THE INTRUDER

By Ironwiller

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World's full of mysteries. Leaving some of them unsolved can be sometimes a peaceful choice. However,we are h... More

Ch-1 Interesting matter
Ch-2 Murder Mystery
Ch-3 Something isn't right
Ch-4 An Egoistic brat
Ch-5 Help
Ch-6 Won't be forgotten
Ch-7 Careless
Ch-9 Another Victim
Ch-10 Under the shade
Ch-11 After us
CH-12 OBSERVATION BEGINS
CH-13 OUTSMARTED
CH-14 AN ATTEMPT
CH-15 SWEET VISIT
CH-16 IS IT OVER?
CH-17 GAME'S UP
CH-18 FINAL INTRUDENCE
CH-19 CASE CLOSED(A NEW FACTION)

Ch-8 The report

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By Ironwiller

KEVIN'S POV

I got up early next day and began getting ready.

Must meet the witness as soon as possible.

The witness's name was Benjamin. He is a regular office boy.

28 years old, unmarried.

I brushed my teeth,got ready,finished my breakfast , combed my hair and headed towards the car.

As I settled in the car, I felt a little uncomfortable.

Not used to travel alone.

Don't worry Alec, will reunite with you soon.

ALEC'S POV

I went straight to the store were Alice works.  Thankfully,she hadn't arrived yet. That hotheaded girl is a trouble.

Alice's coworker and friend was identified as Jerry Lutkins who was reported dead in a car accident.

The workers in the store told me that a car ran straight over him and didn't stopped to help him. He died of blood loss.

I will confirm that in the hospital.

Next I hailed a cab outside the store.

"Marshes hospital."

I arrived at the hospital and walked inside the building. The hospital was fairly big with a nice infrastructure.

I went at the counter there.

" What do you want,sir?" The receptionist asked.

" Check your records and tell me the name of the pathologist who conducted autopsy of Jerry Lutkins." I said.

The receptionist stared at me for a while.

" Excuse me if you don't mind me asking, who are you?"

"Alec Tyson, private detective." I said ,showing my card.

" Wait a minute sir." She said and began flipping pages a record book.

" Dr George Worlock ."

" Where is he??" I asked.

" Sorry, I have no idea but Dr Lloyd might know. He is his friend." The receptionist replied.

" Where is he?" I asked.

" You are lucky that you won't have to wait. It's his lunch break and he is here only. Take a left and walk forward." She said with a smile.

" Thank you." I said and began walking away.

" Wait! What's your age?" She asked.

" Well, 20 years." I said.

" A very young detective you are." The receptionist said with a chuckle.

" Private one. Not that difficult, you know?" I said,chuckling as I walked away .

I arrived at Mr Lloyd's room and entered without knocking.

Which was a mistake.

As soon as I entered , I found a doctor and a nurse kissing.

Lovely couple.

Suddenly, the nurse's eyes went on me and she quickly back off.

" Hey! Knocking is a word!!" The doctor cried.

" So is Violating. " I said with a chuckle.

INNER ENTITY - DESTRUCTION 100%!!!!!!!

" What do you want?!" The doctor rudely snapped.

" You are Lloyd? " I asked.

" Doctor Lloyd!" He corrected.

" More like  Playboy Lloyd." I said with a chuckle .

" Who are you?! State your business!!" Lloyd cried angrily.

" I am detective Alec Tyson. Just give me the address of Dr George Worlock and I will leave" I said.

The doctor quickly tore a piece of paper from a nearby notebook,wrote something on it,made a ball of it and threw it at me.

" Here! Leave now!" He snapped.

" Alright! Alright!"

" Well, Doctor?" I asked before leaving.

" What now?!" He asked in an irritated tone.

" Did you used your tongue?"

" Wait, you motherf******!!"

I chuckle and exited the room quickly.

As I walked outside the hospital,I opened the note.

11 Xterm street.

Well, this saves time.

KEVIN'S POV
This is the area.

" Excuse me,do you know which house is Benjamin Moore's house?" I asked a passerby.

" Sorry no idea." He said and jogged away.

10 MINUTES LATER

Finally!

I was standing in front of Benjamin's house!!!!

And someone was staring me from the window.

" What do you want?! " the man asked angrily.

" Are you Benjamin Moore??!!" I asked.

" No! I am Katy Pierre!!" He cried.

" Kat! You switched gender!?

" You blind?!!"

" No! Guy's Kevin!!"

" Look in front!!" The man cried angrily .

I looked in front, there was a nameplate .

HOUSE NO -11 BENJAMIN

" So why were you confusing me with that nonsense conversation?! " I asked

" What do you want?! Get to the business!"

" I am a private detective. I know that have witnessed a murder. I want you to tell-"

" No!! I haven't witnessed any!! Now leave!" He cried and shut the window.

" Benjamin!!! Face me!!!" I cried angrily.

After a few minutes he reopened the window, a rifle in hand.

" Now you face me!!" He cried as he reloaded the gun.

" You can't shoot a citizen!" I cried.

He fired!!

The bullet missed my head by a few inches!!!

" You fucking did it!!!!" I cried.

" Your head would be next !! I have been with the hunting party for quite a long time!!!" Benjamin cried angrily.

" Listen dude! Just think about how many lives you can help in saving-"

He fired again,this time almost shooting my leg.

"Alright! Alright! I am leaving!!" I cried and scurried away.

ALEC'S POV

I knocked at the door. A young guy opens it. He was of my age,if not, bigger. He had blue hair and a sharp nose.

" Hello, business with dad?" He asked.

" From dad ,do you mean Doctor George?" I asked.

He nodded.

" Then yes, I am detective Alec Tyson." I said, showing my card.

" Oh ! Please come in! Make yourself comfortable! " the man said as he stepped aside.

I went inside the house.

" Dad's watching TV in the living room ahead. You can talk to him." He said and went upstairs .

I went inside the living room and saw an old bald man on a sofa. He looked at me and smiled.

" I heard the whole conversation. What do you want,Mr detective??" Doctor George asked.

" I wanted the autopsy report of Jerry Lutkins, the one who is claimed to have died by car accident."

" Oh! Poor young lad . What do you want it for?" He asked.

" I suspect that it is a murder." I muttered grimly.

The pathologist placed his hand on his beard and closed his eyes.

" Hmmmm. I also suspected that during the test . However, due to no solid evidence, we had to mention it a car accident as it was the second most probable cause of death." Doctor George  said.

" Can I look at the report?" I asked.

" Yeah sure! It's with me only. "

" Ted!!" He cried.

" Yes dad?!" His son cried from upstairs.

" Fetch me all the autopsy reports!"








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