Make me a promise (Vic fuente...

By _Darkangel36363

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*My first published story, I wrote this when I was 15..although it's not written that well and it barely make... More

Meetings and greetings
awkward introductions
sibling rivalry?
Playing "nice"
Old aquaintances
She recited every reason she's fine
Prior engagments
Party time
party time part II
This can't be happening...
getting even
stay away from my boyfriends
Without you there is no me
second chances won't leave us alone
I've never told a lie...and that makes me a liar
I'll never let you freeze
one hundred sleepless nights
maybe we're just having too much fun
Tonight I'll make you feel beautiful once again
Sharpen your teeth and bite as hard as you want
the first punch
But I can't save the world from the creatures that don't die
What's so good about picking up the pieces
I still hold your breath so you wont leave
what if I cant forget you

Make me a promise here tonight (Final chapter)

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By _Darkangel36363

So, I was going to post this tomorrow morning (christmas morning) as a christmas present to all of you but I just can't wait to put it up so here it is. Hoep you enjoy and have merry christmas xx

~~~Hayley's P.O.V~~~

I was a woken by the soft sound of someone humming, I opened my eyes to see Tony siting next to my bedside singing quietly to himself.

"Mmm Tony?" I whispered, my voice was still pretty raspy but it had gotten a lot better.

"Oh Hayley? You're awake!" Tony whisper/yelled a huge smile spread across his face as he got up and hugged me tightly.

"Oww..Tony the arm! I can't breathe.... Tony...." I giggled as he quickly released me, I smiled at him when I herd light snoring behind me.

I turned my head to see Vic, sleeping peacefully next to me looking a little squished but so cosy at the same time.

"Awwwww, look at him" I squeaked as I looked at my adorable boyfriend.

"Yeah, Vic's a cutey" Tony said, I turned and gave him a funny look.

"Oh I didn't mean it like that...I have a girlfriend remember!" He laughed nervously putting his hands up defensively.

"Speaking of your girlfriend where is she? and the rest of the gang?"

"Oh I got up early, I wanted to see how you were before everyone else came and you got bombarded."

"Awwww, see this is why I love you Tony! Also the fact that you cook amazing food helps." I giggled.

We talked and talked, I always loved having conversations with Tony I could tell him everything and vice versa.

"So, how was your big gig?" I asked.

"It was amazing, I really wish you could have been there, you would have been so proud." He said biting his lip.

"Well, definitely next time, okay?"

"Aheh, okay then. He wrote and dedicated a song to you...." Tony said looking past me at Vic who was still fast asleep, poor guy was really knocked out.

"What? Really? But he never lets me even touch or see his music. Why would he write a song about me?" I asked, my mind reeling, I couldn't believe he actually wrote me a song, let alone sang it in front of a massive room filled with 1000 strangers.

"He wrote it because he loves you Hayley. Vic writes about his experiences, yeaah he's shy about his music but that's just vic. You should have seen him when he sung it yesterday...I've never seen anyone preform with as much soul and passion as he did when he sang that song."

"I really wish I had seen it now..." I said, feeling a little guilty that I had missed it.

"Like you said next time right?" Tony smiled and winked at me.

"What is that supposed to mean?" I asked.

"HAYLEY!!!!" before he could reply I herd, screams and yells enter the room and soon I was engulfed in a sea of hugs.

"Oh my god! I have been worried sick about you slut! Oh my god, you are never to be left alone ever again. You can stay with me for all I care you're just....NO!" Dylan rambled and he hugged me tight not letting go.

"Watch the arm Dylan!" I yelled, he let go giving me an apologetic look.

"sorry.." He giggled.

"Anyway, you won't have to worry about me living alone anymore Dylan."

"Whyyy? Oh god, are you leaving the country? Are you becoming a nun? you going to live in the church? OH MY GOD HAYLEY! YOU'RE BECOMMING A NUN AREN'T YOU!!!" Dylan yelled flailing his arms every which way, I cracked up laughing at the sight of my insane best friend.

"Dylan! calm yo tits. I'm not becoming a nun!" I yelled over his screeching, causing everyone else to laugh.

"Oh thank god!" He said flopping down on the chair next to Tony.

"Yeah Dylan, Hayley's going to be living with me...err us." I herd Vic say as he put his arms around me.

"Morning babe." He said sleepily kissing my lips lightly.

"WHAT?!" Jaime yelled as he ran over and jumped on my bed.

"Ahhh...hi Jaime!" I giggled.

"Hayley are you really living with us! OMG this is going to be sooooo cool! Now we can play COD all day everyday YAAAAY!" Jaime cheered as he sat in between Vic and me with a giant smile on his face.

