Judge: _things_and_stuff_
Mr Criminal By Zandra996
Rules: 5
Reader int: 4
Cover: 3
I personally think that this cover is decent and tbat your style is amazing, but I do have a criteria under which I judge it. I think that when it comes to attacking readers you should put the title on your cover.
Description: 2
I think that you can do much better for your description. Also, you should make some space, and add something from your story. It's just too cliché and people see these kinds of descriptions all the time.
Title: 4
Message: 5
I really like your message. Because the justice does come to light some point, but sometimes, just too late.
Plot: 10
I liked how even though it was tragic you soothed it out with another plot. You did planned them well, and I like them.
Grammar, vocabulary: 13
I didn't find grammatical mistakes, but for the criteria I had to lower the grade due to vocabulary. The story is good do not get me wrong, but simce it is written in this way, short and sweet I didn't get much on what I could judge.
Plot twist, interaction: 10
Emotions, characters: 6
Since the story is short, and the chapters too, I didn't actually get the real feeling. I couldn't grasp on their emotions so well...
Creativity: 10
My opinion: 10
Total: 82/100
My penicillin by leeseulbi08
Rules: 5
Reader interactions: 5
Cover: 3.5
I think that the cover is a bit empty if you would understand me. It does have a really good potential, and personality, but there could be done something with the placement and color.
Description: 5
I like your description. It's really loose, and just makes me feel comfortable about the book. It already gives like a complete feeling of that you can comment whatever you want and that everyone will laugh with you without being pressed.
Title: 5
Message: 3
Plot: 7
The plot is good. I think at the times you were too focused, on explaining that I would just already know what's going to happen.
Grammar, vocabulary: 13
I found the issue here to be the small 'i' which kept repeating and repeating. While writing, try to focus on the details like these, because at the times they can get really annoying. Also, sometimes, romanisation of Korean words can be a bother to readers since not everyone knows what they mean.
Plot twists, interactions: 8
Emotions, characters: 7
At times you were expressing the emotions, and I think that you have a very good starting point with your writing. Just focus on getting really deep inside of you and telling the world how painful something feels, or how happy, and with more readily and imagining everything will fall into place.
Creativity: 9
My opinion: 7
Total: 77.5/100
Come Back by Jiminmariachi
Rules: 3
Not following your judge, and not having the award in your public reading list.
Reader interactions: 4
Cover: 5
Description: 3
I mean, to be honest, this description isn't bad. If I saw this description, I would've read this book for sure. Why so low then? I think that with how much this book really great it is, that you can add something from it, just like the last words, that perhaps you can add something more... but even if you dont, this remains to be a good description.
Title: 5
Your title completely matches with the theme of the story, and also makes me interested to read it.
Message: 5
The message, just like you said in the authors note is that when you call someone who already isn't there anymore wont come back. But still, that person remains to live in our memories.
Plot: 9
You executed your story very well.
The plot was expected, but still the story is short, so an expected plot could be expect. You really did write it very well and I enjoyed it.
Grammar, vocabulary: 15
When it comes to short stories like this, it really is hard for me to judge it. Because, this story is really good, but, because I have limited vocabulary to work with, I probably can't judge your full writing in this book. So, the grammar is good, I didn't find any
Plot twists, interactions: 7
Emotions, characters: 7
You captured the characters personality as much as you could. I really could imagine how much of an amazing person Jimin in this story is. Also, perhaps there could be a deeper explanations of emotions, but over all, I could feel them.
Creativity: 10
My opinion: 10
Total: 83/100
Orb of obscurity by AvyannaTremaine
Rules: 2
Not following your judge, not having the award show in your public reading list.
Reader interaction: 5
Readers were giving a very nice feedback and also continuing to joke and laugh with each other in comments so it really sets up a mood for the book.
Cover: 5
I found at the start the cover a bit confusing, so I had to analyze it and it has many layers and it's nicely edited, and placed. I think that the title a bit blends in with the rest too much, but I still think if it was a different color it would be pop for everything else and gush it down.
Description: 5
Tbe description balances with the story, it has a very nice tone into the story. I like that it gives a good showcase of authors writing and the littlest kind of story.
