Narration
"Talking"
(Thinking)
{Coversation in another plane}
*Sounds*
/ interruption
Bijuu
jutsus
Today was the worst day of the year for Naruto,the day that the Yondaime Hokage killed the Kyubi, and also his birthday, the 10th of october. It was his 6th anniversary and just as usual he recived nothing but hate that day. It was around half past nine and the unnoficial Yondaime's revange hunt was being held in the streets of Konoha."Get him!"
"Don't let him escape this time!"
"Quiet! You don't want to alert any ANBU!" The hunters shouted while chasing Naruto in the dark alleys of Konoha.
"JIJI!!!" The little Naruto screams while trying to avoid the rocks , bottles, shurikens and kunnais been throwed at him.
Meanwhile at the Hokage's office...
"What do you mean you don't know where Naruto is ?!!" The sandaime shouted at an poor ANBU.
"I don't know.The squad signed to protect him stopped giving news for about half an hour."
"Kami,what a time I had chose to break my crystal ball, again..."The old man complained"I want every shinobi looking for him right now! And I mean EVERY shinobi!"
"Yes Hokage-sama!"
"I guess I will go as well."(When it comes to Naruto I don't even know who to trust).
Back to Naruto...
In a dark alley of Konoha a shuriken slashed Naruto's calf making him fell to the ground.
"Hahaha I got him!"
"JIJI!!!"Naruto cried while the mob went towards him."JIJI!!!JI/
"No,no,no the third hokage won't save you this time.I don't know why he keeps you alive, but we know his wrong about it, so we are going to correct his mistakes."
"Yeah!"The mob shouted.
Naruto was throwed to the ground, passing out in the process , he was stepped and kick by every member of the mob ,who had around fifty people.
The mob was about to kill him when the third Hokage appered along said his ANBU, making the mob run away like cowards.
"Oh poor Naruto.Take him to the hospital as fast as you can!"Hiruzen ordered
"Hai Hokage-sama"said an ANBU.
Naruto arrived at the hospital on a matter of seconds and was put on th emergency room.
Meanwhile ????...
Naruto woke up in the middle of a sewer confused and scared."Where m'I?"Naruto asked him self.
"Kit!"An mysterious voice said"So we finnaly met."
"Who said that?"The 6th year's old looked around only to find an gigant cell right behind him. He then paid a little more attention to the cell"Ky-ky-kyubi?"The blond stutter
"Yes kit it is I the great Kyubi no kitsune!The strongest Bijuu,the favorite son of the old man!"
"m'm'm'I in hell?No this can't be!I I I want Jiji!"he cryied
"STOP CRYING!YOU ANNOYING!"The great Kyubi demanded. Naruto on the other hand did the opposite and started to cry even more."COME HERE!"The Kyubi shouted while stretching his arm between the bars that confined him and trying to grab little Naruto. After afew trys he finnaly grabs him and then the strongest bijju felt something."Hey kit why your chakra is so familiar.It kind remindes me off Jiji".The Fox frozze for a second
"Do you known Jiji?"
"I'm not reffering to your old man,I'm referring to mine."
"Do you have a Jiji too?"Naruto forgot that he was talking to the Kyubi
"Yes and No.Hes gone now."
"But how? You are the demon that attacked the village how can you had a Jiji?"
"This is what they told you?What about that Madara wannabe that was controlling me?"
"Madara wannabe? Wait you were being controlled?"Naruto asked as that was news for him
"Yes. Now kit come here I want to check something."
"No you are going to eat my soul!" Naruto recorded with who he was talking
"I don't eat souls kit! Old man, what kind of stuff are they telling about me in the outside?Kit I'm not evil. So come on I will not eat your soul it's a promise."The kyubi stretched his arm to outside off his cell making a fist"Bump it".
"O-ok."-Naruto did as he was told.
"No it can't be!"
"Wh-what is it?"
"Yo-you are the old man!"
"What?"The blond was extremelly confused.
"Nothing.Let's just say you are(was) someone important to me".
