Maaneet Journey - Marriage at...

By KalpanaR1010

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This journey based not only two pure soul marriage of course none other my maaneet..Maaneet lovable pair eve... More

Prologue
Character sketch
PART 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
Part 18
Part 19
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23
Part 24(A)
Part 24 (B)
Part 25
Part 26
Part 27
Part 28
Part 29
Part 30
Part 31
Part 32
PART 33
Part 34
Part 35
Part 36
part 37 & 38
Part 39
Part 40
Part 41
Part 42
Part 43
Part 44
Part 45
Part 46
Part 47
Part 48
Part 49
Marriage Part 50 A
Marriage Part 50 B
Marriage Part 50 C
Part 51
Part 52
Part 53
Part 54
Part 55
PART 56
Part 57
PART 58
PART 59
PART 60 A
PART 60 B
PART 61

Part 20

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Part 20

Pammi shout : Booth booth (Ghost..ghost ..) with shivering voice

Dadi,Vicky,swara, Sam come near to pammi

Sam: Bua/Aunty when u arrived

Dadi: Pammi what happened why u shouting booth booth

Swara murmuring Vicky ear: Bhai I think mom saw Sam face closely that only she shout booth both giggled silently

Pammi scared face: Maaji I saw her with stammering voice.

Dadi understand who she mentioned and told everyone go to ur room and pammi come my room now.

Dadi room

Pammi: Maaji i saw her and she is booth.

Dadi: She is not ghost

Pammi: I saw her face look like anju.

Dadi: Ha she look like anju but she is geet not ghost & she not related to anju too

Pammi: Really she is not ghost with doubting face

Dadi: Ha once again u shout or anyone know about anju especially maan , iam not spare u with warning tone

Pammi nods her head and go to her room with doubting face

...

Next morning

Maan wake up in sleep and watch CCTV photage in geet room through his laptop

Maan: Where is mishty ,she not in her room

Maan dailed geet number and obviously seeing CCTV photage also.

Geet come out bathroom with wrapped towel

Maan eyes widened see her in state and towel covered only above her knees ,bare shoulder, wet hair , milky legs,water drop in cherry lips and sparkles eyes.

Geet attended maan call: Good morning maan

Maan:

Geet:maan u hear my voice

Maan: Ha ...mish..ty with stammering voice

Geet: Why u stammering maan

Maan: Nothing

Geet: Today u come to office

Maan: yes

Geet: What happened why u talking in one word answer.

Maan: Oh

Geet: I don't know what happened to u, I need dress change so bye

Maan:kya u change dress in ur room no

Geet not hear maan voice and already she cut maan call

Geet hand remove her towel and maan closed his eyes tightly.

Maan mind: Maan why u closed ur eyes and open ur eyes ,see ur pretty wife

Maan heart: No maan this is wrong , u r good boy dont do it.

Maan mind: Maan she is ur wife ,u have full right to see her

Maan heart: Ha maan she is ur wife but in her heart ur in lord place not devil place

Maan mind: Maan dont hear his voice and think about her wet hair, milky legs.think maan u never got this chance once again before officially announced ur marriage to everyone

Maan: Ha ur right with closed eyes.

Geet: Iam always right maan

Maan open his eyes and see his mishty infront of him with fully dressed

Maan: Mishty why u changed ur dress soon and went bathroom to fresh up with cute angry face

Geet: suddenly What happened to him... With confused face

Dadi: Maan beta u going office today so don't strain ur arm

Geet: Dadi I should take care of him

Dadi: I know beta u will take care of maan

Maan: Noone in mansion

Dadi: Adi and pinky already went to office.shona and choti in her room both are planning for roaming Delhi today.obviously our lazy Vicky is sleeping

Maan: Hmm ok both r going alone it is not safe so Shona and choti go with Vicky for their shopping

Geet: Iam going office, bye dadi

Dadi:geet beta u go with maan car.

