Tujpe hi tho mera haq hai

By Pari020

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The story starts from where Veer and Bani together save bani from the magical cave. With a twist in plot.. wa... More

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Veer screamed in pain as his legs freezed..

Bani- veeranshu

Ck- awww bura laga, abb kya karogi bahu rani. Kya karogi, kis ko bachaogi

Bani sat on her knees..

Bani- please please rok do ye sab please

Veer- nahi bani tum haar nahi sakti

Jay- ha bani tum pehele naag mandir ko bachao me aur veer yaha sambalenge

Veer- ha bani, tum iss aurat ke samne nahi jukoge

Bani- mere paas aur koi chara nahi hai veeranshu. Sasu maa please please mere parivar ko Baksh digeye please*crying*

Ck- ro aur zor se ro bahu rani tabhi mere dil ko tandak meliga

Bani stood up wiping her tears.

She started laughing making everyone confused..

Bani- sorry sasu maa, apki bate sunke hassi agayi. Appko kya laga me wo bichari abla nari hu ya daily soap ki bechari bahu hu! Kya sasu maa appne apni bahu ko teek se nahi pehechan tch tch I'm very disappointed!

Ck- maut ko samne deke pagal hoagyo ho tum.

Bani- bilkul nahi sasu maa. Waha deklijeye

As the fire balls descends towards naag mandir a huge red beam of light covered the whole naag mandir. No attack could put a small scratch on the temple.

Meera- bani ye pani upar badtha jaraha hai

Bani- naag mandir mera pehela priority hai sasu maa. Abb parivar ki bari hai.

Bani came in her Adi Naagin form. She was in her red dress her eyes turned red.

Bani had the power to control four elements of earth.
Water, fire, air and land.

Bani- me Adi Naagin apni saktiyoko yaad karte, bholenath se ye pratana karthi hu ki ye pani yaha se appne stan pe lot jaye

And in minutes the water disappeared..

Veer's legs were free too..

Chandrakala fumed in anger, her so well planned all this. But still because of this bloody adi naagin she lost it again.
But wait she hasn't lost it all now..

Jay- bani me abhi jungal jaunga, chachi ko bachane

Veer- me bhi atha hu

Bani- koi zarurat nahi hai. Aur ha sasu maa app unko maar sakte hai, shok se maar na ha

Meera- bani, ye tu kya bole jarahi hai

Bani- calm down meera di

Chandrakala looked at the cage, there was no human there. It was just dolls with magic.

Bani smirked at chandrakal..

Bani- muje pata tha app kuch na kuch zarur karegi sasu maa. Mene kaal hi naag mandir aur ghar ke suraksha ke liye sare intezam kar chuki thi. Aur rahi baat mere chachi aur behen ki. Aaj subha mene unko apni sacchi batasithi. Unko toda wakt laga isko accept karne me likni un teeno ne ye accept kiya.
Un sab ko protect karne keliye muje unko yaha se dur bejna tha. So I sent them to papa, papa Varanasi me hai. Aur waha koi kala jadu kaam nahi karta. I created three magical doll in their faces, and left them in the room.
Because somewhere I had this intuition that you are going to mess around sasu mom..

Veer- wha sweetheart, tumne iss aurat ki tho bina mare bartha bana diya..

Jay- ha Bani deko kese ghoor ke dekrahi hai, ullu ki tara

They all laughed at chandrakal making her go red with anger. She closed her eyes and started flapping her wings, with in a moment the dust covered the place.

Chandrakal attacked bani before bani or the others realised she held bani by her neck and flew up to the sky.

Bani- ahhhh

Veer- bani
He took his eagle form and flew up to his mother.

Veer- chodo meri bani ko

CK- chodu, lo chodiya

She threw bani from the sky, but veer being there he caught hold of his wife soon enough. She hugged him tight breathing heavily, because that women had held her neck with so much force she could even breath.

Veer- agar dubara mere biwi ke taraf haat to chodo akh bhi utaya tho tumhara beta tumhe kudh apne haatho se muth dega..

Giving her a deadly warning veer flew down with bani.

Landing down he hugged her tight. Checking if she was hurt somewhere or not..

Veer- tum teek ho na bani

Bani smiled cupping his face..

Bani- veeranshu tumhare hote muje kuch hosakta hai kya? I'm fine bilkul teek hu me

Veer- Abb me aur wait nahi karna chachta hu bani. Abb us aurat ko khatam karna hai jald se jald

Bani- bilkul, hum karenge kuch. Pehele ghar chale, sab pareshan honge

Veer nods and carrying her up they fly back home.

Meera hugged bani..

Meera- tu teek hai na bani

Bani- ha meera di me bilkul teek hu

Balwant- I'm proud of you bani beta, jiss tarike se ajj sab kuch sambala tumne. Wo koi aur nahi karsaktha tha

Bani- thankyou daddy ji..

Ponky- ha bhabi, kash app meri umar ki hoti me appko apna girlfriend bana leta. Wese wait abhi bhi der nahi huva, deko priyanka aur nick ki jese hamara pair hayee kitna accha lage ha na

Bani-veeranshu by the way offer accha hai. Me and ponky would make a good pair

Ponky- ha bhabi issi baat pe selfie banti hai

As much as the family enjoyed this veer got irritated. How can his brother flirt with his wife!?

Veer- hogaya tum logo ka, wese nahi bhi huva ho tho muje kya

He carried bani up walking to his room.

Bani- veeranshu muje neche utaro

Veer- shhh, agar kuch bola na tumne tho kasam se tumhe yahi sabke samne kiss kardunga

Ponky- oh bhai control karo, bacche hai yaha

Veer- tu chup kar yaar! Meera I'm meera bhabi please hamara breakfast upar hi bejdo.

Meera- I'll send it teek se khalena

Veer- now you wifey chalo

They went to there room and a servent gave them the plates too. Veer locked the room dumping her on the bed.

Bani- auch, ye kya hai

Veer- neche kya kaha tumne ha?

Bani- aree wo tho me mazak kar rahi thi veeranshu

Veer- bohot maza atha hai na muje satake tumhe

Bani- bohot se bhi zyada 🤭

He walked to her, every step he to closer to her she crawled back.

Now he was right infront of her while she was stuck between him and the headrest of the bed.

She made a cute puppy face seeing his angry face..
And veer peaked her lips rubbing his nose on hers.

Veer- pehele breakfast baad me baki sab

Bani- finee
She said pouting

Veer- meera na sahi kehe ti hai, you are a kid..

Bani- whatever

They sat together eating there breakfast with lots of naughty talks, teasing and laughter..



The writer's of the show never really showed how powerful the Adi Naagin is. So thought to write it myself 😃.

Hope you guys liked it

Take care,
Lots of love
Parimala

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