"Of course I'm! I'm going to be the next Hokage! And that way be respected by everyone in the village!Ttebayo!"Naruto didn't lose a chance to shouted out loud his dream
(His just like the old man)"Kit I'm going to help you with your dream."
"Really?!!"
"Yes do you want to start now?"
"Yes!!!But can I ask a question first?"
"Yes."
"Where are we?"
"Well we are in your mind right now.And now your body is in the hospital."
"Wait what?"Naruto was confused again
"Yes we are in an hospital don't you remeber that mob chasing you?"
"Oh Yes I remember,but if we are in my mind why are you here?"
"I'm sealed inside you."
"So that's why people hate me! I always thought that I was you back from the dead or something."
"Yeah,humans are dump.Now kit I'm gonna train you in some theoetical stuff and chakra control,since we can't do anything with your physical."
"Kyubi sensei ,Why??!!"Naruto cried as he hated theorical stuff
"Because you are in an coma right now.And also call me Kurama-sensei."
"Coma?"
"Yes you were attacked by that mob."
"Oh right.What happened to then?"
"The third hokage saved you."
"Jiji."Naruto happy that his Jiji saved him
"Now let's start,kit."
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one week later ...
"I have bad new's kit."
"What bad news?"
"Well we are about to wake up and you still have a horrible chakra control.Your golden chakra is just to potent.One unit of you chakra is equal to ten hundread of regular chakra."
"Man..."
"Relax kit , I have an idea.You are going to be using mine from now on.But for that you will need to remove the seal."
"But don't we need a key?"
"Yes but I have a plan."
"Ok"Naruto went to remove the seal and in the exact moment he touch it his hand was grabed.
"What you thing you doing?"said a mysterious man
"Fourth Hokage?!"Naruto was in shock for getting to know his idol in spirit or chakra.
"Yes Naruto , now can you explain me why you were about to remove the seal?"the Yondaime asked a little serious
"Kurama sensei told me to do it."Naruto said as it was the most common thing in the world
"Kurama sensei? Do you mean the kyubi?"Minato was confused
"Yes."
"Listen up son/
"Son?"Naruto didn't know this expression
"Yes, I'm your father didn't you know?"Naruto's dad said
"You are my dad?!"Naruto was in shock he was the son of his heroe and idol
"Yes, didn't the old man Hiruzen told ya?"
"No he only told me that my parents died when Kurama attacked."
"Well, he may had had his reasons not do it. Anyway. Son why were you about to release the Kyubi?"Minatto went back to main topic
"Beacuse Kurama sensei told me that my chakra is just to strong and I should use his instead."
"Your chakra is stronger then the Kyubi's?"Minato was confused
"Kurama.And yes."Naruto corrected his father
"Naruto, that's impossible. What color is your chakra? Because Purple is the strongest chakra color that has being registred. And its much weaker then the red one of the bijjus."
"Gold."
"Gold? But the only one who had that chakra color was..."Minato recorded something
"Minato no Baka sorry to interrupt but we are running out of time and we kind need a key for the seal."
"No."Minato didn't thrusted the Kyubi
"Minato this kit has horrible chakra control, he can only use a minimun of ten hundred unitys at a time and one unit of his is equivalenty to ten hundred unit.So unless you want hin to explode the village trying to make a bushing you better give us the key."
"Sorry but I don't have enough time or chakra to make a key."
"Man..."
"But I have an idea ask for your godfather Jiraya to give you the key."Minato said after he thought that he didn't wanted the village gone
"Godfather?"
"Jiraya. Don't you live with him?"Minato was confused
"No."
"That old pervert!I'm going to kill him when he dies."Threatened to kill a person after it's death"So anyway ask to the third to bring Jiraya and give you the key and say that it is a direct order from your father the forth Hokage."Minato said before disappered
Naruto woke up...
"Dad..."Naruto was confused he thought he was in the hospital but he surrounded by lot's off paper.
"Naruto!"A voice in the middle of the piles of paper spoke.