"awwww nooooooo!" Vic groaned and shoved Jaime off the bed, making the rest of us laugh again, in the corner of my eye I could see Mike holding hands with a beautiful girl. I turned towards them and smiled. Mike walked over and hugged me tight.

"I'm glad you're alive Hayley!" He said kissing my forehead.

"Yeah you aren't the only one." He laughed as he grabbed onto the girls hand again.

"This must be Frenchi..Right?" I said giving Frenchi a massive grin, in return she gave me a small nod and a shy smile.

"Mike has told me so much about you, it's great to finally meet you."

"Same to you..." She said still smiling.

I gave him a wink, and he just giggled as he wrapped his arms around Frenchi's waist.

"Hayley!" I herd a familiar squeal, everyone turned their heads to the door and we saw Lauren stumble into the room with Starbucks for everyone in her hands, a massive grin spread over Tony's face as he walked over and kissed his girlfriend as well as helping her with the drinks which they handed out to everyone.

"Lauren! Hey aww thanks, you didn't have to..." I smiled as she hugged me.

"Oh shut up, yes I did. After everything you've done for me it's the least I could do." She giggled and took a seat on Tony's lap, who had taken his place back on chair next to my bed. I looked around and took it all in, the image of our little group all together and happy, I couldn't help but smile to myself.

"What are you smiling at?" Vic whispered in my ear and he nuzzled his face into the nape of my neck sending shivers up my spine as he planted little kisses on my neck.

"Our family..." I said smiling, he jerked his head up and stared at me in shock.

"Our what?!" He whispered.

"Our family..." I repeated with a smile.

"Family? Hayley. Are you pregnant?! But we haven't even.... what the hell?" He whispered furiously.

"Oh my gosh Vic! I didn't mean it like that I meant, family as in Us, Tony, Jaime,Mike, Lauren, Frenchi and Dylan....all of us here just like one big happy family!" I giggled, as I watched a wave of relief wash over Vic's face.

"ooooh right! Pffft I knew that..." He laughed running his fingers through his hair.

"Mhhm sure you did." I said Kissing his lips.

"Mmmm, you know...If you wanted to....try for a family...I'd be more...than happy." He said between kisses, which caused me to giggle into the kiss.

"Mmmm maybe later, after I get this sling off my arm okay?" He pulled away, biting his lip and nodding.

I turned my head abruptly as I herd Jaime's phone ring.

"Hello, Jaime preciado speaking?" He answered.

"Oh hi!" He continued we all watched him curiously as his expression turned into confusion, then shock, and then pure excitement.

"Oh my god! Thank you so much...this is absolutely amazing! No seriously thank you so much we will be there...thank you again." He said as he hung up the phone. As soon as he hung up he began whooping and cheering and dancing around.

"Jaime...JAIME!" We all yelled at the same time, causing him to stop dancing and look at us.

"What the fuck dude...?" Mike said.

"Oh...ahem. Sorry guys, but I just got some fucking fantastic news!" He exclaimed.

"Well....What are you waiting for? spit it out!" Vic said.

"Oh right, well That was Kevin Lyman...he's the founder of the Vans warped tour and guess what?!"

"WHAT!!" we all shouted.

"Whoa okay okay, anyway he was at the gig last night! and he said that Jordan, the guy the organised the event had given him our number and he said he was so blown away by our performance, THAT HE IS OFFERING US A SPOT ON THE VANS WAPRED TOUR NEXT YEAR!" Jaime yelled with excitement.

"OH MY GOD!" Tony and Mike yelled.

The four boys cheered and danced around until one of the nurses came in and told us to be quiet.

"Dude this is amazing!" Vic whisper/yelled.

"I know! But he said he want's us to go see him next week to discuss it."

"I'm so proud of you boys!" I said kissing Vic and giving the other boys a big grin.

"Ummm, I'm sorry to interrupt but I have to ask you all to leave, I need to run a few tests with Hayley and then I assure you if all goes well, she will be going home today." Said one of the doctors who had stepped into the room, everyone said their good byes except Vic who stayed in the waiting room till I was finished.

"Wow, you have a lot of family..." The doctor said as he looked over his clip board.

"Aheh...I'm pretty lucky to have them." I replied.

~~~Jaime's P.O.V~~~

"Well would you look at that, everything turned out fine" I said smiling to myself as Mike, Tony, Lauren, Frenchi, Dylan and I walked out into the cool hospital car park.

"Aheh yeaaah, now we can finally get back to having a "normal" life.." Tony said with arm around Lauren.

"Hey guys we should do something for Hayley..." I said, thinking about all the horrible events she had been through recently.

"Like what Jaime?" Mike said looking at me curiously.

"I don't know, I just what to do something for her...after all she's been through I think she deserves it." I said shrugging.

"You boy's should throw a surprise party for her." Frenchi said smiling.

"Oh my god, Frenchi that is a great idea!" i exclaimed.

"Yeah and it can also be a celebration for you're music success!" She said again getting excited over the thought.

