi hongi na aap? Aur kisi ko mere baaba ke upar lanchan lagana hai toh lagayiye lekin lagaane se pehele te zaroor sochiyega ki unhone aap logon ke liye kya kya kiya hai! Aur agar mere maa baba ne prem vivah kiya hai toh kya hua? Usse apko kya? Unki marzi woh jo karein? Aap log kon hote hai kuch kehene waale.
AB aap log jayege yaa sabko ek ek karke ghar par chod ke aaun?

All the villagers were embarrassed and started to leave quietly one by one. Maami was shocked to see Bondita like this. She freaked out when bondita called her out.

Bondita with gritting her teeth--Maami agar aapki aarti khatam ho gyi ho toh hum andar aa skate hai kya?

Maami, frightened - Haan... Haan aana andar. Aayiye na jamai babu!

Bondita looked towards Anirudh gave a smile or we can say  a fake smile which Anirudh could easily identify. She left towards her little hut followed by Naina as maami called her to help in the kitchen. Somnath came and kept a hand on Anirudhs shoulder. Anirudh looked towards him and said - Yeh wahi bondita haina jo kuch der pehele Gaadi mein has
Has ke baat kar rhi thi?

Somnath nodded and said - Haan dada, wahi hain! Ab chalein nhi toh bondita ke gusse ka shikar hum dono ko hona padega.

Anirudh nodded and went. As he as going he saw sampurna and  saurav
Coming together laughing at something. He looked at the couple sadly and smiled. Today If he was married to saudamini then he would also be like - - his thoughts came to halt when he heard bonditas maami calling him.

[guys hope you remember when mama was about  to wash Ani's feet he declined doing so, same here it is applied, I am not writing it]

After all the fiasco, Rasams had ended bondita was finally able to meet her mother. Both had a emotional reunion. Both were talking when Anirudh came and said - maa!

Sumati abruptly stood up and turned her face while covering her head. Anirudh stood confused. Bondita was also confused, she asked - Maa kya hua? Aise kyun khadi hogayi?

Sumati-Beta woh jamai babu aaye hain na toh isliye!

Bondita - Haan toh? Konse bhagwaan seedha upar se zamin mein padhare hai jo tu aise khadi hogyi?

Sumati - meri bachi vivah ke baad jamai aur pati dono bhagwaan ke samaan hote hai!

Bondita to Anirudh - mujhe pata nhi tha aap bhagwaan ke swaroop hai!

Anirudh - mujhe khud aaj pata chala!

Bondita - haww! Aap swaroop hai aur aap hi ko nhi pata! Tch tch

Anirudh - aree ajeeb ho tum!

Bondita - so toh mein hoon..

Anirudh - tum na pagal ho!

Bondita - mein pagal hoon? Ap kya hai? Aap bhi pagal hain! Aap na pagalon ke devta hai devta -

Anirudh - aur tum pagalon ki devi! Ab mera dimag mat Khao! Aur muje ashirwaad lene do.

Bondita - Haan toh lijiye, meine kab roka hai? Apki zindagi hai, apko jo karna hai kariye!

Anirudh - Tum na - -

Sumati who was irritated by this conversation between her jamai and daughter shouted - chup ho jaiyiye dono! Kya bacho ki tarah lad rhe hai? Itne bade ho gye ho aur ab bhi bachon ki tarah lad rhe ho! Haan? Jawab dijiye?!

Anirudh and bondita were shocked to see their maa like that. Seeing their shocked faces like that she realised what she did. She just shouted on her devta like jamai! She was ashamed and started to move back and apologising.

Anirudh smiled with his tears and nodded in no . He bent down to take blessings of his maa.

Sumati abruptly moved back and asked - Jamai babu! Yeh aap kya Kar rhe hai! Mera ashirwaad leke mujhe paap ka bhagidaar mat banayiye.

Anirudh still bending down said - paap ka bhagidaar aap mujhe bana dengi maa agar aap mujhe ashirwaad nhi dengi toh! Ashirwaad dijiye na maa! Apne jamai ki Yeh Baat nhi manoge! Mei apki har baat manta hoon na!

Sumati unconvingly said - par jamai babu--

Bondita - ashirwaad dede maa! Zamindar hai bina len den ke kuch nhi karte! Said bondita with a bright smile and some tears in her eyes. She doesn't know why but seeing him cry she also feels to cry.

Sumati reluctantly kept her hand on Anirudhs head and prayed to Maa Durga for his and her daughter happiness. She also asked to maa durga to fulfill all his wishes while Anirudh closed his eyes feeling mother's love after a long time.

Sumati after giving ashirwaad turned away and asked bondita to take Jamai babu outside to have the lunch.

Bondita nodded and said with a smile - aayiye!

Anirudh nodded and came out with her.

All this was noticed with four pairs of eyes.
Som-Naina and Maama Maami.

Maama left from there with a little smile on his face when he saw the scenario but Maami was gritting her teeth in anger. She left from there cursing her daughters fate.