Title: 5
Message: 5
Plot: 9
I think that you planned the whole story and the plot very well. Also, the chapter were lengthy so it was fun to read through it. The series of plots were very well done, they weren't like forced and you could easily keep up with what was going on
Grammar, vocabulary: 15
I didn't find any grammar mistakes, which I adore so much, I think that when a book is correct with grammar like this one really fills you up and pats your eyes if that's a thing... Your vocabulary is pretty good, things that you describe are easy to picture and imagine
Plot twists, interactions: 8
You have a very good sets of interactions between characters. They are understandable, and you don't get confused on who's talking and who's not.
Emotions, characters: 10
You very well describe emotions and what exactly the characters feel at that moment and how exactly they know to rattle your grounds.
Creativity: 9
My opinion: 7
Total: 84.5/ 100
Judge: suhs_ethereal_love
Book 1 - BElieve In YOUrself By minsuga4evr
• Marks for following rules: 5/5 • Marks for reader interaction: 4/5 • Marks for book cover: 4/5 • Marks for book description: 4/5 • Marks for book Title: 3/5 • Marks for social message: 4/5 • Marks for book plot: 6/10 • Marks for grammar and vocab: 14/20 • Marks for plot twist/attraction: 7/10 • Marks for emotion development: 6/10 • Marks for creativity: 6/10 • Marks for opinion on book: 6/10
• Total: 70/100
• Review: I really quite liked this book. When I first started to read it,I thought it would just be all Group chat style but I actually really enjoyed the mix that came later on. I think that the writer could try to use some alternative language and vocabulary, especially verbs and that they could try to vary their sentence lengths to make the piece flow a little more or show the mood. I personally am not very much into the whole inter-BTS relationships but with the way that this was written, I found that I actually found the couple's really quite cute and they definitely made me smile. Well Done :)
Book 2: Just Because Of Love: P.JM By mintfmints
• Marks for following rules: 5/5 • Marks for reader interaction: 2/5 • Marks for book cover: 4/5 • Marks for book description: 3/5 • Marks for book Title: 4/5 • Marks for social message: 2/5 • Marks for book plot: 5/10 • Marks for grammar and vocab: 10/20 • Marks for plot twist/attraction: 5/10 • Marks for emotion development: 4/10 • Marks for creativity: 4/10 • Marks for opinion on book: 5/10
• Total: 53/100
• Review I think that this book was okay. The overall idea was really interesting but to make it clearer the writer could have used different words and things to make it more interesting. The characters didnt really build and the relationship between the characters came across as quite dull. But to be honest it isn't bad and I am interested to see what happens next! :)
Book 3: 149 Days: Still Never Yours By PurpleLightARMY
• Marks for following rules: 5/5 • Marks for reader interaction: 3/5 • Marks for book cover: 3/5 • Marks for book description: 3/5 • Marks for book Title: 4/5 • Marks for social message: 2/5 • Marks for book plot: 6/10 • Marks for grammar and vocab: 14/20 • Marks for plot twist/attraction: 4/10 • Marks for emotion development: 5/10 • Marks for creativity: 5/10 • Marks for opinion on book: 5/10
• Total: 59/100
• Review: I thought the whole plot of the books was really great. I hadn't seen anything quite like it anywhere else. I think that the grammar and vocabulary could be improved quite a but as I found it difficult to understand what was going on from time to time and I think with a broader and wider range of vocab choices will come better character development and your readers will have a more emotional attachment to the characters ,too. Well done :)
Judge: shyndcl
Mafia Park Jimin by libyapark
Mafia park Jimin rules-5 cover-3 interaction-2 description-2 title-2 social message-1 plot-2 grammar-14 attraction-5 character development-2 creativity-4 my opinion-6
48/100 review the story line is good and the personality of the characters is really good but the thing which you have to improve is the way of describing and some common facts EX: y/n was falling for Jimin in the very first begging . it cant happen right , like someone has killed your father and is beating and abusing you and you fell for him then and there . NO right , so i would suggest you to get more into the feelings of the characters and other than that your story is amazing . good luck.
hells angels by quinn_TheRealQueen
rules-5 interaction-2 cover-3 description-2 title-2 social message-2 plot-2 grammar-12 attraction-2 character development-3 creativity-3 my opinion -6
review The personality of the characters are blooming but something is missing like the feelings , the emotions are missing . the readers know when the character is sad or happy but the feeling is not there . EX: if y/n is happy you can write with words which can suit her self more . but keep it up and you are doing amazing.
