Avneil ff: Fanaah(completed)

chapter 23

She left from there leaving shattered neil...

Neil(like a  baby):i m sorry...

More tears rolled down his cheeks..

Neil(sobbing):I m sorry....

He sit on his knees and shouts her name

Neil(shouts):Avni...i m sorry....

His this condition was seen by someone and that was none other than avni...

She never left...she was about to left but her heart was not allowing her to do so....

She turns around and found neil sitting on his knees crying badly....

Her heart broke seeing him like this...

She was fighting battle between her heart and mind...

Heart:avni..go..he needs u...

Mind:no avni...he deserve this...don't u remember how he distrust u...

Heart:but he said sorry right...can't u see how he is regretting...

Mind:he should regret avni....don't fall weak...he deserves this..

Heart:he is not bad avni and also he loves u..

Mind:if he loves her that why he did'nt trust her...

Heart:avni...every human should deserve a chance right...so just give him a chance and go...he needs u avni..

Mind:no avni...don't fall in his trap...

Heart:its not trap avni...its his love..can't u see how much he loves u..

Mind:then what about ur neil...don't u love him...

Avni:no no..i...i love my neil...i love him....

"Avni"

Avni(teary eyes):neil...

"Go avni..he needs u...he loves u avni...give him a chance because he deserves a chance...."

Avni:but...but I love u neil..

"I love u too avni...lekin ab main vaapas nahi aa sakta...lekin neil...voh tumhe voh pyaar dega joh tum deserve karti ho...just accept him avni...u deserve happiness and neil can give u that happiness..aur ek baat humesha yaad rakhna..ki tumhara neil humesha tumhare dil main rahega...toh yeh kabhi mat sochna ki main tumhe chodke chala gaya....i'll be always there in ur heart...toh tum jaha bhi jaogi mujhe saath paogi"

He disappears...

Avni(crying):neil...

Neil's words echoes in her ears...

She composes herself and starts walking towards neil....

He was still sitting on ground sobbing unconslably...

Avni kept her hands on his shoulder and he immediately looks up and gets shocked to see her...

His eyes were swollen and red and so was hers...

She makes him stand by his shoulders...

Neil:I m sorry...i...i know i hurted u but plz mujhe maaf kar do...i love u..i really love u....

Avni wipes his tears...

Avni:maaf kiya...

Neil(surprised):really??

He asks as a child and she nods...

He immediately hugs her tightly startleding her...

Avni sees neil(i mean her neil) standing there and giving her thumps up...obviously she was not able to see his face as she has never seen his face....

She smiles and he slowly disappears in air...

She hears neil saying..

Neil:u will not leave me na..

Avni:no...

Neil smiles widely and tightens his grip around her and avni hugs him back closing her eyes....

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So here it ends..

I hope there is no confusion regarding both neil..

I mean we know that both neil are same but avni does'nt know that...

If there is any confusion ask me...

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Love Mamta