Maan: Miss Geet not come with her boss car ,dadi with teasing tone

Geet: Ha dadi iam not going with my boss car so iam going in taxi

Dadi mind voice: Both are Dramabazzz 

Dadi: Geet beta u go with maan car not taxi .

Sam: I come with u ,maan

Maan: Sam KC not tourist place, u come anytime with grinned teeth.

Sam: I want work with u and I will learn more thing from u and geet. geet u teach me right with sugar coated voice

Geet: Ha I will teach u good lesson with murmuring voice

Maan: Dadiii with grinned teeth

Dadi: Maan beta allow Sam in our office.she do anything mistake then u will throw out her anytime but give her one chance

Maan irritating face: Ok but u come with another car not my car.

Sam: Ok maan so geet also not come with u.

Maan: Geet also not come with me and she come with in ur car with angry face

Sam: Kya

Geet: No MJ iam not come with Sam ,bye dadi maa

...

Maan car enter in kc and everyone staff alert in their position .

Maan entry in office like lion enter in den and his walking style like noone stand infront of me and both dazzing eyes covered in goggles and his 8 pack body show in tight shirt.

Every girl faint in his one look and his body structure omg...

Maan enter in his cabin and waiting for his mishty arrival

After 15 minutes geet enter maan cabin

Geet: Good morning sir

Maan: Ms geet this time u come to office.ur 15 minutes late

Geet: Sry sir, my hubby not leave me

Maan: What u already married with shocked face

Geet: Yes sir, my darling not leave me and iam also not stay away from my handsome ,charming hubby with blushed face

Maan: Kya ur hubby more handsome than me with irritating face.

Geet: Obviously my darling is the best in the world.

Maan: Noone defeat MSK charming with pride voice

Geet: Ur wrong sir,my maan is charming, my prince charming with dreamy face

Maan: I hate ur hubby

Geet: But i love my hubby

Maan hug geet back and now say iam best not ur hubby

Geet turn back hug him: No my hubby is best

Maan: Mishty with puppy love

Geet pulling his cheek : I love u MSK

Maan kissing her cheek one by one : I love u too GMSK

Maan kiss her cheek,nape and geet close her eyes.

Geet: Maan with moaning voice

Maan: Ha mishty with naughty tone

Geet removes his hug: Maan this is office, ur my boss and iam ur employee

Maan: Iam married but I live in bramachari with puppy face

Geet pinch his cheeks and then kiss his left cheek and maan show his right cheek and she try kiss his right cheek but maan turn his face.both lips meet.only peck not kiss

Geet: Maan u cheating me

Maan: We are married but till now u not give me single french kiss.

Geet blushed : I am only urs maan but this not our time.

Maan: Iam waiting with irritating face

...

Km

"

Swara , choti and Vicky come to hall.

Chandu roaming in hall with tensed face.

Vicky: Chandu bhai why u tensed

Chandu: I am thinking about maan sir health.

Swara: When u studied mbbs bhai with teasing tone

Chandu: I am not doctor like u but iam cook so iam think about maan sir food.

Choti: So u want sent to mj food to kc , it is simple matter why u tensed, bhai

Chandu: Choti baby , geet baby not pickup my phone.if I send food to kc or some other place.if maan sir went any site place

Vicky: Then call maan bhai ask him, where is he

Chandu: No Vicky baba, iam not tolerate maan sir angry

Choti: sent message to jiju.

Chandu: Ok choti baby

Vicky: Girls we already late lets go for ur boring shopping

Chandu: How will I find out maan sir see my message

Vicky: Call maan bhai and tell him, see my message and reply soon with teasing tone

Swara and choti giggled & went out with Vicky.

Chandu mind voice: Vicky is right ,first I sent message and then call maan sir

Message: Maan sir, If i send ur food to kc or some other place.

KC

Maan see Chandu message and tried to reply his message

Chandu call and maan pickup the phone

Chandu: Maan sir see my message and reply soon, iam waiting for ur message and cut the call

Maan angry face: Chandu

Mall

Swara and choti enjoying her shopping and Vicky got irritating insake of girls behaviour.

