The Source Chap 1 By MrsK_and_Richie .
Original
"El and Will's first day at their high school went pretty well, El meets a new friend named Alyssa. Will finds a new group of friends a party you could say. At lunchtime will goes and sits with us new friends and el goes and sits with Alyssa.So where did you say you moved from?" Alyssa Asks, "I moved from Indiana." El replied. "Oh you moved pretty far." Alyssa says, El nods. Meanwhile will and his new friends Jacob, Eddie, Luke and Brady were planning to hang out and play D&D after school. Lunch had ended and el started feeling nauseous she ignored it for awhile but then ran o the bathroom an threw up. Alyssa ran after her, "Jane are you ok?" "Mhm" she replied. After school Will and El walk home and talk about how their day was. When they finally get home they eat a snack before El heads to her room to call mike and tell him about her exciting first day. She dials his number and calls him " Hello?" Mike says "Mike it's El! I had an awesome day and I-" El says before getting Cut of by mikes shaky voice "I'm sorry El I'll explain in a few days right now is not the time I have to go!". El gets a little concerned considering they talk everyday to clear her mind she lays on her bed and starts reading."
FIXED
"El and wills first day at their high school went pretty well, El meets a new friend named Alyssa. Will finds a new group of friends a party you could say. At lunchtime Will goes and sits with new friends and Eleven goes and sits with Alyssa. "So where did you say you moved from..?" Alyssa Asks, "I moved from Indiana." El replied. "Oh.. you moved pretty far." Alyssa says, El nods. Meanwhile Will and his new friends Jacob, Eddie, Luke and Brady were planning to hang out and play D&D after school. Lunch had ended and El started feeling nauseous she ignored it for awhile but then ran to the bathroom and threw up."
"Alyssa ran after her, "Jane are you ok?" "Mhm" she replied. After school Will and El walk home and talk about how their day was. When they finally get home they eat a snack before El heads to her room to call Mike and tell him about her exciting first day. She dials his number and calls him. " Hello?" Mike says "Mike it's El! I had an awesome day and I-" El says before getting Cut of by Mike's shaky voice "I'm sorry El I'll explain in a few days right now is not the time I have to go!". El gets a little concerned considering they talk everyday. To clear her mind she lays on her bed and starts reading."
