schmoopsy bloops floopsy (the biggest bloop yet)

chapter 1

once upon a time shmoopsy, awoke under a tree and then looked around. "where is floopsy?" and then shmoopsy, got up and went down the hill to get to floopsy who was sitting in grass and picking flowers. shmoopsy, screamed and ran down and blooped him right on the nose. "I LAV U  FLOOPSY" shmoopsy, screamed.

the thing was was that it was the biggest bloop of shmoopsy, (and floopsy's) life. it was so big that the entire planet was shook to the core and almost destroyed (but it wasnt) but it could have been, almost like an alien species could have easily taken over the planet and all the miserable inhbabitants on it.

thne shmoopsy, was amazed how big the bloop was and screamed. "FLOOPSY THAT WAS THE BIGGEST BLOOP" 

floopsy was amazed too and said "YES IT WAS"

then they hugged and they were happy but then suddenly the bloop was so incredibly big that the ground broke open and shmoopsy, fell in!!!!! floopsy was horrified and tried to go after shmoopsy, but it was too late they were so far in the opening of the ground that they could not reach. oh no!!!!!!

((authors note: i will not update until i get at least five positive comments about my story because it is an amazing story))