Maaneet Journey - Marriage at...

By KalpanaR1010

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This journey based not only two pure soul marriage of course none other my maaneet..Maaneet lovable pair eve... More

Prologue
Character sketch
PART 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 13
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23
Part 24(A)
Part 24 (B)
Part 25
Part 26
Part 27
Part 28
Part 29
Part 30
Part 31
Part 32
PART 33
Part 34
Part 35
Part 36
part 37 & 38
Part 39
Part 40
Part 41
Part 42
Part 43
Part 44
Part 45
Part 46
Part 47
Part 48
Part 49
Marriage Part 50 A
Marriage Part 50 B
Marriage Part 50 C
Part 51
Part 52
Part 53
Part 54
Part 55
PART 56
Part 57
PART 58
PART 59
PART 60 A
PART 60 B
PART 61

Part 12

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Place : Geet apartment.

Geet : Iam not deserve him, he is rich person

Geet heart: U r fool, he love u that only he care for u

Geet mind: Geet not stupid , u r stupid and he is rich person, he want like to marriage to rich girl neither than to middle class girl.

Geet: she is right .he not accept me to his wife with sad voice.

Geet heart: But Geet pinky said he is worried for u and appointed more no of doctors, checkup only for u.

Geet little smile : Ha

Geet mind: Appointed doctor team and he also worried to u. its only sympathy for u its not his love to u.

Geet face fell down.

Geet heart: Dont hear her words and in party u looked ,his eyes shows only love for u right.

Geet :ha I saw he was looking only for me.he eyes full of love for me , he was missing me so much.

Geet mind: U thinking about him only but think that girl also, she hug him and said she is his wife

Geet heart: He is not married that girl lied

Geet mind : Yes he is not married may be she is future wife .i mean his fianc

Geet shout both are stopped , iam already confused,now u both are confusing more.leave me alone.

Geet heart and Geet mind vanished in air.

Pinky: Geet why ur shouting and touch her forehead said ur fever reduced letgo change ur dress and I already packed our things

Door bell rings and pinky went to Open the door.

Pinky open the door and saw sanskar Stand in front of door..

Pinky: Come inside bhai

S: How is geetu

P: She is fine but now little bit fever.

S: Fever, u didnot told me morning.

P: Oh bhai , Geet said not told u about her fever.

S: Where is she.

P: Room

Sanskar went to her room and geet come out the bathroom.

G: Bhai, when u come.

S: Come we need to go hospital first

G : Nothing bhai iam alright.

S: I call doctor .

P: Not again bhai, already more than 10,doctors checked our Geet.

S:  what r u saying

P narrates office incident and sanskar selfthought MSK angry and ruthless person carring my geetu.I want to know all details then only i decided what am I do.

P:Geet u ready and just check packing thing only, if missing anything tell me, I will pack.

S: Geet u have fever, how will go alone both of u and no iam not allow you both go to Chennai.

G: But am all alright bhai, we need to go.

P: Plz bhai, I will take care of her.we need to go.

S: Ok but one condition.

P and g look at each other.said what condition

S: I am also come with u and we are not going flight but we are going my private flight.

G: U also coming and iam so happy bhai.

G hugs sanskar.sanskar gestured pinky join to hug.pinky hug Geet and sanskar.

Place: Khurana mansion

Maan and Adi enter the mansion.dadi sit in sofa

Dadi: Maan and Adi beta come sit with me. Maan and Adi sit next to dadi.

Dadi:u come early today.

Maan: Oh dadi , I have no work that only we come early.( in mind voice, my mishty not in office, how can I stay here)

Dadi: Adi today sun rose in the west or what with teasing tone.

Adi: Iam also same doubt with Adi favourite smile.maan glare to Adi and Adi close his mouth.

Dadi: Maan beta u want to change kc to kh (khurana construction to khurana hospital)

Maan:sorry dadi i didn't got ur words

Dadi: kh all specialist doctor what are doing in kc beta

Maan: Oh dadi (maan eyes gestured Adi to answer dadi question)

Adi: Oh dadi ha maan arranged doctors for our staffs.

Maan: Ha dadi I arranged doctors for free checkup to our staffs.

Dadi: Maan beta but staffs or staff in teasing tone.