Swara talk someone and choti come to swara side.

Swara: Aunty she is my friend choti

Choti see her face and her face change to shocked expression.

"

Choti faint in ground and swara tapped choti cheeks but no response.

Lady: Swara beta suddenly what happened to her , why she faint with worried face.

Choti: I don't know aunty

Vicky: Shona what happened to choti, why she sleep in ground

Swara: Bhai, she faint, lift her

Vicky pickup choti in his arms and move to car

Swara: Aunty I call u later.

Lady: If she is alright then call me with worried face

Swara: Ok aunty..went out

Vicky: Shona we need go to hospital with worried tone

Swara: No bhai, I already called Shilpa aunty , she come km

Vicky: Ok, call Gb and maan bhai

Swara call geet phone and geet attend her call

Geet: Ha Shona tell me dear and maan was standing near geet back

Swara: Di , come km soon

Geet: What happened Shona why u tensed.

Swara: Oh choti faint in mall.plz come soon iam scared di

Geet: kya Iam coming , u stay with her with worried voice and cut the call

Geet: Choti faint in mall, we need go km soon with worried tone

Maan: suddenly what happened to her

Geet: I don't know maan plz lets go with crying face

Maan: Nothing happened to our choti , stop ur crying mishty

...

Maaneet, Adi and pinky come km and everyone rushed choti room

Dadi, swara and Vicky waiting outside of choti's room with worried face.

Geet: Shona she is alright na with moist eyes.

Swara: I don't know di, aunty check choti with worried face

Everyone waiting for doctor and doctor come out

Geet: Dr she is alright

Sheela: Nothing to worry but she take any medication for any type of phobia

Geet: claustrophobia treatment doctor.but 5 yrs back we stopped her medication and then she not feared anything.

Shilpa: I think she saw related past person or anything remind her past incident that only she faint nothing else.if she behave strangely or rudely and give this medicine.

Geet: Ok doctor thank u

Shilpa: Maaji iam leaving now if any urgent, call me and Shilpa patted swara cheek ,shona baby u also doctor but u scared in little thing

Swara: but she is my friend aunty.iam not tolerate anything happened her.

Dadi: Ok shilpa beta.shilpa smiled left the place

Inside room

Choti sleeping in her bed and geet caring her hair

Choti murmuring in sleep: Iam not stay in this place plz bhai save me and iam scared,plz leave me, I want see my bhai

Choti wakeup in sleep shout: Bhai ...

Everyone worried about choti state and geet tears flowing in her eyes.

Choti: Iam not stay in this place and bhai where r u continuously shout

Geet slap choti cheek and choti come conscious. no one understand anything why choti shout and why geet slap choti.

Choti: Angel hug geet tightly with crying vigorously

Geet: Nothing my bachaa iam with u na and stop ur crying dear.

Dadi signaled everyone go out except choti and geet in her room

Choti placed her head in geet lap and geet caring her hairs

Choti: I want go back Chennai.i feel safe in maa and papa place only.plz arrange my flight ticket di with feared face

Geet: Iam with u , noone separated my choti with me.

Choti hug geet waist protectively and slept in her lap , geet placed choti head in pillow and cover blanket and kiss her forehead and went out.

Everyone waiting outside

Vicky: Gb what happened choti ,why she behave strangely and what is claustrophobia with pain voice.

Swara: bhai claustrophobia means fear of confinement.

Maan: pari I am not understand.

Swara; if any person stay enclosed place or any other dark room without window.that feared person affected by claustrophobia. In choti childhood something happened that only she affected claustrophobia.

Maan: geet why she have panic attack

Geet: I will tell u later maan and first I need talk with shona and swara come to my room

Geet room

Geet: what happened in mall and tell me clearly.

Swara: I introduced sansky mom to choti suddenly she faint

Geet: whose sansky

Swara: I already told u iam in love with sanskar and he break up with me.

Geet: but u not told clearly and even iam not see his photos and I don't know his full name.

