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This is story of an strict ips training Commander and a cute funny and lazy candidate 😜😜 Om as a commander... More

Prologue
Characters
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
want to ask something 😭😶😭😶
Part 7
part 8
Part 9
Part 10
part 11
Part 12
Part 13
announcement🙈
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
New story 🤧
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23
Part 24
Part 25
Part 26
Part 27
Part 29
Part 30
Part 31
Part 32
Part 33
Part 34
Part 35
Part 36
Part 37
Part 38
Part 39
Part 40
Part 41
Part 42
Part 43
IMPORTANT!!
Part 44
Part 45
Part 46
Part 47
IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT!
Part 48
Part 49
Part 50
Epilogue 🥺

Part 28

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Continuation....

Naina: Arre kyunki Omkara hi to uska fiance hai.

All looked at Naina in shock including Rikara.

All except Rikara friends: Kya ? Kab ? Kaise? Kahan? Kyun?

Abhishek (candidate): Mujhe to pehle se shaq tha😏.

Naina: 😶 hehe I was joking.

Payal: 😒Nhi Naina ma'am kabhi jhuth bol hi nhi sakti Kyunki aap hamesha wahi bolti hai jo aapke pet me pachati nhi hai.

All glared at Rikara and Rikara glared at Naina.

Payal: Unko kyun ghoor rahe hain?

Sidhi (candidate): Sir aap ne ham sab se ye baat Kyun chupayi? Gauri tumne bhi. Aap log ham sab ko ignore kar diye.

Om: Aisa Nhi hai...bas koi reason tha.

Gauri: Sorry yaar wo...

Rashmi: Aap log ki laga ki agar future me kbhi bhi Gauri ko trophy ya medal mile to hame ye na lage ki aapne cheating ki hai.

Rohan: Sir ham log aapko aise dikhte hain jo apne dost ki jeet se jale.

Rashmi: Ham log bahot hurt hue Hain😒.

Om: Sorry Mera aisa koi matlb nhi tha bas wo..

Gauri: Maaf kar do please.

All looked at each other: Maaf kiya .

Payal: Par next time se kuch mat chupana. Ham sab family ki tarah Hain aur apni family se koi kuch chupata hai Kya.

Rohan: Future me trophy agar Gauri ko hi milegi to hame koi Shaq nhi hogaa because hame pata ham sabko pata hai ki aap kabhi bhi kisi candidate ke beech me koi discrimination nhi karenge. Aapke Upar hame poora bharosa hai aap jisse bhi trophy ke liye select karenge wo best hoga.

Sidhi: Haan na Omkara sir is best commander aur bahot acche insaan bhi... Gauri tum bahot lucky ho.

Gauri smiled.

Naina in mind: Bach gye.

All were continuously praising om.

Harsh: 😒 Mai to bhikhari hun .

All looked at him: Matlb?

Harsh: 😒 Mai bhi commander hun.

All chuckled.

Rohan: Arre haan aapka to jawab nhi.

Gauri: Haan sir..aap training ke sath hasate bhi ho sabko (looking at om) kuch log to training se jada chillate rehte hain.

Om glared at her and she looked at Harsh.

Gauri: Aapki ye speciality sabko pasand hai. Kyun Samaira 😏?

Samaira: H.. nhi ...haan nhi.

Gauri: Ye Kya haan nhi haan nhi laga rakha hai ? Be clear.

Om to Harsh: 😏😏.

Harsh: 😒Kya hai ? Aise kya dekh rha hai?

Om: 😏 Kuch to nhi.

Sakshi: Sir kab tak pahochenge?

Om: Two hours.

Gauri: Khana kab milega?

Om: Abhi breakfast to mila tha.

Gauri: Haan to hame aur bhookh lagi hai. Vo ek Apple aur doodh mila tha 😒.

Naina: Mujhe bhi bhookh lagi hai.

Gauri: Tum to khati ho pet bhar ke.

Aditya: Haan canteen me mere saamne 4 samosa kha gyi aur do glass lassi aur 3 aloo ke parathe bhi khayi.

Sakshi: Pet hai ki kuan (well).

Naina: Haan to mai training nhi kar rahi hun jo ghas phoos khaun..... aur Aditya bhi khaya tha..aur haan maine mana bhi kiya tha..

All glared at Aditya.

Aditya: 😶😶.

Gauri: Hamko bhi bula lete 😒 ...abhi maar denge.