Maan get up sofa :dadi I will fresh up and come back, went to his room quickly.

Dadi and Adi laughed loudly.

Dadi stop laughing : Tell me everything adi ,what happened in office today with little serious tone.

Adi stand up: Dadi ,oh iam also need to fresh up and run out to his room.

Maan room

Maan: Dadi always teasing me & pick up the phone and dail to Geet number .phone ring noone pickup the phone.

Other side.

Geet arranged everything for trip.and her phone ring and go to pickup the call and pinky come the place

Pinky: Geet lets go, we already late.bhai in car.

Geet: Just one minute and iam coming

Geet pickup the call and attend the call said hello same time phone switched off because there is no charge in her phone

Maan: Mishty phone switched off and iam eager talk with her, first she not pickup my call, now phone is switched off oh great.

Maan pickup his maa photo: Ur bahu so careless, even she is not care about her health.u know maa today in office she fainted in my arms and narrates everything about office incident.U right maa she is my mishty.she is mine only.u want see ur bahu.maan show Geet photo in his mobile to maa photo.Maa ur bahu so beautiful right not even face and her heart also more beautiful.

Geet , pinky and sanskar journey starts to Chennai in sanskar private flight.

Pinky: bhai ur flight is super, it is not look like normal flight and everything in this flight like in our home.separate rooms, more facility.

Sanskar: it is specially designed pinky.

Pinky: really u idea super.

Sanskar: this is not my idea and fully designed by my khadoos  (Grumpy Person) friends.

Pinky: whose khadoos bhai

Sanskar: he is my friend and iam always call khadoos to him.

Pinky: geet letgo I want see all place in flight.

Geet: u go iam not coming, I need to sleep

Sanskar: pinky u go roaming everywhere, this is ur flight, don't disturb geetu

Pinky: ok bhai, iam hungry, I go to air hostess ask some food, rather I will die. And left to place.

Sanskar laughed said : pinky always think about food only.

Fight landed in Chennai.

Three settled in car ,outside of airport and after some time car stopped in front of geet house, Chennai.

Place :geet house, 11: 30 pm.

Choti waiting outside of house, geet and pinky tapped her choti shoulder and choti turns look at both sis.

Choti hugs geet tightly said: I miss u so much.why u guys are late, iam waiting for u more than 10 minutes.

Geet: u waiting for us only 10 minutes, but u buildup waiting for one day outside of the house.

Pinky: u not missed me, you miss geet only with fake sad voice.

Choti: oh pinky di am also miss u so much and hugs pinky.

Sanskar: my little princess miss me also

Choti look at sanskar and her eyes moist,in mind voice ,my sansky bhai in front of me, iam very happy today but not show anything in her face.

Choti turns to geet: di , letsgo inside we need to surprise to maa and papa and drag pinky hand go to inside.

Sanskar hurts for choti rejection. Geet said: bhai, don't worry, choti happy to see u but not shown her face.

Sanskar: I know geetu,she is love me so much, but she is not talk to me, its really hurt me.

Geet: don't sad, I will talk to her, lets go inside bhai.

Pinky, geet and sanskar arranged everything in hall and choti went to parents room.

Choti knock the door: maa , papa, come out with panic voice.

Maa and paa open the door: choti why ur panic, why u shout beta, u alright, maa checked choti head to toes with worried voice.

Choti: maa angel ..with panic voice. In hall with stammering voice

Maa look at paa: choti papa plz go to check hall, see my child how much scared.

Papa and maa come to hall and choti come behind her parents with smirking smile.

hall light switched off and hall fully darkness

maa: choti papa, go to switch on the light at same time switch on shouts surprise, Happy wedding Anniversary maa and papa.

Maa and papa look at geet, pinky and sanskar standing in front of them.

Papa and maa are happy saw their children.choti said how is my surprise

Maa go to choti and twisted her ears: nowdays ur so naughty .

Choti: maa it is paining, leave my ears with puppy face.

Papa:janu leave my princess ears

Maa leave her,and choti go papa hugs and show her tongue to maa.

Maa: choti papa, u only spoiled my daughters,today prank to us,iam worried to her, she prank to me.

Choti hugs maa said: I love u so much maa and maa also hugs choti.

Geet: maa and daughter, both fight finished, we also here and see us also. Sanskar look at choti, how much happy in this family. Plz god stay happiness in my choti life.

