WATCH OUT [ON HOLD]

THE BEGINNING

CHAPTER ONE
ACE(part one)
I was walking down the sidewalk. Then a car screeched to a stop beside me. A big, bulky man stepped out. He tried to grab me but I ran. I felt something sink into my left thigh. I felt suddenly weak and dizzy, I fell. Then the same man who tried to grab me, came up behind me. He turned me over, onto my back. Everything was darkening. I looked him in the eyes as he chuckled, then everything went black. I woke up to feel something familiar, like I had felt this way before. Maybe it was the fresh sent of just baked pastries coming from Mrs. Cheinelles bakery. Or maybe it was the consistent noise of honking cars coming from..... well every where since I was in Las Vegas. I don't know what I was doing there, or how I knew all of this, all I know is I awoke with a black mask over my face. I was in the back of a truck, I think. The Windows were open, allowing me to smell the warm vanilla sent whisping through the window. There were two others in with me, that I could feel of, anyway. The car was jerking back and forth, like we were riding up a rocky and jaged road. We were heading up hill. Then the car jerked to the left, and came to an abrupt stop. There was a faint noise of thudding and screams. I started to panic. Then I heard car doors open and slam shut. The doors that I were leaning on suddenly opened. I was startled, so I fell out. All the sudden someone caught me. They were big and bulky, like the man from before. They were so strong I couldn't wiggle loose. Then a deep, dark, brooding voice said, "They will do great." Then the one holding me whispered," I'm sorry."
Lilly(part two)
I was told that new people would be coming. I decided that this would be the perfect time to escape. Even though that would mean I would be on the run forever. But it's better then being here with... HIM. I'll talk to Jackie about it, maybe she'll come with me. I would be lucky if I made it past the dungeon guards. If I make it past them, and get caught... well... lets not think about it. All I can say is it won't be pretty. I hope the new ones listen. Please don't let them be like I was. I barely made it out of that alive. At least I had Jackie, without her... I would be... gone... as in..... DEAD. They probably won't survive. The only reason I did was because of my...... history with him. JACKSON(part three)

When they carried us in, Violet and me were scared out of our minds. There was this other guy who also wore a gas mask, but something was different about him. Maybe it was the fact that he looked more normal than us. Or maybe it was the fact that he looked calm that this was happening. When this guy came in, all the guards straightened up and paid full attention. I assumed that this dude was in charge. Then this girl came out, she was handcuffed with shackles that came over her hands. She had chains linking her hands and feet together. Violet looked so scared when she saw her, I wondered why. The girl then looked at me with a despair filled stare. Almost like she was in pain. She probably was. The man then said,"I guess I should introduce myself, since you'll be staying-" Violet said, interrupting him,"What do you Want?!" The girl standing in front of us then looked very panicked and scared. The man that was talking looked at Violet with this wild look in his eyes. What came next I never expected, it happened so fast. He then screamed at Violet,"You will soon learn not to interrupt me!" Then he smirked and said," Now you need to pay the price."

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