"Oh yes! Okay let's do this!" Mike said.

"OKAY! You guys go home and get cleaning and inviting people over. Frenchi and I will go to the store and get some stuff seeing as it was out idea" I said taking Frenchi's hand and leading her towards my car, Frenchi giggled and followed me.

"You're seriously stealing my girlfriend...really Jaime." Mike yelled across the car park.

"Not stealing just borrowing, I promise she'll be fine!" I yelled getting into my car with Frenchi, I blew a kiss out the window towards mike and drove off.

"I hope you don't mind this, I thought because you thought of it, you would know what to get and it could be a great way to get to know each other" I said smiling.

"I don't mind, besides I think it would be good for me to get to know some of mikes other friends and in Vic's case, brother. You all seem really close." She said looking down at her lap.

"Oh we are, don't worry Frenchi You'll fit right in!" I said reassuringly.

"Thanks Jaime, is there anything I should know about the others to you know, get on their good side?" She asked.

"Ummm, well Tony likes turtles and star wars so just start mention those and you're in, uhhh vic..Anything musical and Hayley...um. Well she's just nice all around so you two will get along fine and Lauren...Laurens pretty much the same as Hayley. But above all else just be yourself!" I said pulling into Wal-Mart.

"And what about you?" She said looking at me.

"Me? uhhh if you have a sister or a hot friend you can hook me up with that could be nice, but you're already cool with me soo don't even worry about it!" I said laughing, she laughed back and we made our way into Wal-Mart to do our shopping.

We grabbed cups and beer and plates and all that other stuff you get for parties, we were standing at the check out counter when my phone started ringing, it was vic.

"Vic what's up?"

"Hey Jaime, Hayley finished her tests and they're all good but she has to wear a sling on her arm. We're on our way home right now okay?"

"WHAT NO!" I yelled earning a weird look from Frenchi and the check out girl.

"Jaime? are you okay?" Vic asked confusion in his voice.

"Uhh sorry, listen Vic is Hayley with you?" I asked a little more quietly.

"No, well yes kind of. She's waiting in the car and I'm not in the car. If that makes sense."

"Yeah I get it, Okay can you like uhh I don't know take her somewhere away form home please? Just for a little bit."

"Whyyy? Jaime what's going on?"

"Well, Frenchi, Tony, Mike and Lauren and I thought it would be a great idea to throw a surprise/celebration party for the band and Hayley."

"Oh cool!"

"Exactly, so I need you to take Hayley away for a bit until I call you and tell you to come back okay Vic?"

"Sir, yes sir. will do. Okay I'll see you...whenever. Bye!"

I smiled hanging up the phone and turning towards Frenchi who was waiting with the bags in her hands.

"Okay let's go throw a surprise party!" I yelled walking out of the store.

~~~Vic's P.O.V~~~

I got in the car next to Hayley and smiled.

"So are we going home or what?" She asked smiling back at me.

"Uhh not quite...I want to take you somewhere." I said racking my mind with where the hell I was going to take her.

"Ohh where are we going Romeo?" She giggled.

"Aheh....that is..a s-surprise?" I said more as a question.

"Hmmm okay let's okay!" She said turning the radio on, I sat frozen for a moment still wondering where to go.

"Vic?....are we going or what?"

"Oh right yeaah, I was just uhh...yeah let's okay." I stuttered as i put the car into drive.

"Oh my gosh I love this song!" She exclaimed as she turned the sound on the radio up and the car began vibrating with the sound of Parkway drive, blasting through the speakers. Hmmm...Parkway drive...PARK! That's it I knew exactly where I would take her. Gaining my confidence back I picked up the speed and drove to the little park where we had our first date.

*

"Oh my god vice...is this where I think it is?" She said gasping as she got out of the car.

"Yuup, the park where we had our first date. I thought you might appreciate it after everything that's happened." I said engulfing her in my arms.

"Oh my, this is so...I can't even." She said almost speechless.

"C'mon let's chill on the swings..." I said taking her hand and leading her to the swings, she sat in one of them and I began pushing her gently, it was quiet, we were the only ones in the park.

"What am I going to do when you become a huge rock star and you're always away on tour." She sighed.

"I'll bring you with me..." I said, but we both knew that was going to be impossible.

"Sing to me." She said abruptly.

"What?" I asked a little taken back by her sudden change of subject.

"Sing to me, sing the song you sang last night at your show...."

"Uhh well okay umm...sure." I stuttered before clearing my voice and began singing, I sang with as much passion as i had on stage. I sang as I pushed the swing, taking in every aspect of this moment, her hair her face and her smell. I was really deeply in love with this girl.

Make me a promise here tonight, love like a tidal wave

Dreamless in early graves, I never want it to be this way

The chemicals will bring you home again

This is it, when it's done, we can say that,

When it's sudden death we fight back!....Fuck it." I said as I stopped the swing from swinging walked around to face her and kissed her with everything I had in me.

Tears had filled her eyes and she kissed me back just as intensely. She pulled away slowly, her hands on my face and looked into my eyes.

"I love you Hayley...so much that it hurts. I love you with everything i have in me." I said before kissing her again.

My phone began to ring and I had to force me self to stop the kiss and answer it.

"Jaime?...Everything's good?" I asked.

"Yuup, you can come home now, everything's set up and everyone is waiting so hurry up!"

"Okay we're coming." I said hanging up.

"C'mon we have to go now!" I said helping Hayley off the swing.

"What? Where?" She asked trying her best to keep up with me as we made our way back to the car.

"It's a surprise" I said with a wink as I opened her car door for her.

"Well, you're just full of surprises today huh?" She giggled as I closed the door and got into the drivers seat.