"Jiji?"Naruto was happy to see his Jiji
"Naruto are you all right?"The old man was worried
"Yes Jiji. And why there's lots of paper in here?"
"Well I stayed with you this entire time but a couldn't stop my work as the hokage so I brought the paper work with me."
"Jiji..."Naruto was happy that his Jiji stayed with him the entire time"Well I have something to ask you."
"Anything Naruto."
"Can you bring some one called Jiraya and make him give me the key for my seal?"
"What?How do you know about the seal?And why do you want to open it?"Hiruzen was more confused then ever
"When I was in the coma I met Kurama."
"Kurama?"
"The Kyubi.And he told me that my gold chakra was just to strong and that I should use his instead."the blond said like it was the most normal thing in the world
"Gold chakra?"the sandaime got even more confused
"Yes,and wanna know something even awesome?I met dad!"
"You what?"He got even more confused as he was before
"Yes and I want to know I you didn't told me that I was the son of the forth?"
"Well Naruto this is a Rank-SS secrect."We did it to protect you from the other villages.If they knew that you are his son, they will kill you.So please don't tell anyone."
"Ok Jiji but can you get me the key?Dad said it was an direct order."
"I would reader not but since this is Minato we are talking about...Ok I will bring Jiraya here."Hiruzen said as he realised that he would had to face Minato's and Kushina's wrath in the after life and he wanted to do something to decrease it.
"Uhhoo.Can't wait to meet my godfather!"Naruto shouted all happy
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The next day at the academy...
"Good morning class!" Iruka entered the classroom
"Good morning Iruka sensei!"all the students greeted
"So class today we are going to start chakra propertys. Can someone tell me a Chakra property?"An pink haired girl raised her hand"Yes , Sakura."
"Color."
"Exactly and and does the color of the chakra means?"
"The potency of it."
"Correct again Sakura."
(Cha!Sasuke-kun is impressed with me I'm sure!)
"..."Sasuke
(Ahh Sakura-chan smart as aways)thought Naruto
"So class the chakra colors are, from the weakest to the strongest,blue,green,orange,purple and red"teached Iruka
"But Iruka sensei what about gold chakra?"Naruto wasn't very ggod a at keeping S-rank secrets
"Gold Naruto? There isn't such a think as gold chakra. Now class I have here"Iruka said while taking a strange equipment that looked like a compass."An chakra-compass!"Iruka said all excited"With it we can measure the chakra spectrum of a person.Now who wants to come first."Everyone in the room raised their hands"Sasuke?"Iruka chose the not an Emo yet kid.Sasuke aproched the Chakra compass and the compass indicated the color purple."Wow Sasuke you have the strongest color that a shinobi can have!"Iruka was and wasn't surprised
"Hmp."
*SASUKE!!!!!YOU ARE SO STRONG!!!!!*the fangirls fangirly.
"Ok next Sakura"
(Cha my chance to impress Sasuke-kun,probably gonna get the same color as his!)Sakura approached the compass and the color went to green.
"Good Sakura you got green is the second most commun color, but the most common in medic-nin so you should check a little of medice."
(Cha!)
"Ok next..."Iruka keept calling the students one by one.Most of the students went and got blue and some orange and green."Ok Naruto."Iruka called the blond.Naruto got near the compass before it exploded."Wow!"Iruka for sure was surprised
"NARUTO WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!!!!"Sakura shouted at Naruto
"Relax Sakura is probably a malfunction"(I have no idea why that happend it may be because of the Kyubi)"Ok Naruto you may sit now. Sorry Hinata but we won't be able to check your color.But's is probably purple like the majority off the hyuga clan.Now let's continue the lesson."
{Well there was no way of that compass support gold chakra , it may be a quality one capable of detecting bijuu chakra but, gold chakra is gold chakra.}Kurama told Naruto.
{Yeah I know but I wanted to impress Everyone.Sensei}
{Realax kit you don't need to impress that bunch of weaklings most off then got blue the weakest color.}
"So back to it, the color of chakra mean their potency blue has the lowest potency with one unit having a potency of one. Green of five, orange twenty five , purple fifty and red a hundred."
