Falling for a cholo

By Cum4Kai

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You a new girl in LA well West Coast on LA. You fall for a boy in a gang. What will happen? More

Characters
New school😬
Night time 🌖
You and Carlos
The sneak in🥺
I like him🥰
The big fight
Carlos won't give up for your love
Everything🥺
Something🥰
Those days🙄
The bleed out🙏🏽
The break up💔
Trying be happy again😩
Stuck in the moment😩
The save😊
I love you for life❤️
Ghostin😢
The video of your mom💔
I'm cold
Carlos!
Our love is never ending
Is he cheating?
The talk with Desiree
Less talking more touching
Sorry but cheating on isnt going bye Carlos
Hey...
A date?
The date
Why are you doing here?
Im sorry
Idk if I trust you again...
The note...
Why you want me dead?
Goodnight♥️
Me and you🥺
I think so..
Word😍
Night cruising🎭
Reading the book to Carlos

Your not my real dad.

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By Cum4Kai

Next day

Carlos gave you a kiss and left.

You:"Bye, be safe text you later"
Carlos:"Bye, I will be waiting"

You close the door, your dad walk downstairs. You saw and didn't talk to him

"Dad":"Morning!"
You didn't talk back

He grabs your arm

"Dad":"I said morning"
You:"Ok"
Dad:"I'm your father and you got say it back"
You:"Ok dad or should I call you that? Father. You ain't my dad. My dad past away 6 years ago. The person I thought was my Tio was my dad. Nick."
Nick:"So you know?"
You:"Yeah! That why you knock on my door"

Nick grabs you by the back of your neck

Nick:"Your mother was a fool just like you. Yes, I called the North side gang to kill her and your true father. She was in love with him not me and I didn't want that to happen. That why I always said that not my kid because your not mine kid. Never be my kid. Your a fool and since I don't want you dead because I want that Carlos kid to be die"
You:"Let me go! Weirdo!"

He chokes you into your fainted. He puts you in the back of the car and break your phone. He drives to a house, you woke up and notice your were not in your house instead your in this dirty scary room. It was dark

Your POV:
Where am I? I'm so scared right now. It was cold and dark. Where my phone? I had it with me! Wait I see a little bit of light. The door is locked. Ugh! Where am I?

You:"HELP!!! Where am I?!"

You saw the door open, it was person you though was your dad.

Nick:"Shut up! I can't watch tv"
You:"Let me go"
Nick:"No! No one can't find you or anything! Not even Carlos"
You:"He will find me"




To Carlos

John:"Yo Carlos why you stuck in that phone?"
Carlos:"Cause y/n isn't answering me"
Chris:"Maybe she in the shower?"
Carlos:"No, because it's like 5pm and she showers around 10pm"
Eddie:"Let's go to her house then because I see the look of your face"
Carlos:"Come on"

They go to your house

Lz:"Y/n?"
Carlos:"babe?"
Eddie:"She wasn't in her room or the bathroom"
Carlos:"The fuck?"
Bryan:"Who phone is this?"
Carlos:"It's her phone and it- oh hell no! Homies get yo guns and shii. Her "dad" is fucken crazy. She told her thought was her dad but isn't her dad that she knows who her real dad and we know why they died because her "dad" told the North side. Y/n mom was the same as us."
Nelson:"Come on"
Carlos:"I'm driving"

They all look for you














































Where are you?

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