On the other hand,

Som with tears - dekha maa humare paas nhi hai, hume chod ke chali gyi par bondita ne kami bhi puri kardi Hume sumati maa jaisi maa deke. Agar aaj meri maa bhi hoti na toh bilkul sumati maa jaisi hoti.

Naina with a sad smile- Mujhe Yeh toh nhi pata ki aapki maa kaisi thi par itna zarur kahungi jaisi bhi hongi bohot dayalu aur saaf dil ki hongi varna aaj kal kon apni Saas ko itna mahatva deta hai, apni maa ka darjana deta hai. Meri bhi maa nhi hai par sumati maa ne meri woh kami puri kardi thi. Apko pata hai sumati maa ne hum teeno mein yaaniki  bondita sampoorna aur mujhe mein kabhi antar nhi kiya. Humesha ek samaan pyaar aur sneh diya hai.

Somnath - jaanta hoon! Sumati maa ne toh mujhe bhi apna beta maana hai! Unhone kabhi dikhaya nhi par unko awaaz se aur unko vyavaar se pata chalta hai ki unka dil kitna saaf hai par sirf in mama mami ke wajah se... He clenched his hand in anger.

Naina kept her hand on his shoulder and said - shaant ho jaiyiye! Apka gussa apki jagah sahi hai! Agar abhi aapne kuch bhi aisa waisa kiya toh maa ko takleef hogi aur aap Yeh toh nhi chahenge na ki maa ko takleef ho? Hm?

Som after calming down a bit - Haan!

Naina heard Mami calling her. She gave  look to Som and was about to leave when som held her hand and said - dhanyavaad.

Naina with confusion- kyun?

Som - mujhe sambhalne ke liye!

Naina - apka aur mera dard alag nhi hai! Mushkil Waqt pe mein humesha aapke Saath rahungi! Yeh mera yaani ki Naina Bhattacharya ka vaada hai!

Som - aisa kyun bhala?

Naina-ab woh meri marzi! Mera hath chodiye mujhe jaana hai mami bula rhi hai aur baba ko bhi meri zaroorat hogi.

Som-Haan toh jao, meine kab tumhara haath pakda hai.

Naina- Acha? Niche dekhiye zara!

Som saw that he was actually holding her hand. His ears turned little red and he left her hand abruptly. Naina left from there smiling. Som saw her and said to himself - pagal ladki! And smiled to himself.

He also left from there to the work he was here for. To meet the business officials for his babas factory.

Outside the house he saw bondita and sampoorna talking and Saurav  Anirudh to each other . He smiled to himself and said - sab dheere dheere theek ho jayega. He left from there with car after informing them.

After sometime Som had also returned from the work. Naina had already left for her home.
Maami called out Som, Anirudh And Saurav to freshen up as the food was ready to serve. They went away together talking and returned after changing into comfortable clothes.

When they sat for their lunch, bondita couldn't help but ask Maami - Maami aapne khaane mein kuch milaya toh nhi hai na?

Mami with wide eyes - pagal ho gyi hai kya tu bondita? Mein bhala kyun kuch milaungi kuch khaane mein?

Bondita - Acha aisa hai kya? Nhi mujhe laga ki vivah wale din aapne Uss kheer mein kuch mil diya tha tabhi toh kheer khate hi mein behosh ho gyi thi!

Maami started to look here and there while our trio Saurav, Anirudh and Somnath smirked. Sampoorna being naive said - aisa kyun keh rhi hai tu bondita! Bhala maa aisa kyun karegi?

Bondita - ab didi, Maami kya kar sakti hai aur kya nhi yeh Hum sabko pata hai! Khair Jaane de, chal him imlie tod ke khate hai.

Sampoorna nodded and as they were about to leave Maami stopped them and asked to serve their husbands and devar. Bondita was about to protest when she saw her mother from the window. She was pleading with her eyes to do so. She sighed and nodded. She cannot see her mother pleading.

Both were done with serving when a little girl cam and said something in bonditas ears and ran away.

Bondita with wide eyes and shocked face  looked towards sampoorna and took her hand. He slided the bangles and was shocked to see print of fingers on it. She angrily looked towards Saurav.

All the people looked at her confusingly while sampoorna understood what she was thinking. Before she could stop, bondita blurted out- Saurav Dada, aapne didi ke upar haath uthaya?

Anirudh and others - kya?

Sampoorna face palmed.

Hello jaanas,
Here is the update.
A pretty  long one but I hope you will like it. Comment down ur views and also vote guys.
Also tell me the scenes u guys want.
Acha tell me honestly did u like the previous update!?
If yes then okay if not then also okay but just comment the part u didn't like I will be super happy to rectify my mistake.

Also as we know saurav considered bondita as his sister, so here bondita will be calling him Dada instead of jamai babu. Okay?

Okay enjoy the chapter while I write another one for you.

Okay now
Byee❤️❤️

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