The Laurel wreath by NAMJOONIST-
rules -5 cover-4 interaction - 4 description - 4 title - 5 social message - 4 plot - 7 grammar-15 attraction-7 character development-6 creativity-5 my opinion-6
review i really like the way you connect with your readers , it makes your readers to be kind with you . the describing parts are really good and the characters are very realistic . i really like the way you describe the whole situation and the plot is osm.
Judge: lovejiminssmile
A little life by __dew_drops__
Total marks 72/100
Rules 5/5
All rules are followed
Reader interactions 2/5
The reader interaction is less compared to the views.
Cover 3/5
The cover is decent. I would like it if it was a little more attractive.
Description 3/5
The description is very simple and small. It could've been more better.
Book title 4/5
Book title suits the story.
Social message 4/5
It gives message about how hectic can a doctor's life can be.
Book plot 7/10
The plot is nice but it can be improved.
Vocabulary 15/20
Vocabulary and grammar is decently written. The grammar can be improved.
Plot twists and attraction 7/10
The books keeps us in a straight path from my opinion .
Character development 6/10
There is very less character development.
Creativity 8/10
My review 8/10
It gives a really great message about lives of doctors who also have difficult private lives .
The author describes the story well. The author needs to improve on making the plot a little more interesting .
Once upon a time by elinah_of_avalor
Total marks 82/100
Rules 4/5
Has not announced the award on their mb.
Reader interaction 2/5
The reader interaction is very less according to the views.
Cover 4/5
Cover is attractive and suitable.
Description 4/5
The description is appropriate and it also makes us want to read more. It develops some curiousity in the reader.
Book title 4/5
Book title suits the story.
Social message 3/5
There is not a social message but as the story is ongoing it may have one in future chapters.
Book plot 9/10
The plot is very nice.
Vocabulary 18/20
Vocabulary and grammar is good and perfect.
Plot twists 8/10
The story has some plot twists but it still increases our curiosity.
Character development 9/10
The character development is nice.
Creativity 8/10
My review 9/10
The author is good at making the readers keep reading their story. The plot is good and there are very less mistakes.
Stalker by angybear
Total marks 78.5
Rules 4/5
All rules followed
Reader interaction 2/5
Reader interaction is less.
Cover 3/5
Cover is simple yet suitable.
Description 3/5
The description is short and decent.
Book title 5/5
The title is suitable.
Social message 1.5/5
It doesn't really gives a social message.
Book plot 9/10
The plot is nice and decent.
Vocabulary 18/20
Grammar and vocabulary is good.
Plot twist 7/10
There is not much plot twists but the story do makes the readers keep reading it.
Character development 7/10
Character development is good but it can be improved
Creativity 9/10
My review 10/10
The story is great. The author describes the story very well and it has a good plot. Yet the chapters can be longer.
The Royal Patron by _arushiganla
Total Marks ~ 100
Marks for following the rules – 5/5
Marks for reader interaction- 5/5
• According to the comments. I can understand that the readers have enjoyed the book.
Marks for book cover: 2/5 *3
The book cover did not catch my eyes at all. It is very simple and it looked hazy making it look dull and un lively. And I found the same cover in another book of the author. So I suggest the author should work on the cover .
Marks for book description: 3/5
I would say the book description matches the story well but it gave out a lot of description about the plot making the description long.
Marks for book title: 5/5
Marks for social message: 3/5
The story is made up for entertainment process so I don’t think there is any particular social message. But if you only look at the character of Kang Ambrosia then you will get the message of ‘hard work is the path to success' as she was a girl who rose from lower class and become a independent higher class business woman by her dedication and hard work.
Marks for book plot: 8/10
Marks for grammar and vocabulary: 19/20
I would love to say the grammar and vocabulary are used perfectly in the story. No words were repetitive and the words describe the situation and emotions well. But I still could not give you full marks cause maybe my poor eye sight missed some typos and misspelling.
Marks for plot twist: 6/10 *7
The story went smoothly without any plot twist but I would suggest that some plot twists and cliff hangers are needed to spice up the story.
