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CRITERIA FOR JUDGING
Title [5%]
Meron ba itong connection sa story?
Book cover [5%]
Maganda ba ang pagkakagawa nito?
Nakakadagdag ba ito sa panghahalina ng mga mambabasa?
Blurb [15%]
Meron ba itong kakayahan na makapanghalina sa mga readers na ipagpatuloy ang kanilang pagbabasa sa isang story?
Plot [25%]
Catchy ba ito?
Iba ba ito sa plot ng ibang story?
Hindi ba magulo at nakakalito ang plot?
Grammar [10%]
Nagamit ba ng maayos ang lenggwaheng ginamit?
Hindi ba magulo ang narration ng author?
Written Style [15%]
Tama ba ang pagkakalagay ng mga punctuation marks?
Nakakadala ba ang narration?
Meron bang mga pangyayari na ikakabaliw at ikakagulat ng mga readers?
Overall [25%]
Kapupulutan ba ito ng magandang mensahe?
Iba't ibang feelings ba ang mararamdaman ng readers habang binabasa ang story?
Total: [100%]
PARTICIPANTS:
havellana | Past Regrets
Title [5/5]
Book Cover [4/5]
Blurb [15/15]
Plot [20/25]
Grammar [6/10]
Written Style [13/15]
Overall [20/25]
Total: [83/100]
FEEDBACK:
Title. Yes.
Book cover. Nice, It looks professional.
Blurb -Yes and I love it.
Plot.
Yes, and I recommend it.
-It's unique.
-Nope it's understandable.
Grammar.
-Yes
-Nope, I understand when I read it.
Written Style.
-Yes
-Yes
-Yes, and it was in the prologue.
Overall:
-Yes
-Yes, some scenes were sad,exciting and etc.
It was nice and I love it. THANKYOUUUUU
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Missmoonreader | Chased By A Trouble
Title [5/5]
Book Cover [3/5]
Blurb [10/15]
Plot [20/25]
Grammar [6/10]
Written Style [10/15]
Overall [20/25]
Total: [74/100]
FEEDBACK:
Title
-Yes my connection naman po.
Book cover
-Need a little bit of improvement to attract the readers but it is nice naman.
Blurb.
-Yes but need some a little bit improvement.
Plot.
-Yes, and I recommend it.
-Actually parang common siya.
-Nope it's understandable.
Grammar:
-Yes
-Nope, I understand when I read it.
Written Style:
-Some of it was no punctuation marks.
-Yes
-Yes, and it was in the prologue.
Overall
-Yes
-Yes, some scenes were sad,exciting and etc.
Feedback: It was exciting and nice. I highly recommended it but some criterias are needed to improve to attract the readers.
Criterias to Improve:
-Typings (I suggest to add some fonts and don't put many emojies)
-Grammar -Book cover(I suggest to make the book cover look professional to attract the readers)
THANKYOUUUUU
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Spark_In_Light | 151 Flowers For You
Title [5/5]
Book Cover [5/5]
Blurb [15/15]
Plot [23/25]
Grammar [10/15]
Written Style [14/15]
Overall [25/25]
Total: [97/100]
FEEDBACK:
Title
-Yes.
Book cover.
-Nice, It looks professional.
Blurb
-Yes and I love it.
Plot
-Yes, and I recommend it.
-It's unique.
-Nope it's understandable.
Grammar
-Yes
-Nope, I understand when I read it.
Written Style
-Yes
-Yes
-Yes, and it was in the prologue.
Overall
-Yes
-Yes, some scenes I can relate HAHHAHA.
All I can say was "PERFECT". THANKYOUUUUU
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love_peachshins | Mamahalin Mo Kaya?
Title [5/5]
Book Cover [5/5]
Blurb [15/15]
Plot [20/25]
Grammar [10/10]
Written Style [15/15]
Overall [23/25]
Total: [93/100]
FEEDBACK:
Title
-Actually yung title niya is sobrang fit para sa story niya.
Book cover
-The book cover looks aesthetic and professional.
-It can also gain readers.
Blurb
-It's nice at natotouch ako huhu charot. Hindi din kasi ako kincrushback kaya nakarelate ako ng konti skl.
Plot
-Masyado siyang common pero I think if you read it you will see the difference from the other story.
-The plot was interesting and I don't like it because I love it!
Grammar
-The grammar was perfect at maintindihan mo talaga yung story.
Written style
-I will give three consecutive YES.
Overall
-Maybe may maraming makakarelate like me pero sa iba hindi dahil kincrushback sila huhu.