Aditya: Mai bhi utha ke patak dunga. Aur aise behave kar rahi hai jaise zindagi me kabhi samosa aloo paratha nhi khai ho.

Gauri: Ham pet bharne ki baat kar rhe the.

Aditya: Tum chahe jitna kha leti tumko bhookh lagti.

Gauri: 😶Ham maar denge muh toot jayega.

Harsh irritated: Ladna band karo Abhi kuch door ek restaurant hai...wahan se kuch le aayenge..khush?

Samaira stands from her place.

Gauri: Abhi restaurant nhi aaya hapsi nhi to....baith jao.

Samaira: Mai selfie lene ke liye khadi thi.

Gauri: Haan Haan... selfie...chalo.

Samaira: Mere phone ki battery khatm ho jayegi. Tum lo apne phone se.

Gauri: Nhi hamara camera tumhari shakal dekh kar phone se bahar bhag jayega.

Samaira: Yaar sahi me 40 percent hi hai battery.

Gauri: 😶Hamari 10 percent.

Samaira: Ab kya Karen ?

Gauri: Ek minute.

She stands and snatched phone from Omkara's hands who was going to click selfie with Harsh.

Om: 😶Ye kya tha?

Harsh pouting: Maine kitni acchi pout ki thi.

Om turned to Gauri: Aye mera phone do. Ye kaisi batmeezi thi ?

Gauri: Arre hamare phone ki battery khatm ho gyi thi aur hame selfie leni hai.

Om: Maag nhi sakti thi?

Gauri: Aap mana kar dete to ?

Om rolled his eyes.

Samaira: Arre sir aap dono me tera mera kya jo aapka hai wo iska aur jo iska hai wo to iska hai hi.

Gauri: Wahi to....Chalo ham selfie lete hain.

Om shook his head.

Gauri : Bahar ki scenery ki video banate hain.

She took out phone from window for recording the outside view . Suddenly phone slipped from her hands.

Gauri:😳 Ye kya ho Gaya?

Samaira:😳 Pagal hai kya tum...ab kya hoga?

Gauri gulped: Pata nhi.

Samaira: Sir se batao ab.

Gauri: Nhi..vo hamko bahar phek denge....

Samaira: Pagal abhi jada door nhi pahuche.

Gauri: Tum batao na...hame dar lagta hai.

Just then driver stopped the bus.

Harsh: Ham restaurant pahoch chuke hain...tum sab wait karo mai aur Om order kar ke aate Hain.

Om: Ye dhaba hai stupid.

Harsh: Haan jo bhi ho.

Om went to Gauri: Mera phone..

Gauri:😶 vo...

Om: Vo kya? Mera phone kahan hai?

Gauri gulped: Gir gaya.

Om: Gir gaya to uthao..aise baithi kyun ho?

Gauri: Wo yahan nhi... window ke bahar gir gaya thodi der pehle.

All:😳😳😶😶

Om shouting: Whattttttttt? Tumne mera phone bahar gira diya.......aur mujhe ab Bata rahi ho...agar mai puchta na to tum batati bhi na.

Gauri: Nhi...ham bata dete...par..ham dar gaye the.

Om: Kahan giraya hai?

Gauri: Thode door pe hi.

Om holds her hand: Chlo mere saath aur mera phone dhundo... usme Kitne important records the...

He takes Gauri with him.

Gauri: Ahaaannnn ainnnnnn hame bhookh lagi hai. Aihannnnnnn Mummy.

They came to that place.

Om: Yahi wo jagah thi na ?

Gauri: Wo hai to .

Om quickly ran to his photo and picked up. He checked it.

Om: Thank God phone kharab nhi hua.

He looked at Gauri who was crying .

Om went to her: Ab kya hua?

Gauri: Maine sandals nhi pehni thi mereko chot lag gyi.

Om: Offo...tum bata nhi sakti thi kya?

Gauri: Aapne bolne ka chance hi kab diya?

Om: Jitne time tak chilaa rahi thi uss time bata nhi sakti thi...Aur IPS officer hote huye ek choti si chot pe ro rahi ho.

Gauri: To? IPS officer ko dard nhi hota kya?

Om: Ek officer ko itna dard sehna aana chahiye..samjhi? And vo paani vala challenge tumne bina shoes ke kiya tha tab dard nhi hua aur ab choti si chot pe ro rahi ho? Chalo ab.