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One week later...
At the Academy...
"Now the equation for jutsu power is, the general one, is usualy units times potency times the elemetal constant if it is a non elemetal jutsu the constant it's equal to one ,times the mold constant of the jutsu."Iruka said
"What?!"Everyone was like.
"Execuse me Mizuki ,Iruka , but hokage-sama is calling for Naruto."An anbu who dashed into the room said
"What he did now?"Iruka asked
"I don't know."The anbu spoke.
"Naruto you better tell me later."
"Sorry Iruka but I may not be able to tell you is a secret."
"Haha secret.I want to hear it later."
Naruto left the classroom with an smile in his face.
{Hey Kurama-sensei we got the key}
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Hokage's officie
"Jiraya aren't you excited to meet your godson?"Hiruzen asked the other man in the room
"Yes.I'm just concerned about giving him the key."Jiraya said
"Those were orders off the fourth hokage we can't deny it. Or they will kill us in the after life"said Hiruzen"And knowing Minato and Kushina tehy will find a away to do it"
Naruto entered the officie
"Hey Jiji!"Naruto said with a smile
"Hey Naruto how was the academy today?"
"Boring Jiji."
"Just as I imagine.So Naruto this is Jiraya ,your godfather."
"Hey there Naruto.I'm sorry for not staying with you but I have a job to do and I need to go back to it immediately."
"Jiraya are you peeping againg?"Hiruzen asked with an disapointed face
"Yes but I'm not refering to it this time. There's an organization forming and they seen really dangerous.I really need to get more information about then.The only thing I got is their name Akatsuki.So kid let's go."Jiraya was being serious about his work
"What do you mean let's go?"The blond was confused
"Simple kid we can't open the seal here and also I will take this train you into use the Kyuubys Chakra.So come on I'm in a hurry. We are going to train until your graduation in the academy."
"Cool so I will not need to go to the academy any more?!"
"Only for the last month.Now kid let's go."Jiraya said
-"Oh right!Good bye Jiji!I'm really gonna miss you!"
"Good bye to you too Naruto."
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The next morning at the academy...
"So class I've some good and bad news"Iruka was trying not to cry"Naruto won't be with us until the last year of the academy."
"So what's the bad news"Kiba asked jocking.
The entire class laught except for Hinata.
(Oh Naruto...)Hinata thought
"Kiba that's not funny.Naruto is a very important part of the class.So don't joke about it.Understood?"
"Hai"Kiba said with out understanding
"Now the good news is I got a new chakra compass.So please Hinata."Scar nose called the pearl eyes girl
"Oh ok."Hinata aprocched the Chakra compass only to get the same result as Naruto.
"You got to be kind me that was brand new I can't believe it was broke."Iruka was in shock
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A/n:This is my first Naruto fanfic : And this is not an op Naruto one his going to be a little bit better then he was in the OG but only in chakra control because Naruto's training is going to focus on it. So he won't know the rasengan but spoiler he will know the kage bushing earlier.
edit: the text ids.The kurama dialogue . added some stuff and also corrected.
also correcting some mistakes so feel free to tell me any mispells or grammer mistakes english isn't my primary language.
edit 31/03/2021: I rewrote some parts and corrected some spelling mistakes hopefully I got them all.
if you find any spelling mistakes or any mistakes at all please tell me. I will correct them. I didn't corrected them right after because I didn't know who wattpad worked , and I thought that you guys would be notified every time I edited a chap, but apperently not, so please help me if you can. this is valid for all chapters by the way.Also english is not my primary language.
As I said before this is my first fic.And I'm not very good with begginigs but when I get the rythm I really get it.Also at the beginig i didn't had an game plan but now I have one and it will blow your minds.Hope so. I will change a few things in the story mostly in shippuden. But it will mostly follow the canon with a few changes.Thank you all for reading it hope you all enjoy my first Naruto story.