Falling for a cholo

By Cum4Kai

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You a new girl in LA well West Coast on LA. You fall for a boy in a gang. What will happen? More

Characters
New school😬
Night time 🌖
You and Carlos
The sneak in🥺
I like him🥰
The big fight
Carlos won't give up for your love
Everything🥺
Something🥰
Those days🙄
The bleed out🙏🏽
The break up💔
Stuck in the moment😩
The save😊
I love you for life❤️
Ghostin😢
The video of your mom💔
Your not my real dad.
I'm cold
Carlos!
Our love is never ending
Is he cheating?
The talk with Desiree
Less talking more touching
Sorry but cheating on isnt going bye Carlos
Hey...
A date?
The date
Why are you doing here?
Im sorry
Idk if I trust you again...
The note...
Why you want me dead?
Goodnight♥️
Me and you🥺
I think so..
Word😍
Night cruising🎭
Reading the book to Carlos

Trying be happy again😩

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Days later

Alfredo texts you

Alfredo😎:"Yo! Yo! Si y/n want come to a party?"

You:"Bet! I'm will go"

Alfredo:"Pick you up in 3 hours"

You:"Oh ok! I'm getting ready for"

You got ready. You took a shower, did your skin care, some makeup, and put your perfume

This your outfit:


Your POV:
Yes, I miss Carlos being with me. But am I not going sit down and sleep into I'm numb again and again. I need have some fun and lucky Alfredo is going take me to this party. For I have forget Carlos because we haven't talked plus he keeps skipping the same class I have with him which hurts me. But we not together. Oh! That's the door

Alfredo:"Woah! You look"
You:"It's okay you can say it"
Alfredo:"You look fine"
You:"Thanks! Alfredo. Now let's go"
Alfredo:"Oh ok! Let's go"

You guys get in the car and drive to the party. You guys enter together, he had his arm around you

You:"I'm get a drink, you want one"
Alfredo:"I'm fine, but look there our friends"
You:"I'm get you one still"

You went to get a drink for you and Alfredo and you heard

Lz:"WEST SIDE LOCOS ARE IN THIS HOUSE FOOS!"

You drop your drink and your heart felt like it fall to the floor. You got in other new drink. You turn and bump into someone.

You:"Sorry, I wasn't looking"
Carlos:"ofc, you were not"

You look up and saw him. You felt like your heart left your body

You:"Sorry to bother. I was just leaving to the person I came with"
Carlos:"Who?"
You:"Someone"
Carlos:"Ight past through. I need a drink with someone"
You:"Ok thanks"

You walked around to Alfredo. You two smile at each other. Carlos saw and got mad because he didn't bought anyone just his group and that all.

Desiree:"So you two?"
You:"Oh what about it?"
Alfredo:"What? Friends can't hang anymore just two together?"
Cynthia:"Ofc they can"
Kio:"Relax you two they just friends"
Alfredo and you:"Thanks Kio"
Cynthia and Desiree laughed

You walked away cause you need use the bathroom, meanwhile you were walking to it a boy grabs you

You:"Let me go"
Boy:"no, your cute"
You:"thanks, but let me go"
Boy:"come in the room with me. Just us two together alone. I have touch up on you"
You:"No, I'm fine. So let me go"
Boy:"Come on"
You:"Trust me I'm good"

Carlos POV:
See y/n with that dress she look so beautiful in it. My eyes couldn't stop looking at her. So beautiful. But see her next to Alfredo. Is just ugh! Hurts my mf heart a lot. I love her and still love her like my love for her is never going to stop and I-

Alex:"Yo homes look at y/n getting hit on. That was all yours-"
Carlos:"stfu! Foo! Shut up!"
Lz:"she not liking it"

You:"Let me go please. I don't want you"
Boy:"Come on"
You:"No, LET ME GO FOO"

Bryan:"You ain't you going help?"
Carlos:"On what?"
Lz:"She not liking him. Ain't nobod- Carlos! Yo foos go get the cAr"

Carlos walks up to you

You:"Stop like your hurting me"
Boy:"Come on"
You push him
You:"No!"
Carlos:"Back up foo!"
Boy:"Little west side"
Carlos:"Ain't nothing little about it. Don't touch her"

Carlos grabs you

Boy:"Can you see we stuck in a moment"
Carlos:"She wasn't liking it"
You:"I was just trying use the bathroom but yo ugly ass start grabbing me"
Carlos:"see she doesn't like you"
Boy:"Then wassup little loco"
Carlos:"wassup then foo"
You:"Carlos no!"

They start fighting, Lz got the boy Carlos was fighting and put in the car

Carlos:"Are you okay"

He looks at you

You:"Yeah thanks"
Carlos:"Np"
You:"You didn't have do that for me, why weren't you with the girl you bought here?"
Carlos:"I didn't grab anyone, because I can't grab anyone. I love you"
You:"I love you too"
Carlos:"But we can't be together because I don't want hurt. Bye"
You:"Carlos..."

Carlos left with his gang.
You walk back to your friend group

Kio:"What happen?"
You:"It was a long line"
Alfredo:"Oh, but come on"

You sat next to Alfredo and put thinking about Carlos








































Carlos will anyways love you

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