Gauri: Kitne dusht hain.

She walked behind him holding his hand.

Gauri in mind: Ye kaisi bezzati thi 😒. Puche bhi nhi Kaisi chot hai....akdu.

They reached to bus. All were sitting at dhaba .

Harsh: Mila kya?

Om: Haan.

Harsh: Toota to nhi ?

Om: Nhi.

Harsh: Arre Haan kaise tootega isme to Naina glass hai.

Naina looked at them: Naina koi new company hai kya?

Harsh: Arre nhi sorry gorilla glass.

All laughed.

Naina stands and hits on Harsh's head.

Om in low voice: Naina Gauri ke pair me chot aayi hai ...tum jaakar dawa Laga dena. Aur agar jada chot ho to mujhe batana.

Naina: Aise dheere kyun bol rahe ho? Yahan sabko pata hai tum dono ke baare me. Ab uske pair me chot aayi hai aur tumhe uski fikar hai to isme kya chipana.

He looked at Gauri. Gauri smiled and looked down.

Om looked down awkwardly: Mai aata Hun.

All looked at Rikara with teasing smile.

He went inside the bus.

Naina to Gauri: Dikhao.

Gauri: Kya?

Naina: Movie.

Gauri: Kon si?

Naina: Apna pair dikhaiye mehrani sahiba.

Gauri showed her feet.

Naina: Ye halki si chot pe mar gyi.

Aditya: Kya IPS banegi re tu ?

Gauri: Tumko hamare IPS ban ne se kya problem hai? Aur ham chot ke liye nhi ro rahe the... jabardasti le gye the hamko wo.

Samaira: To rone lagogi?

Richa: Aur phone bhi to tum hi girayi thi .

Gauri: 😶 Phir bhi.

Naina: Chalo dawa laga dun.

Gauri: Ham pehle khana khayenge.

Naina: Mujhe kya hai.

Just then Om came to Gauri with her sandals.

He placed the sandals near her legs: Lo pehan lo .

All : 😏😏Bahot khyal rakha jaa rha.

Gauri: 😒Haan rakha jaa raha hai ..To ?Kuch kar loge?

All: 😶😶.

Harsh: Mujhse aise baat karogi.

Gauri: Ham inn logon ko bol rhe hain.

She wears her sandals: Thank you.

Om nodded.



In evening they reached to Jungle.

Harsh: Sab log ek - ek kar ke line se neeche utrenge.

Gauri: Nhi ham kood jayenge.

Harsh: 😶😶.

All chuckled including Om.

All came out from bus except Gauri. Gauri takes her six big suitcases.

Gauri: Ahh kitna bhari hai..Gauri kya zaroorat thi 6-6suitcase laane ki?

She went to exit door . She was going to get down from bus but she looses her balance due to heavy luggage and going to fall but Om saved her by holding her waist. She blinked her eyes. He picked her and keep her down holding her waist.

Gauri coming out from Omkara's land : Ahmm.. Chodiye.

Om: Kya? (Coming into sense) huh! Sorry.

He leaves her .

He keep her luggage down: Itna saara saaman laane ki kya zaroorat thi?

Gauri: Vo aise hi.

Naina entered inside the bus and came out with a box.

Om: Isme kya hai?

Naina: Arre ye mere liye thanda paani hai. Tujhe to pata hai Mai thanda pani hamesha peeti Hun .

Om shook his head.

Harsh shouting from little far: Tum dono ka ho Gaya ho to jaldi aa jao.

They came to team.

Om: Aap sab bus se jaa kar Apne Apne tents le kar Aaiye.

Aditya: Sir wo room kisliye hai? Wahan kon rehta hai!

Harsh: Wo rooms nhi hain left side girls washroom hai aur uske bagal bathroom for girls. And right side for boys.

Gauri: Nahayenge Kahan ?

Om: Mere sar pe.

Gauri: Accha.

Om: Abhi maine kya bola...girls ke liye hai bathroom.

Gauri: Accha.

Om mumbling: Stupid. (To everyone) Paani aapko well se le kar aana hai peene ke liye jo ki yahin paas me hai. Khana ham sab mil kar banayenge .

Richa: Sir par cylinder to hai hi nhi.

Harsh: Ham log picnic par nhi aaye hain . Khana ham yahan aag laga kar banayenge.

Gauri: Hawww khane ke liye ab jungle me aag laga denge .