Sanskar said : maa ,papa come and cut the cake.

Geet hugs maa and then papa wishes happy Anniversary

Pinky hesitate hugs to maa and papa.maa look at pinky said: pinky ur not hug ur maa and papa.

Pinky run to maa hugs tightly and cried

Sanskar: geetu, in our house one more crying baby also added look at choti with teasing tone.and geet nods her head.

Choti: iam not crying baby bh..( choti say to bhai, but stopped at middle of word)

Sanskar eager waiting hear bhai word to choti mouth, but she stopped middle in word.

Choti: pinky di, ur sake only all r teasing me and don't cry.

Maa wipes her tears and kiss her forehead said, my child never cry infront of me.

Pinky nod her head: happy anniversary maa and then go to papa hugs happy anniversary papa.

Sanskar also hugs both of them and wishes also.

Choti: come cut the cake and first bite for me only.iam only decorated everything , these people just now came.( pointed out fingers pinky, geet and sanskar)

Papa: yes , my princess ur my first priority , but I love all my children equally.

Maa and papa cut the cake and give first bite to choti and then geet, pinky and sanskar.

Maa : lets go to sleep,it already late, let talk to everything tomorrow.

Choti: but maa

Maa glare to choti: go to sleep. ( maa always maa right, she care about her children, in her angry also shows only for care her children.)

All are went to sleep, pinky, geet and choti in one room and sanskar in other room and maa ,papa in own room.

Geet room

Pinky and choti sleeping peacefully in bed but geet sleep away from her and whole thinking about her maan only.geet look at maan photo in her phone and kiss over phone said iam not deserve u.but in my lifetime ur the only one person occupied in my heart, this heart belong to u only ,ur r king of my heart , good night jaan and slept.

Other side maan : maan thinking geet and kisses her photo. Good night mishty, see u tomorrow I eagerly waiting for morning rise but this night not go fast.i miss u mishty said hug his pillow imagine pillow his mishty and slept.

Next morning.

Maa enter the kitchen shout : omg what happened to my kitchen. Maa eyes scanned whole kitchen , flours spread in ground, vessels are replaced everywhere, kitchen look like war place.

Maa glare to geet, pinky, choti and sansky: what are all did my kitchen.who did this

Geet: we are not done anything,maa with puppy face

Maa: oh, this everything done by any ghost with hand in her hip and papa also enter the kitchen.

Papa: janu why u always scold my children, they want help ur work and that only they come to kitchen and ready for break fast.

All together: yes maa.

Maa look at papa: don't defend them and papa head bow down.

Geet: maa, this idea only by bhai, we r just helping to bhai .choti and pinky nods her head. Geet winked at sanskar and continues said Maa ur princess are innocent, ur prince only done everything with innocent face.

Sanskar: maa don't trust her word, she lieing maa, iam not doing anything,that girls doing everything.

Geet: u don't trust me and ask pinky and choti.

Pinky & choti: she is telling true maa.

Maa went to sanskar place: raise her hand to ( girls thinking slap not girls closes her eyes ,they cannot tolerate seeing their bhai slap from maa ) caring his cheeks and kiss his forehead. Girls eyes widened and mouth open to ground.

Maa look at girls: u people are think, I scold my son, sanskar side hugs to maa said: see my maa in my side only.

Papa: son and mom one team, but papa always daughters team with hug girls and girls shows her tongue to sanskar and mom.

Other side delhi

Maan ready to office , come down and sit in dinning table.dadi, Vicky,adi and swara already in dinning table.

Maan wishes good morning all of u.

After eat his breakfast and maan got up the chair.

Maan: adi u finished ur breakfast and come with my car.

Adi: no maan, I have some work in outside, u go to office, i come later.and maan left out the mansion.

Vicky: adi bhai, u no have work in outside, why u lie to bhai.

Adi: I lied to him because today iam not face his valcono burst out.

Vicky: in morning also bhai mood in good but why he angry with u.

Adi: u come to office , u also know the reason.

Dadi : adi and Vicky why u people murmuring each other ears.

Adi: nothing dadi, iam finished and we are going to office.

both are enter the office,whole staff roaming in office and do their work with tensed face.( romeo is one staff of kc , he is good person but little flirt character)

Adi stop romeo ask what happened in our office, all working seriously in office.