Magandang siya and maraming makakarelate sa story niya hihi. Keep it up!
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MissssssBL | My Lover's Rival
Title [4/5]
Book Cover [3/5]
Blurb [15/15]
Plot [23/25]
Grammar [10/10]
Written Style [15/15]
Overall [23/25]
Total: [93/100]
FEEDBACK:
Title
-Parang fit naman sa story hehe diba bl to? Sagot!? Charot hihi.
Book cover
-I suggest na make it simple.hihi
-But don't judge a book by it's cover hehe.
Blurb
-Maganda hehe and it looks interesting HAHHAHA ehem ehem parang gusto ko siyang basahin HAHHAHHA
Plot: -Catchy siya sa mga yaoi lovers hehe.
Grammar
-The grammar was perfect at maintindihan mo talaga yung story.
Written style
-Tama yung pagkakalagay ng mga punctuation marks.
Overall:23% -It was nice hehhe that's all wala na akong masabi.
Maganda and exciting hihi. Keep bleeding!❤
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sopepadz | Love is a Secret Ingredient
Title [5/5]
Book Cover [5/5]
Blurb [12/15]
Plot [23/25]
Grammar [10/10]
Written Style [15/15]
Overall [24/25]
Total: [94/100]
FEEDBACK:
Title
-Fit na fit mas fit pa siya kesa saken!
Book cover
-KAWAII!!❤
Blurb
-Nice and interesting.
Plot
-Catchy siya sa mga taong gustong mag chef hihi.
Grammar
-The grammar was perfect at maintindihan mo talaga yung story.
Written style
-Tama yung pagkakalagay ng mga punctuation marks.
Overall
-It was a masterpiece.
Keep it up bby! Chase your dreams, I know you have a bright future in writing!❤
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shikiee_xx | The Loveness of Three Men to a Gay
Title [5/5]
Book Cover [5/5]
Blurb [13/15]
Plot [22/25]
Grammar [9/10]
Written Style [14/15]
Overall [22/25]
Total: [90/100]
FEEDBACK:
Title
-The title was nice.
Book cover
-ARTISTIC!!❤
Blurb
-Interesting hehe.
Plot
-Catchy siya sa mga bl lovers hehe.
Grammar
-The grammar was okay.
Written style
-Tama naman yung pagkakalagay ng mga punctuation marks.
Overall
-It was attractive and interesting.
Keep it up bby!❤
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JUDGE:
Jcleff | Diwata
Title [5/5]
Book Cover [4/5]
Blurb [15/15]
Plot [25/25]
Grammar [10/10]
Written Style [15/15]
Overall [25/25]
Total: [99/100]
FEEDBACK:
Wala akong masabi dahil ang perfect ng story mo. Sa book cover lang kita binawasan dahil parang ang simple niya at medyo walang dating kapag tiningnan. Keep writing po ❤
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Tasoy_Vince | Theory of Werewolf
Title [4/5]
Book Cover [3/5]
Blurb [11/15]
Plot [23/25]
Grammar [9/10]
Written Style [13/15]
Overall [22/25]
Total: [85/100]
FEEDBACK:
Medyo hindi maganda ang book cover mo. Nagtataka din ako kung bakit may malaking itim doon sa mukha no'ng lalaki. Ang blurb mo naman ay masiyadong maikli pero malalaman agad kung tungkol saan ang story mo. Madami din akong nakikitang hindi tama ang paglalagay ng punctuation marks. Meron ding dapat na capital letter pero ginawa mong hindi.
X i
√ I
Pansin ko din na ang OA mo maglagay ng exclamation point at sobra kung magpahaba ng word. Meron ding after ng comma ay ginagawa mong capital letter ang susunod.
X Nasaan ba si Athan, Dont tell me
√ Nasaan ba si Athan, don tell me
Madami pa akong nakikitang mali at paki ayos na lamang.
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hrshyah | Unbreakable Path
Title [5/5]
Book Cover [5/5]
Blurb [15/15]
Plot [21/25]
Grammar [6/10]
Written Style [11/15]
Overall [23/25]
Total: [86/100]
FEEDBACK:
Maganda ang book cover, title and blurb mo kaya no comment ako.
Grammar and Writing Style. Pansin ko lamang na ginagawa kong small letter yung 'i' dapat po ay capital letter yan.
X saakin
√ sa akin
I suggest na wag mo din pong lagyan ng mga 'hehe' 'haha' at kung ano ano pa sa lines nila. Ang gawin mo na lamang po ay isama mo siya sa pinaka narration.
