My Oc Rating Book

Tinyflame

Submitted by @laylathetiger

Name: TinyFlame {I love the name!}

Gender:she-Cat {Ok}

Looks: dark orange tabby with golden yellow eyes and a small scar on her right flank {Great description!}

Personality: very loyal Loves kits upbeat, tries to stay positive, doesn't really care about the other clans {I like her personality, but maybe add a few negative traits about her?}

Clan: FireClan {A common used name, but that's alright. I have a Fireclan myself!}

Rank: warrior

Backstory: father died when she was young so, in fear her mother tried to hold them back and keep them from becoming warriors for as long as she could (witch was only 1 moon) her sister ended up becoming a med cat while she became a warrior. {Great backstory!}

Mate: none

Kits: wants some

Rating: A 9.5/10. You only lost half a point because there weren't any bad traits in her personality. Otherwise, great job