Romeo : adi sir, yesterday our boss in Ramar mood, now he is ravan mood, now devil is back .

Adi And Vicky: if I told to him u said he is ravan and devil, and then what happened to u.with teasing voice.

Romeo: don't do that, my life is ur hands with shaking voice and left out the place

Vicky: adi bhai, I forgot , iwant to go college early and bye bhai and enjoy valcono burst with teasing tone.

Adi: Vicky great escape and now iam only face to lion alone.

Adi enter maan cabin: maan work in laptop and adi silently enter the cabin.

Adi: Good morning sir.

Maan angry glare to adi: this time only come to office with angry tone.

Adi gulped his saliva: I am already informed sir with fear voice.

Maan come stand next to adi and maan hand To correct adi neck tie with said so u already know my mishty leave today but u don't inform me.

Adi: oh sir, I thought to inform u about her,but I forgot it.

Maan wears adi tie tightly to close his neck said iam also forgot ur my childhood friend. Maan smirked.

Adi: No iam not forget,yesterday I told u na ,iam only gave permission leave for her.u surely killed me yesterday itself.that only iam not tell u.

Maan: U think I alive today.

Adi: Maan I don't know that time she is my Bhabhi , plz iam sry ya.

Maan: This time iam forgive but u repeated once again and u hide anything about her.i will kill u in my own hand.u got it Mr adithya

Adi nod his head said: I will tell my saali (sister in law) u threating me.

Maan: U think , MSK scared ur saali and who is ur saali first.

Adi: Hmm Mrs geetanjali maan Singh Khurana.

Maan : geet is ur bhabhi (ur brother wife ) not salli ( wife 's sister ) even geet not pinky sister and pinky has no one

Adi: Yes but now pinky have two sister and one is Geet and other Geet younger sister.

Adi narrated how to accept Geet to pinky her sister.

Adi: Really geet is angel for everyone.u know maan my pinky more happy got her family.now I understand why u always thought about ur mishty in these months with emotional voice.

Maan: Ha Adi she is my angel, my mishty.

Adi : Pinky and me are orphan & maan angry glare to Adi

Maan : How dare u say orphan, u not think our family ur family.but I am consider u also same to me like Vicky.

Adi : Maan iam finished yet, pinky and me are orphan but I got my family back in sake of dadi. Now pinky also got her family.

Maan hugs Adi: U too sad today, pinky also leave today with teasing tone

Adi nods his head: Both are went to Chennai and meet her parents.

Maan: What she is not well, how dare she go to Chennai.

Adi: Come down maan and already talked pinky about her.Geet have no fever don't worried about her.

Maan mind is accepted but maan heart was not accepted.

Other side ,Geet room

Geet standing near balcony.sanskar enter angry face and shout Geet.

Geet turn back look at sanskar and selfthought bhai never raise voice to me now he call me Geet instead of geetu.

Sanskar : Geet what is this ( in party photos - maaneet dance photo and maaneet starring photos and also shows Geet crying runout from the hall videos.) with angry tone.

Geet: Oh ...bhai

Sanskar: Tell me Geet what relation between u and msk. With angry tone.

Geet hears anger voice tears rolled in her eyes: Oh ...he is my husband with closed eyes.

Sanskar: What...with shocking expression.what are u saying.

Geet : Bhai dont angry with me with crying tone.

Sanskar see her tears feeling bad for baby sister and come down his angry: Iam not angry with u said lift her chin with his fingers & look at her face and wipes her tears and help to settled down to her bed.

Sanskar: Tell me how to meet maan

Geet said how to go friend marriage to valpari.( geet and maan went to valpari for friend marriage this flash back part 9)

Flash back starts.

Geet and arohi gossip about college days.

Geet: I call to Arjun jiju and u talk to him.Geet dailed Arjun number.

Otherside,Arjun room

Arjun phone rings.and maan stay in arjun room only.so maan pickup the call.

Maan: Hello who is this with bossy tone.

Geet selfthoughtt: How dare he, he ask me who am I with even bossy tone.

Maan : Any one in line and u r only called and not speak to me, these kind of people are useless.

Geet hears maan words and geet mouth opened wided.

