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ok so i wrote this one in like 6th grade for an assaignment and failed is now i can see why  but i got points for being creative. I know I got inspiration from wizard of Oz

I don't really like vacations. I would rather stay home with my dog spot. Were in the car with my mom going to a place but I forgot the name of the place. It was almost night fall the last thing I saw was the sun over the ocean as I fell asleep. I woke up in a bed. It was sunny outside It must be the next day I thought.

I look at the clock it was 11:46 AM I got up and went to the closet and opened it my bag was in it so I pulled it out of the closet and started to unpack when I was finished I looked outside

"were going to be here all summer" I said sadly thinking of my dad he always liked sunny days like this.

"Honey you awake" my mom said from down stairs "I'm coming mom" I yelled back. I ran down the stairs I was suddenly was happy when I smelled the sweet smell of brunch. Sense it was a long night we both woke up late

" Mocha here's your food I got to go shopping today so you will be here alone sorry" " Its ok mom". She cooked two buttermilk pancakes one yoke egg and the light brown crispy hash brown they smelled like when my dad was still here. After I ate my food my mom was already gone to the store . Spot came up to me with his bowl in his mouth he was hungry so I put some food in his bowl and let him eat. When he was done eating I decided to go for a walk so I went up the stairs and I got into a pink and purple flowy shirt and black pants and a black leather jacket. Once we got outside Spot and I started to the woods so I can draw something my father helped me learn to draw so its now a passion to be an illustrator.

When we got to the woods we stopped at a tree with vines coming down the trunk and the branches. The leaves were covered in vines to the only thing without the vines was this one open space in the middle. So I got out my notebook and started to draw the tree and spot laid down in front of it. When I was drawing the last line my brown hair got in the way and then I saw a door. My eyes got wide "a door" I said as spot head popped up " I see a door spot" he stared at me like I was crazy then he walked to me and turned his head and started to jump he sees it to I walked up to the door and turned the knob the door opened then blue popped up then pink then black and I got sucked in.

I opened my eyes and all I saw was black. I was in a dark room I started to stand up "spot" I said then something made a sound and it didn't sound like a dog. I started to feel around for something like a light a door then I felt something knob like so I turned it then the door opened it was a room a mirror in the corner a bed a dresser a shelf it was basically empty. Then a wolf walked past me and turned around his eyes were black it was wearing Spots collar so I walked to the wolf to check the collar it said Spot then Spike I jumped the wolf was spot then I got up and walked to the mirror my eyes got wide "no" I said I cant believe it my eyes my hair " my hair is pink and my eye are purple then I look at my shirt it was faded so I zipped up my jacket and went out another door spike followed me there were so many people so I walked up to a girl in blue " were are we?" I asked her she stared at me "go away black" she said rudely and walked off so I walked up to a girl in black "do you know were this is?" I asked "oh were in Wickiland" I stared at her weirdly "oh you must be new come follow me" "ok" I said so we walked through the colorful people and got to this big glass building.

"So where are we?" I asked she stared at " you really must be new if you don't know" "know what" "that were stuck like this ill explain when we get to the others oh yeah I'm Yuri by the way "hi Yuri I'm Mocha nice to meet you can you please tell me were we are" I said she turned around and stared at me an started to laugh then we were in a big dining hall. Then she dragged me to a table of people she sits me down and spike lays next to me the people were staring at the wolf "is that yours?" a girl with blue short hair. I stared at her and noticed she was talking about spike "yes" I answered quickly they all started to stare at me and smiled "does he bite?" a boy with black hair asked "no" I answered then Yuri sat down "ok guy give her space she's new and guys this is Mocha, Mocha this Gabe, Paris, Zoey, Tete. "hi" they all said Tete was the one with blue hair Paris has pink and Zoey purple and Gabe black ".

so what are you doing here" said Zoey "Zoey" said Yuri "what she doesn't have to answer I'm just asking" said Zoey " I don't know why I'm here I came from this colorful whirl that came from a tree and..." I said as I took a pause they all stared at me "you guys think I'm crazy don't you" I said Yuri looked up "no it makes since because there's a myth that a hero will come from a distant land were they keep only little magic Mocha I think that's you but if it is ,your going to kill the great wizard of Loz the one who set this evil curse on us so we will forget who we really are" said Yuri "f-forget" I mumbled " who is here when the curse is set loses a part of them even if they left" Yuri said "so if this is true I will kill somebody is there a way not to?" I said "the only person who will know that is the queen of Sanderlind will know the answer to that question will she" Zoey said "so lets go and see her then" said Paris who has been quit the whole time "ok" yelled everybody at the table so we all got up and ran off to the train.

Once we got on I sat down staring out the window then suddenly I remembered one night after my father died my mother, she would leave me once she put me to bed one night she came home crying she was never the same like she lost apart of herself "were here come on guys" I heard Paris say in the back then every body started to jump off so I jumped then we walked to a big golden door Paris walked up to it and knocked on the door the door opened to a woman in a yellow sunny dress "mom" I whispered she stared at me with happiness "Mocha" said my mom "what are you doing here i thought you were at the store getting food she looked at me "we need to talk, care for some food" she said as I stare in her eyes that I haven't seen in a long time "ok" I said

so me and my friends were invited to dinner with my mom when we were at the dinner table "your dad was banished to this land and he did not die would come and visit him here but one day the portal pushed me in two and one stayed here and the other took care of you" she said fast "so is there any other way to break the curse?" I asked she nodded at me " so how?" "with candle that will send him back home and me back in your mother" she said by the time dinner was done it was to late to go to Loz so we decided to go at dawn once morning came we started to head of to Loz

I had the candle in my hand "do you know how to use it" said Gabe right next to me later we made it to the door I opened the door and walked in there were stairs then someone came down them "let me explain" said a familiar voice "dad" I mumbled "yes" "you are Loz" "so that's what they call me now" he sadly "I came here to bring you back to your home we can restart we can be a family again" "why, why do you try so hard to help even if I did cast this curse why help me" "so I can help my friends and to take you back with me and mom" there was no sound a light the candle there was a bright light I opened my eyes to see color to see my friends to see spike turn into spot again to see the summer house and the sun. I open my eyes again to the sun on my face and breakfast in the air I ran down stairs to see my mom and dad then I noticed that some times curiosity doesn't always kill the cat it will lead to an adventure at least one day.



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