Hey! So wanna thanks all of them who read my previous OS and voted. So I'm here again with avneil OS.
And I again ended up wrote on rang Mahal tracks coz I love whole rang Mahal track, avneil were so good there.
About story: everything is there like shown in the show except few thing:
* avneil didn't confess their love
* juhi didn't know about avni being Neil wife coz ragini Pandit didn't tell her
* no mishti no vidhuyt no Ali no dayawanti crap only avneil, juhi and ragini pundit
* avni didn't know about Neil's past life and of course Neil too don't know about juhi is alive
So the scene starts when Neil entered in rang Mahal and searching for avni and came there where ragini sold girls
Ok enough of my blabbering.
Happy reads.
So Neil came in the Hall where ragini Pandit selling girls, his eyes only search for one girl or should I say his girl, here he sees his girl eyes become teary, till now he just prayed to God to keep his girl safe. Ragini Pandit saw neil and says
RP:Dugga...... Dugga..... wah Neil wah so finally tum yaha agaye, chalo acha hai apni ankho se dekho main in Larkion (girls) k sath kiya karti hu. Specially iss avni k sath bht maza ata hai na isse khatron sy khelne mai, Kam shuru KIA Jaye
All this while Neil blood is boiling, his eyes still lock with avni, avni try to calm down Neil through eyes.
Beside avni there juhi stand all numb coz after 5 years she saw her love but wait a second he is not looking at her, her eyes got teary . She came out of her world hearing a loud sound.
Neil slapped a man who try to touch avni but before he has to meet Neil of course possessive husband awake in him.
Till then ragini Pandit's man caught by police and they shifted to police van and now ragini Pandit, juhi and avneil left.
Ragini Pandit try to harm avni but avni is not so abla nari who need someone to save her she is Neil's ladydon
Avni beat ragini Pandit and she fell on floor, her breath got laboured coz her body is weak for fight.
Meanwhile Neil's eyes shift from avni to juhi. He gets shocked to see juhi alive in front of him, guilt rise in him coz he is not able to find her. His trance broke by a sound of gunshot, yes ragini Pandit shot avni and avni fell on floor and there Neil's world crash though bullet hit avni's left arm but avni just fainted, Neil ran towards avni hold her in his arms, taking his gun and shot ragini Pandit who just run toward the door to escape but Neil shot her three to four time so that she can died.
Till now he thought of giving ragini Pandit punishment for her deeds but he encounter her coz she tried to murder avni and whoever tried to harm avni is gonna see the worst side of Neil.
Neil took avni place her in his cars back seat and told DD to drive, juhi sit in passenger seat and they left to hospital.
Till now he just wanted to hug, took her into his embrace feeling her warmth but now she is in his embrace, fianted. Soon they reach hospital, doctor's took her to ICU for surgery, and Neil did silent prayer to God for her recovery.
In khanna mansion, everyone prayed to God for there child's safety and they decided when avneil comeback, they will sent them to a small vacation so that they could spent some time with eachother.
In hospital, juhi came to DD and say
Juhi: tum wahi ho na jo usdin waha tha jab Mera accident hua, kiya tum mujhe bataogy uske baad kiya hua aur ye Neil avni k liye itna tense q hai? Aur tumhara naam kiya hai?
Dd: G... Mera naam dhakal dayal hai waise to sab mujhe DD bulate hai Neil Sir ne diya hai. Bata ta hu aap ke accident k baad sir toot Gaye thy, kisi sy BHI baat NHI karte thy phir Mata ji ne Neil Sir ko samjhaya aur woh dhere dhere life ki taraf ane lagy. Unhone police force join kiya aur ACP ki post join ki, duty unki life ka aim ban gayi aur phir aik din sir ko aik case Mila "case 123" Sir spent day and night to solve this case,case 123 jo k ek Larki thi,phir hume lead mili k wo larki hospital mai, hum waha Gaye per tab tak woh waha se ja chuki thi. Sir frustration Mai cliff per Gaye Jahan unhe aik Larki mountain k edge per khari thi, danger board ka sign bhi tha phir bhi woh waha khari thi sir ko laga k woh suicide karne wali hai bus phir kya usse bachany Gaye or uske sath khud bhi girgaye. Woh Larki ek ajooba thi aisa sir kehte hai Mai nhi, sir ne usse bachaya or usne sir ko thanks bhi nhi kaha aur Naam bhi nhi bataya.Neil sir Jo case k alawa koi baat hi nhi karte thy woh ek Larki k bare Mai baat karne lage.Undino sir ki shadi k functions start hue the,sir ki shadi riya mam k sath hone wali thi, engagement wale din sir uss Larki se takraye or dono kho gaye, aur riya mam ki awaz se dono wapis aye apni dunya se, aur pata hai woh Larki riya mam ki friend thi. Riya ma'am ny Neil sir ko introduce karaya apni friend sy jiska Naam tha Ananya Verma. Ananya mam or Neil sir mai ek alag hi tashan tha. Riya mam Neil sir se shadi nhi Karna chahati thi to unhone ye baat Ananya mam ko batai, waise to Neil sir bhi riya mam se shadi nhi Karna chahate thy isiliye unhone Pandit paise diye taki woh nakali shadi kar sake per neela aunty ne Pandit ko double paise diye taki woh asli karwa sake q ki waha riya mam nhi Ananya mam bethne wali thi, shadi k din Neil sir ko pata chala k Ananya Verma