Marks for character development: 7/10 *8
Marks for creativity and way of writing: 8/10
Marks for my opinion on the book: 8/10
According to me I feel idea of the story is good even the writing was creative with mentioning of good quality of words in the fiction which is very rare. But what lacks in the book is the first sight attraction which is the cover of the book which does not attracts many readers at first sight due to it’s looks and colour. And as the book is new I will not talk about plot twisting cause maybe in the future author has planned for surprise plot twists, so the readers have to wait for the surprise gift. Without this critics I have enjoyed the book and I feel other readers will too.
Total Marks: 79/100 *82
Review:
The author created the story uniquely, the characters were well developed. Not many women are strong minded and independent like Kang Ambrosia. And not many men are weak in drinking like Park Jimin. The story is not at all stereotype minded where girls are always weak and boys are always strong. I felt the story is unique. But I would suggest that the author should put more flirty , sad, happy, fear moments to give more feeling to the reader as well as put some plot twist to add spice to the story . Overall the story is well planned out and I suggest the readers to try it out, you will feel a different vibe from the story.
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Bully With No Jams by FrozenHeartsGalaxy
Total Marks ~ 100
Marks for following the rules – 5/5
Marks for reader interaction: 4/5
Marks for book cover: 4/5
The book cover matches with the story but it's a very simple cover with the story name.
Marks for book title: 5/5
Marks for book description: 5/5
The description was neither too short nor to long along with the touch up of humour has made the description interesting for readers.
Marks for social message: 2/5
I did not got any social message as this fanfiction is made for entertainment purpose only.
Marks for book plot: 7/10
Marks for grammar and vocabulary: 19/20
I could not find any grammatical error though full marks can’t be given due to the fact that my poor eye sight might have missed some mistakes in the book.
Marks for plot twist: 6/10
There were few plot twist and cliff hangers in the story. But I would suggest more of plot twists to keep the readers lure around your story.
Marks for character development: 9/10
The characters matches with the characters’ descriptions well. Even the humours which the author has put up in the story can someone roll in ground with laughter.
Marks for creativity and way of writing: 7/10
The writing was in a simple form helping the readers to understand the story easily. There was not much of creativity in the story.
Marks for my opinion on the book: 8/10
High school love stories are not rare. Rich boy and a sassy-nerdy girl are common in school love stories. But with extra sassiness of Y/n and sense of humour along with jamless bully has made the story different making the reader lure around the story for more chapters. Overall I have liked the story very much.
Total Marks~ 81/100
Review:
I have liked the book due to Y/n's sassiness and humorous line. But I will suggest the author to put more different emotions like sad, sorrow, pain to make the story more better for the readers. I think readers will surely fall in love with the characters created by author as no one can resists the sassiness of Y/n or the charms of Jamless Bully but adding some sorrow and pain will benefit the story along with some plot twists.
Truth Or Dare? By sumi_rra
Total Marks ~ 100
Marks for following the rules – 5/5
Marks for reader interaction- 5/5
Marks for book cover: 3/5
It's a simple cover if u want to get more readers in first view then I think a change of cover will help
Marks for book description: 4.5/5
I like the way you wrote the description it was creative and can attract any reader to read further into the story
Marks for book title: 5/5
Marks for social message: 2/5
I did not found any proper social message as the story is made for entertainment purpose.
Marks for book plot: 8/10
The plots were well formed and easy to understand by the readers.
Marks for grammar and vocabulary: 19/20
My eyes could not find any grammatical mistakes although full marks can’t be given as maybe my poor eye sight missed some typos and misspelling or other mistakes.
Marks for plot twist: 8/10
The story went smoothly. I would suggest some major plot twists is needed for better experience.
Marks for character development: 8/10
Author has made her characters uniquely . The characters' matches with their description well. I could relate to the emotions of the characters well.
Marks for creativity and way of writing: 7/10
The writing was simple and good making the readers understand the story easily.
Marks for my opinion on the book: 8/10
The story is worth praising. Although it’s a teen love story but the story was based on originality. The emotions felt realistic. The story plot was well formed making the story easy for readers as well as interesting. But I would suggest to put twists in the story for spicing it up little bit.
Total Marks~ 74.5/100
Review:
The story was pretty well and interesting for readers. But as I have suggested before some plot twists is needed to spice up little more. Overall the story is pretty good with mature scenes, dramas, humour, pain, etc.
I'm sorry but i revised books which seemed to have more marks since i cannot revise all the 20 books, but in case if you believe that your book has been not given enough marks then feel free to pm for a special review.
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