Om: Arre yahan matlb jis jagah par ham khade hain. Lakdi ( woods) par aag laga kar uspe khana banayenge ... jaise pehle banate the.

Samaira: Par ham log pehle kabhi banaye hi nhi.

Om: Haan...to maine kab bola?

Gauri: Abhi bole na jaise pehle banate the.

Om joined his hands: Mataon pehle matlb pehle ke log.

Gauri: To aise Boliye na.

Harsh: Kal se aap 5 bje uth jayenge.. training 10 bje se start hogi.....aur..

Sakshi: Par training 10 bje hogi to 5 bje kyun uthe?

Om: Taaki aap sab ka routine na kharab ho... and subah 5 baje uth ke sabse pehle ham sab excercise karenge... phir fresh up ho kar naha ke sab 7 baje tak yahan aa ke breakfast banane me help karenge ham ki...then breakfast then training. Am I clear?

All: Yes Sir.

Om: So ab aap log tent laga ke rest kariye... Abhi 7 baj rahe hain...aap sab 9 baje yahan aa jaiyega.




After sometime.

All candidates came out from their camps.
Om and Harsh were sitting infront of bonfire. All sat around it.

Samaira looking at Harsh: Kitna Sundar lag raha na.

Gauri looking at bonfire: Haan yaar.

Samaira whispering: 😒Zada nhi.

Gauri: Kya zada nhi? Bonfire tumhara boyfriend hai kya jo uski tareef karne par tumhe jalan ho rhi hai.

Samaira: 😶 Bonfire?

Gauri: To tum kise....accha ab samjhe tch tch tch.

Samaira covered her face.

Malini: Kya banega?

Harsh: Khana... hahaha.

All: 😑😑.

Gauri: Bataiye na sir hamko bhookh lagi hai.

Om: Bola to khana banega.

All: 😑😑.

Harsh: Tum log aise hi ham dono ko irritate karte ho.

All showed their teeth.

Aditya: Kon banayega?

Om: Aap sab thak gye honge rest kijiye ham dono banate hain.

Samaira: Sir ham log bhi thodi help kar denge.

Om to bus driver: Suniye...bus se saare items le kar aaiye.

Gauri excited: Kya banega?

Harsh: Daal chaval.

All: Kyunnnnnn?

Harsh: Abhi bahut thak gye kal se accha banega. Aur vaise bhi raat me normal hi khana chahiye.

Gauri: Nhi ham log normal nhi khayenge ham log khana khayenge.

All laughed including Om.

Harsh irritated: Ho gya? Chup raho.

Om extinguished the fire.

All: Ye kya Kiyaaaaa?

Gauri: Itni thand lag Rahi hai and aapne aag bujha diyaaa.

Om: Jalte huye aag pe kabhi khana nhi Banta.

Ritika (A candidate) : Omkara rir...vaise aapko aur Gauri ko dekhkar lagta hi nhi ki aap dono couple ho..I mean maine jitne couples dekhe hain sab ek dusre ko dekhkar thoda sharmate hain. Par aap dono to aise behave karte ho ki kisi ko shaq bhi na ho aapke upar.

Sakshi: Wahi to sir...kabhi to Sharma liya kariye.

Gauri: Haan ham log besharm hain .

Sakshi: Tumhara to pata hai...Omkara sir nhi hain.

Gauri: Tum sab ko hamari engagement ke alawa duniya ka koi topic nhi milta kya? Subah se yahi baat kar rahe ho.

All: Nhi milta.

Rohan: Tum log kyun nhi bataye the?

Siddhi: Batao love marriage thi ya arrange?

Payal: Love hi hai yaar.. Dekho pehle training commander and candidate phir fiance.

Gauri: Tumko bada pata hai?

Siddhi: Accha ye batao tum log me Pehle kisne propose kiya ?

Gauri hits her on forehead and actions her to shut her mouth . She frowns.

Siddhi: Kyun chup rahun?

Gauri: Ham apni behan se baat kar ke aate Hain.

Gauri left from there.


After sometime.

All candidates have their food and went to their camps.

At night.

Om was talking to his brothers. Just then all candidates entered inside with cake.

All: Happy birthday to you.

Om smiled brightly: Thank you.

Harsh hugged her: Happy birthday mere bhai.

Om smiled: Thank you bro.

All candidates wished him.

Om: Ye cake?

