Cover : 9/10
The only reason i cut 1 point cause the title covered the entire width of the book without leaving any margin and the fact that the author's name and book title are of the same font,color and similar in size
Blurb : 4/5
The blurb is okay but there isn't enough content in it,there are mostly one liners but if you want it to be mysterious then its okay
Plot : 9.5/10
I really like the plot,its rare to construct a plot without any loopholes,the only problem is that the whole series is built around the MC's brother's plan being much worse than MC expected
Descriptions/emotions through out the story : 14.5/15
The readers expect it all,Drama and a pinch of romance and comedy maybe and a little bit of thrill.So its obvious that readers expect stunning dialogues and gorgeous descriptions,the descriptions are beautiful but thats the thing there are rarely any dialogues and when they are there,they are too lengthy.You can't interest the readers if you only tell them what you see around you,you need to add more spice to the story.
Overview
I really liked the story and i'll continue reading it,I hardly see any brotherly books nowadays so this was pretty refreshing,I'm a sucker for family drama.Also i'll recommend you to use an editor
Your final points are 37/45
Note
I'm sorry that this was a little late but i had a lot of things going on,I hope you understand.I'm sorry for the harsh review also and i hope you didn't get offended.
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