"I'm not a cold person haha"
"I'm not a cold person" sagot ko sa kaniya at tumawa.
Madaming ganyan sa story mo at madami ka ding aayusin. Overall, maganda naman yung story and keep writing❤
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exquisitelywriting | The Deceitful Mask
Title [5/5]
Book Cover [5/5]
Blurb [15/15]
Plot [25/25]
Grammar [10/10]
Written Style [12/15]
Overall [24/25]
Total: [96/100]
FEEDBACK:
Ang ganda ng book cover, title at blurb mo kaya no comment.
Perfect naman pagdating sa grammar at sa paglalagay ng punctuation marks kaso madami akong nakikitang typographical errors.
Overall. Maganda yung story pero tulad nang sinabi ko kanina, i-edit mo nalang yung mga typo. Keep wiriting bb❤
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SenseiryYours | Choosing You
Title [5/5]
Book Cover [5/5]
Blurb [15/15]
Plot [22/25]
Grammar [6/10]
Written Style [11/15]
Overall [22/25]
Total: [86/100]
FEEDBACK:
Maganda ang title, book cover at blurb dahil doon palang ay malalaman mo na agad kung tungkol saan yung story mo. Pag dating naman sa grammar and writing style, napansin ko agad na pinagsasama mo ang isang word at nag iiba yung meaning niya.
X panga
√ pa nga
Medyo ang OA mo ding maglagay ng punctuation marks tulad ng question marks and period.
Meron din akong napansin na mali yung spelling.
X nyu
√ n'yo/niyo
Kapag naman may gusto kang iemphasize na word, i-italics mo nalang.
X 'daw'
√ daw
Gawin mo ding capital letter yung first letter after ng isang punctuation mark.
Overall, maganda naman yung story pero madaming mali pagdating sa grammar at paglalagay ng punctuation marks.
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White_Murderer | All Night Thinker
Title [5/5]
Book Cover [5/5]
Blurb [13/15]
Plot [22/25]
Grammar [8/10]
Written Style [14/15]
Overall [22/25]
Total: [89/100]
FEEDBACK:
Wala akong masabi sa book cover mo at tugma naman yung title sa sinusulat mo. Sa grammar and writing style naman, may nakikita akong kulang sa letter at medyo wrong grammars. I suggest na isang language lang ang gamitin mo sa isang sentence, nag mumukhang conyo basahin kapag halo halo. Wala naman akong nakitang mali ang paglalagay ng punctuation marks.
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lakshmime | Forgive Who Forbids
Title [5/5]
Book Cover [5/5]
Blurb [15/15]
Plot [25/25]
Grammar [10/10]
Written Style [15/15]
Overall [25/25]
Total: [100/100]
FEEDBACK:
Maganda ang title at book cover kaya wala akong masabi. Pag dating din sa grammar at writing style ay perfect din, na-revise na ata iyan dahil wala akong makitang maling grammar or maling pagkakalagay ng punctuation marks. Overall, maganda yung story pero tingin ko ay mas bagay yung romance na genre para sa story mo.
DeiLight1609 | She Forgot
Title [5/5]
Book Cover [5/5]
Blurb [15/15]
Plot [20/25]
Grammar [5/10]
Written Style [11/15]
Overall [21/25]
Total: [82/100]
FEEDBACK:
Title, Blur and book cover. Maganda, connected sa story at sobrang makakapang hatak ng reader ang blurb mo kaya no comment.
Writing Style and Grammar.
Pansin ko lang na ginagawa mong small letter ang letter 'i'
X i am
√ I am
X nya
√ niya
Madami akong nakikitang walang spaces kaya pakilagyan. Minsan ay hindi din tama ang pagkakalagay ng punctuation marks.
Overall. Maganda naman yung story kasi tulad ng sinabi ko ay madami ka pang kailangan ayusin para mas gumanda ang story mo
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Title [5/5]
Book Cover [5/5]
Blurb [15/15]
Plot [19/25]
Grammar [8/10]
Written Style [12/15]
Overall [22/25]
Total: [86/100]
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MAJOR AWARDS
FIRST PLACE | lakshmime
SECOND PLACE | Jcleff
THIRD PLACE | Spark_In_Light
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MINOR AWARDS
BEST IN BOOK COVER| Spark_In_Light
BEST IN TITLE| Missmoonreader
BEST IN BLURB| MissssssBL
BEST IN RANDOM| Jcleff
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CONGRATULATIONS!!!
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