Geet: Who r u , ur not my Arjun jiju and ha what do u say iam useless person.how dare u speak me like that.

Maan: Oh u r a girl, that only u call me to flirt with me.

Geet: U think ur look like my gurmeet Choudhary Handsome guy and I am flirting with u.

Maan: U and ur stupid hero.

Geet: What do u say my guru is stupid.if u r infront of me and I will punch ur cheeks surely.

Maan eyes open widened: U punch me and Arjun interpet maan and Geet conversation

Arjun: Buddy why u speak with angry tone.and who is on line.maan give phone to Arjun.

Arjun: Hello, who is this.

Geet: Jiju (brother in law )who is early spoken with me.

Arjun: Oh he is my buddy and tell me why u angry with him.

Geet told previous conversation about maan and her

Arjun: That only my sherni angry, ok in sake him iam asking sry to u.iam sry my sherni.

Geet: Dont ask me sry and said to him, he is good day today that only iam not in front of him.

Arjun: Surely iam tell ur words to him and plz give phone to my sweet heart.

Geet: No iam not give to her.and bye

Arjun: Sherni plz ..and Geet cut the call.( geet college friend call geet to sherni means lioness)

Arjun look at maan: Maan ur sake only she is not allow me to speak my arohi.

Maan: What can I do

Arjun: U only do and accept sherni allow to speak to my arohi.

Maan : She such a jungle billi and am not talk her once again and I think she is adamant character.

Arjun: No maan she is sherni I accepted but she is not admant .she is such prankstar, brave, child heart and intelligent .

In college days arohi and sherni are close friends.

Arjun : U know my love at first sight.i saw arohi fallen love with her.I want tell her to my love.but iam scare about whom

Maan:: Whom

Arjun: Sherni, arohi friend, she is very possessive and caring about her lovable person. in our college days, she prank everyone but her prank not hurt that person. one day one of my class mate bad mouthing about arohi, u know maan , what sherni did with him.

My class mate sitting in our canteen, ordered sandwich to him.sherni already prepared special sandwich to that guy.(special sandwich nothing sandwich between cream instead of some amount of sand, need spices so little bit more amount of chilli powder and layers with some spoiled vegetables.)

Sherni replaced special sandwich to him, my class mate ate one bit of her .sandwich, his tongue is burning due to chilli powder, he standing in table shout water,

Sherni gave water to him, he drink water fully in one gulped.sherni smirked to him.

Geet: go to hospital otherwise u died after 30 minutes and I mixed some poison tablet in ur drinked water with casually tone.

Guy head his spinning: what , plz save me, iam not badmouthing any girl in my lifetime.

Geet: really, iam not accepted ur words.

Guy: god promise, iam not repeated once again. Go to arohi said to sorry to her.

Geet: I forgive this time but u did it once again.u will face real sherni.

Guy nod his head: plz save me.

Geet: hmmm go to ur room and slep in ur bed, I added only 3 tablet sleeping pills in ur water , not poison tablet. U got it.

Arjun end up story, maan said: really she is sherni

Arjun: that only we call her to sherni.

Flash back ends

Geet told everything to sanskar ( silent talk - next part flash back) how married to maan.

Geet: don't angry with me plz bhai.

Sanskar: this months u don't tell anything about him.

Geet: yesterday only even I know his name.but iam not worthy to him.

Sanskar: why u said u not worthy to him.

Geet:because he is rich person, u know he using his cellphone price is 48 million (4.80 crores)

Geet mouth open widened,and that only I said am not worthy for him.iam middle class girl

Sanskar: u thought iam not ur bhai, that only u said u poor compare to him.

Geet: dont talk like that bhai, iam not considered that point view, iam only think about his family and his status.

Sanskar: first clearly tell me u love him.

Geet: yes , I cannot live without him but iam not stay with him also.

Sanskar: u think love is based on money.

Geet: I never thought about him like that way.but I want know really accepted me to his wife with his whole heartly.

Sanskar: ok i u give idea to u, u follow my ideas( silent talk)

Geet: but I follow ur idea, he is angry with me.what could i do.

Sanskar: he is really love u, he get back to u,what do u say.

Geet half hearted accepted his idea and hugs sanskar and sanskar selfthought maan now iam playing with u with smirking face

Part end

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