Swara: his name is sanskar maheswari and show sanskar photos to geet

Geet shocked mindvoice: it means sanskar bhai lady love none other shona and choti saw annapurana aunty ( sanskar mom) in mall that only she faint. Now What I will do

Swara: sanskar ,maan bhai,adi bhai and ranjith bhai studied same college and best friend. i fallen love with sanskar but first he not accept my love because of maan bhai friendship.

Flashback start

Swara: sanskar why u lie to me , I know u also love me then why u not accept ur love.

Sanskar: iam not love u with fake angry face

Swara: this is ur last warning if u not accept ur love then u not see me alive.

Sanskar: what u said with angry face.

Swara: why u angry sanskar maheswari and if I alive or die what ur problem

Sanskar shout:I have problem because I love u and I cannot live without u.

Finally my stupid friend proposed his love to my pari

Swasan : maan /bhai

Maan , adi and Vicky standing infront of them with teasing face

Vicky: shona finally sanskar bhai proposed u with teasing tone.

Adi: bhai nahi jijaji/Brother in law

Vicky: sorry sanskar jijaji/BIL

Swara hide behind sanskar back and sanskar in tensed face.

Maan: pari why u hide behind sanskar and come my side.

Swara come maan side and maan side hug to swara.

Sanskar: plz maan don't break our friendship and I don't know when I fallen love with swara , after I realized my love and I avoided her completely.in frustration I told her ,I need ur friendship rather than my love.

Maan: I give right nickname to u stupid. Why I break our friendship and iam also happy that my pari got best life partner in her life.

Swara hugged maan tightly: thanks bhai

Maan kiss swara forehead: ok I think u both need privacy with smirked face

Adi: ha maan I don't want see my sister beat my dear friend opps jijaji with teasing tone

Vicky come sanskar side: if u alive then call me which hospital u admitted jijaji with teasing face

Maan: take ur time pari winked to sanskar. Everyone left out

Sanskar:maan don't leave me alone and iam also come with u guys with fearing voice

Swara her hand in her waist : Mr Maheswari iam waiting

Sanskar pull her and swara fallen his chest : I love u shona

Swara: I love u sansky

...

Both family accept swasan love because both family rich and good names in society but one phone call changed their destiny

Swara : hello who is this

Lady: iam also like u and sanskar betrayed me .now iam pregnant with his child.

Swara: what rubbish you talk about my sanskar.

Lady: I know u not trust my words but he betrayed many women. u trust that sanskar then go xyz hostel and room 205. U will find out real face of sanskar.

Swara: I am going that hostel because I will prove u my sanskar not cheat me

Lady: first go and then u also break down like me and cut the call.

...

Swara come hotel and knock - room 205 and one girl open the door .girl wore only bathrope.swara enter the room and see sanskar sleep in bed with bare chest.

Swara: sanskar with moist eyes painful voice

Sanskar wake up and look at swara

Sanskar get up in bed: swara what r doing here with irritate face.

Swara: iam one asking this question to u and why sanskar

Sanskar: Yeh I affairs with many girls so what with angry face

Swara : U r telling lie right

Sanskar: U seeing in ur own eyes ,everything is truth and everyone know we are engage soon don't do any drama in this place

Swara: what engagement u talk about and u break my trust sanskar and run out the place with crying face

Swara told everything to maan and maan went to sanskar place with angry face

Flash back end

Swara: u know di even he insulted my maan bhai and break up our relation then maan bhai and sanskar become enemies in professional field with crying face

Swara hug geet and geet carrying her back

Geet: shona now also u think he betrayed u

Swara: no di first iam also angry with him but I know he love me so much .after I asked him many time but he not opened up.i don't know why he behaved me and why he insulted my maan bhai.

Geet: ok shona , u go to ur room.

Geet mind thought: sanskar bhai never betrayed anyone specially his shona . I know he love her so much. Whenever he talked to me that he said only about his khadoos friend and his shona . I need talk to bhai about choti and shona matter

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