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chapter one

The  raindrops hitting against the rooftop of her room made Lisa rise lazily, she was half awake still rubbing at her eyes slightly, what a rain she thought to herself that disrupted her beautiful dream, the thought of the dream still made a smile touch her lip, she was brought back from her thought by the knock on the door.....who is it she called out, Lisa get your ass out now before i drag you out, she laughed and shouted out of course its you Beth, oh were you imagining it was prince charming or rather the hottest boy in school who also happens to be your boyfriend, Lisa already gave a quick mental picture of her boyfriend Jake her
face turned a crimson red almost immediately even if there was no one with her as she quickly gets the thought out, and shouts back he has a name you know....yea yea Jake your lover boy, Lisa are you gonna really leave me talking to you through the door i wou........before she could complete her sentence the door was opened and Lisa was right in front of her smiling from ear to ear without further words spoken she dragged her in and beth simply smiles.....you know i don't think your lover boy would like you late today and we have a whole lots of things to do.....oops that i almost forgot replied Lisa, well  in that case let me refresh your memory we have to go shopping, we need to get our hair done.....okay okay Lisa says rolling her eyes i know what we gat to do okay...good replied Beth well in that case i suggest you get your ass off the bed and into the bathroom they were interrupted by a knock on the door...come on in, its open they chorused, .....well you two seem to be in a good mood today  Mrs Alicia who happens to be Lisa mum calls out good morning mum Lisa calls out Good morning, Mrs. Alicia Beth calls after good morning girls, beth for crying out loud just call me  Alicia you don't have to be all formal with me, sorry Mrs. Ali... i mean Alicia Beth smiles well I just came to inform you girls to come down for breakfast and with that starts to head out, I hope it breakfast is that delicious pancakes I love mum, why not come and see for yourself her mum calls back alright then we'll be down in a bit chorused Beth and Lisa...now where did i stop Beth says get your ass up if you aren't down in ten you will be walking all the way with that she gives a wicked grin and heads out....Lisa immediately hurry into the bathroom washing her hair thoroughly as well as her body she gets out and immediately dresses up, she ties her hair in a ponytail, picks up her make up purse uses her mascara and a lip gloss over her lips with that she was done, she glanced at herself on more time in the mirror looking satisfied she grabs her purse and heads downstairs to meet an impatient Beth, Beth immediately grabs her keys bye Alicia she calls, bye mum Lisa follows....young lady were do you think you are going I didn't see you have breakfast you know breakf......Lisa rolling her eyes yes mum.... Breakfast is the most important meal of the day i know mum you say the same thing everyday   with that she head for the fridge and grabs an apple and granola bar with that she gives her mum a quick peck on the chick and runs as fast as her legs could carry her before her mother decides to tie her down  and shove breakfast down her throat, i love you mum...i love you too dear.

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I hope you guys enjoy. please do comment and vote so I can know what am not doing right and then I can improve.

Am starting to like Lisa's character ....what do you guys think...I soo can't wait for the next chapter.