Sakshi: Sir wo ham sab ko pata tha ki aapka bday hai isliye ham isse lekar aaye the.

Naina: Wo thanda pani.

Om chuckled and hugged her.

He looked everywhere but Gauri wasn't present there.

Harsh: Cake cut karen?

Om: W..wo sab hain na Yahan par.

Sakshi: Sab to hain.

Om: Nhi wo....tum.. tumhari friend...

Richa: Sir wo to so gyi hogi.

Om face fell.

Harsh: Cake cur kar.

Om nodded sadly. He cutted the cake and feed to everyone.

All wished him once again and left from there.

He sat on his place.

Om to himself: Mujhe laga tha kisi aur ko yaad ho na ho par tumhe mera birthday yaad rhega Gauri. Pata nhi kyun but mujhe bahut bura lga.

Just then a voice came from outside.

Voice: I am sorry.

Om: Kon?

Just then Gauri entered inside with small cake in her hand.

Om Smiled: Tum.

Gauri came to him and sat infront of him.

Gauri: I am sorry wo ye cake banane me time lag gya.

Om: Tumhe yaad tha? I thought tum bhul....

Gauri: Aise kaise bhul sakte hain.

Om: Aur ye tumne banaya?

Gauri: Haan hame pata hai ki ye bada vala nhi hai aur itna tasty bhi nhi hoga kyunki yahan par microwave bhi nhi hai.

Om: Cut karun ?

Gauri smiled and nodded.

Om cuts the cake and feed it to Gauri.
Gauri also feed him and applied the cake on his cheeks.

Gauri laughing: Kaise lag rhe hain ajeeb se.

Om: Accha ji.

He pulled Gauri and she bumped to his chest. He holds Gauri from her waist and pulled her more closer.

Gauri: K..kya kar rhe hain chodiye na.

Om: Aapne ek commander ke chehre par cake lagaya hai saza to milegi Officer Gauri.

Gauri's heart was beating faster.

Om came closer to her cheeks and rubbed his cheek from her cheek and cake applied on Gauri's cheeks. She clutches Omkara's shirt and closed her eyes. Both looked at each other.

Just then Omkara's phone rang. Gauri quickly removed herself from Omkara's hold and ran.

Om Chuckled.

She came to her tent running. She closed her tent and lied . She closed her eyes breathing heavily. Her cheeks were pink.

Gauri to herself: Y.. ye kya ho gya tha hame.

She holds her heart.

Other side.

After talking with his friend he disconnected the call. He lied on bed closing his eyes.

Om's heart: Ye kya karne jaa rha tha tu Om. Gauri ke itne kareeb tha tu..ho kya gya hai tujhe? Kahin Mai Gauri se pyaar to nhi karne laga hai?

Om's mind: Nhi y.. ye kya bol rha hai tu.. Aisa nhi hai.

Om's heart: Par tujhe aaj pehli baar itna ajeeb sa kyun feel ho rha hai.... aur tu uske itne paas kyun tha ?

Om's mind: H..Haan...p..par wo bas aise hi....wo ho gya anjane me.

Om' s heart: Meri baat nhi sun ni hai to Thik hai. Par dekhna ek din tumhe jaroor ehsaas hoga ki tu uss se pyaar karta hai.

Om's mind: Om isko bhagao yahan se ye tumhe ulta seedha sikha rha hai. Tum abhi ek commander ho jab pati ban na tab ye sab pyaar mohhabat sochna 😒.

Om's heart: Par vo tumhari hone wali biwi hai.... Apni fiance se pyaar karna kya galat hai?

Om's mind: Haan to wo ek candidate bhi hai ....aur yahan par sirf candidate hi hai..saare candidates tere liye ek hain samjha.... Om meri baat maan.

Om's heart: Haan to sabse pyaar kare kya ? Om wo kharab ho Chuka hai usse ignore kar meri baat maan. Ek baar soch ki tu uss se pyaar karta hai ki nhi.

Om's mind smrinked: Sochne vala department mera hai😏.

Om's heart: 😶😶.

Om: Argh...shut up you both!!!!!

Om holds his head he closed his eyes and slept.














Precape: Drunk Gauri..
(We know aap sab Ko issi ka wait tha 😏)





Dekho ab merese iss time pe isse jada kuch romance nhi aaya....🙈🙈🙈. Isliye kuch bolna mat.. mujhe sharam aa jayegi.

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