ka asli Naam avni ayesha hai or woh dayawanti ki illegitimate granddaughter hai, jab shadi ho gai tab pata chala k mandap mai riya mam ki jagah Ananya mam hai q k riya mam shadi se bhag gai, sab achy se ja raha tha Bebe and Prakash uncle accepted Ananya mam as their daughter in law, dayawanti bank corrupt thi aur unka ghar Mehta house ka auction ho raha tha Neil sir ne wo house buy kiya aur avni bhabhi ko as wedding gift gift kiya. One day avni bhabhi comes to know that ashish Mehta was no more and his murder was none other than dayawanti mehta, bhabhi apne lady Don avatar mai wapas agayi or dayawanti ko unke gunahon ki saza dene nikal gayi magar dayawanti ne avni bhabhi ko Marne ki koshish ki. Hum sab ne bhabhi ka woh roop dekha Jo shayad hi kabhi neela aunty ne bhi dekha ho, Neil sir ne avni bhabhi ko roka, dayawanti ko jail ho gai, bhabhi ko unka bhai or aik happy family mil gai. Shweta aunty bhi avni bhabhi ko accept karne lagi. Avni bhabhi k birthday k din Neil sir ne sab ki avni bhabhi ki reality batai, sab ko shock laga per Sab ne bhabhi ko accept kar liya kunki Neil sir bht khush rehny lagy thy avni bhabhi k sath shayad sab ko ek Naya Neil mil gaya tha avni bhabhi ki wajah se. Aur phir aik din bhabhi aap se mili, bhabhi ki nature hi aisi hai kisi k sath bhi galt hota nhi dekh sakti ya phir kisi ko problem mai nhi dekh sakti to bas aap ki help karne k liye waha chali gai, us roz Neil sir bhabhi ko batane wale thy k woh unse bht pyar karte hai per bhabhi k kidnap ki news ne sir ko toor diya, sir ne har mumkin koshish ki per kanoon sabot mangta hai tab sir ko yakeen aya k bhabhi sahi kehti hai kanon kabhi bhi sach ka sath nhi deta isliye sir aise rang Mahal mai aye taki bhabhi aur baki sabko bacha sake aur ab dekho hum yaha hai.
Juhi who was listening each and every word of Neil journey feel bad for him and she really feel good cos Neil love someone who is strong, bold and fearless who can get any extent to save anyone. They looks good together, juhi thinks.
On the other hand Neil was outside of the opd where doctors operate her. Neil silently prayed for her health and constantly looking to the door of opd holding his breath. Doctor come to neil and told him that she is fine and conscious, and he can meet her. They are going to discharge her so he has to complete the discharge formality with that doctor left. Just then neil released his breath. DD who is listen everything told that he is going to complete all the formality and told him to go and see avni.
Neil came to see Avni and packed her thing without talking which didn't liked by Avni.
After completing discharge formality DD come to Neil and Neil told him to drop juhi at Khanna house. He will come with Avni in other car, DD nod and left with juhi.
Avneil were in car on their way back to home suddenly Avni ask Neil that she wants to meet Ayesha MAA. Neil told driver to drive graveyard.
They reached, and Avni straightly went to meet Ayesha maa' grave, but Neil didn't come he wants to give Avni some space as he thought she needed some heart to heart talk with her mother but unknown to him she wants talk with him. She was talking with her mother, saying whatever is in her heart but she was talking about only him, and she decided that she will say whatever is in her heart to him,when Avni don't come he got worried and thought to see her .
He came and sit beside her, watching Ayesha maa's grave, just then Avni start to say neil you know MAA only wants a happy family and husband's love but she didn't get, and I also started to hate the word "LOVE" who only gave pain to my both mother's but when you come in my life everything got change, the decision of my marriage with you taking by Neela maa is the decision she took for me. You are the best thing happened to me, you taught me what is love, how happy family look, grandmother's love, specially Papa's love, he is the best father I have ever seen and I will do anything for him and also I can do anything to protect my happy family. You know Neil I always think that men's are this and that but taught me how a real men look. I am not romantic I know and I knows that I hurt you really bad and I'm sorry about that but you know I can't stop myself from doing this, I can't see you all stressed " SORRY" and I promise I will never do anything against your wish. And Mr Neil Khanna I love you very much and I want to spend my life with you, will you accept this idiot for the rest of your life? She said with puppy eyes which can melt anyone but right now who cares because Neil Khanna was sent to other world having tears just listening his wife ever cute and loving confession and all he could do is to just kiss, he didn't even broke the kiss if it's wasn't the need of oxygen for both of them.
And he said those words which his lips wants to say from long time "I LOVE YOU AVNI" and he hugged her really tight. thus there happy married life starts with the blessings of Ayesha MAA, Neela maa, Khanna family along with Ali and nanno.
More than 2000 words, I need some energy drink, lol
I hope you like this crap.
Well I was writing this from long time and completed right now such a lazy person I am.
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