~~~Hayley's P.O.V~~~

Here, we were standing outside the front door of our home...it felt good saying that...our home.

"Really...you're surprise was taking me home?" I said bluntly before breaking into another smile.

"What can I say, I'm predictable..." Vic said with a cute boyish giggle before knocking on the door.

"You're anything but that Vic..." I said, the door swung open and Jaime greeted us.

"Oh hey guys, Hayley welcome home!" He said as he escorted us into the lounge.

"SURPRISE!!!!!!" Everyone yelled, I was so shocked, I looked around the room to see all the boys, Lauren and Frenchi and Dylan as well as all my other friends.

"Oh my god...You guys did this.... for me?" I said looking around at everyone in the room.

"Thank Frenchi, she was the brains behind the idea." Jaime said gesturing to Frenchi who just stood in the middle of the lounge blushing.

"Oh Frenchi! I'm not sure how I can ever thank you!" I said as I hugged her who seemed a little surprised.

"Don't worry about it, it was my pleasure. But I couldn't have done it without help from everyone else." She said.

I went around a hugged everyone and the party began. We drank and talked and danced it was truly a great night, Tony had even cooked up a shitload of food.

"Hey, Hayley come here for a second," the boys said pulling me into the kitchen, where they were all standing in a semi circle.

"What's going on now?" I said looking at each of them.

"Nothing we just wanted to give you a little something, to show how much you mean to us." Tony said.

"Yeah, we're family now and nothing is ever going to come between that, not even some slut face who---"

"Okay that's enough mike i get.." I said cutting him off and giggling.

"Anyway as a way of saying we love you we wanted to give you this." Jaime said as Vic handing me a small rectangular parcel, I shook it and began to take off the wrapping paper which had turtles on it coincidentally.

"Do you like the wrapping paper I chose it!" Tony said proudly putting up his hand.

"Yes turtle I love it." i said still unwrapping the present to reveal a beautiful black and white picture frame that had a picture of all four boys and myself at the beach, I turned it over and read what they had written. 'Dear Hayley, Surprise I bet you weren't expecting this. Anyway we just wanted to say we love you form the bottom of our hearts. Love Jaime,Tony,Mike and Vic xoxo'...awww shit. My eyes began to fill with tears of joy and I could help but shed a few tears.

"Oh god! She hates it!" Jaime yelled covering his face, I laughed and shook my head.

"No no no, I love it! You guys.....I really don't know how I got so fricking to meet you. I love you guys so much!" I said stilling crying.

"GROUP HUG!!!" Jaime yelled and I was sandwiched into a sea of arms.

"We love you Hayley!" Mike said.

"I love you guys too!" I managed to mumble into the hug.

"Well we better get back to the party." Mike said as he Tony and Jaime left. I was about to follow them out when Vic's arms grabbed me and pulled me into his embrace.

"Thank you...for everything." I said squeezing him tightly and kissing his lips.

"Make me a promise here tonight okay?" He said still holding me in his arms.

"what is it?" I asked.

"Promise me you will never leave me, promise me if anything is wrong that You will come and talk to me. Promise me you will never forget how much I love you...please." He said, I lifted his chin with my hands so he would look me in the eyes.

"I promise Vic..I love you."

THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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OMGZ IT'S OVER, THAT'S IT! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO WITH MY LIFE AHHHHHH! THANK YOU ALL SOO MUCH FOR READING, AND ENCOURAGING AND INSPIRING ME TO WRITE THIS STORY, I REALLY LOVE YOU ALL AND YEAAAH YOU ARE JUST FUCKING AWSOME. UH THERE MAY OR MAY NOT BE A SEQUEAL DEPENDS IF I CAN FIGURE OUT A STORYLINE, FEEL FREE TO HELP ME IF YOU HAVE AN IDEA FOR ONE. I HOPE YOU ALL HAVE A MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR AND I WILL SEE YOU GUYS WHEN I BEGIN A NEW STORY!!!

ROCK ON GUYS XXX

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