There was once a star that held the keys to balance in the universe
Compassion
Bravery
Honestly
Intelligence
Mischief
With these things the creatures in the universe we're balanced nobody knew what was right all the time and no living creature was truly evil.
But some know of the star and it's power and want nothing more than to take it for their own...
Despite that Somehow the star, even though it is not truly alive, knew it could not allow these creatures to take it's power
So the star did what had to be done to protect the balance and split in two
one half of fire
Compassion
Bravery
Honesty
The other of ice
Compassion
Intelligence
Mischief
On that day there was a fox born in a town set ablaze by something unknown and a raccoon born in a city frozen during storms unlike anybody has ever known
These children unkown to themselves and their families were now known as the starblitzed and it was their mission from here on to protect the keys and the living creatures of this universe
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Hey! This is kind of the way im thinking of starting my comic (same story premise) and I was really wanting to get some criticism (really) and any tips on how to improve it anyway I hope you read this and are willing to help me improve my writing skills!
