Falling for a cholo

By Cum4Kai

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You a new girl in LA well West Coast on LA. You fall for a boy in a gang. What will happen? More

Characters
New school😬
Night time 🌖
You and Carlos
The sneak in🥺
I like him🥰
The big fight
Carlos won't give up for your love
Everything🥺
Something🥰
Those days🙄
The bleed out🙏🏽
The break up💔
Trying be happy again😩
Stuck in the moment😩
The save😊
I love you for life❤️
Ghostin😢
The video of your mom💔
Your not my real dad.
I'm cold
Carlos!
Our love is never ending
Is he cheating?
The talk with Desiree
Less talking more touching
Hey...
A date?
The date
Why are you doing here?
Im sorry
Idk if I trust you again...
The note...
Why you want me dead?
Goodnight♥️
Me and you🥺
I think so..
Word😍
Night cruising🎭
Reading the book to Carlos

Sorry but cheating on isnt going bye Carlos

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By Cum4Kai


The next day


Your POV:
I'm packing Carlos clothes right now cause I don't him here anymore

The phone rings

You:"Hello?"
Girl:"Hi is Carlos there?" 
You:"Who this? I'm Carlos girlfriend and I promise this that I will find you and beat the crap out of you"
Girl:"sorry wrong number"
You:"No! Hello?"
Call ended

You kept packing clothes

•Nighttime•
Time 3:00am
Carlos hasn't came home yet.

You:"I'm going to sleep, he not coming"

You fall asleep



•Morning time•

It was 10am

Carlos walks in the door with his shirt half on

You:"Beautiful time to come isn't"
Carlos:"I was at a friend house with LZ"
You slap him
You:"Your lying to me again"
Carlos:"Look if you"
You:"What you going hit me? Do it cause the only person I loved and my parents are not here at all. Do it"

Carlos walks into the room and you follow behind him

Carlos:"and this?"
You:"I can't, your leaving this house right now. For live with your lover Carlos cause I don't want you here"
Carlos:"Y/n..."
You:"Leave!"

Carlos grab his bags and walked out

Carlos:"PleAse don't do this"
You:"Leave!"

You push Carlos out with the door and locked it, you sat down on the couch and cried


To Carlos

Carlos:"I have no where to go so I guess LZ is the only place" to

He drove to LZ

Lz:"Come in"
Carlos:"I messed up so bad"
Lz:"Yep you did look you live here this your house too but what you did. I told you she going to know and I had your back"
Carlos:"Ugh! Ik I mess up and yk what she did. She said the only person I had was you cause I have nobody no parents or nothing but guess what I don't need a men to help me out"
Lz:"Let it all out"

Carlos was crying




Back to you

Desiree hugs you

Desiree:"You have me"
You:"Thank you"
Desiree:"I said you did the right time"
You:"Yep yep"
Desiree:"so you live here still or move back to your old house when we we're teenagers?"
You:"Move back cause I need to I can't live here cause this is the house Carlos and I brought together and also I miss my teen house even if there was bad memories"

Desiree helps you move out the house and put to sale and you put all your things into your old house when you first move in when you were 16 years old. Desiree and you cracked jokes and she invited Alfredo, Cynthia, and Kio to help you unpacking

11pm

They left and you were in the shower listening to your music after you finish you saw a picture of you and your mom. You deleted all the pictures of you and Carlos



To Carlos

All his homies came and they were shooting around and they heard from North side

North side guy 1:"Carlos, we heard you and your girl are done. So I'm show her what a true man is"

Carlos started walking there and Lz grab him

Lz:"No, it going be a big fight again"
Carlos:"Fine! Yo North side she still mine even we both done cause I be by her side since the day I stare her"
North side guy 2:"You were not anymore. Angel go get her"
(Btw north side guy 1 his name is Angel)
Angel from north side:"I will let's go"
Carlos:"I hate them!"








You fall asleep




























You and Carlos are done for now

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