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Chapter One: Return to Narnia

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Third Person Point of View

The Pevensies were in the subway station. They were trying to get to school. Edmund sets down some luggage and sat down next to Peter. Susan and Lucy at their side. "You're welcome." Edmund muttered glancing at Peter. "I had it sorted." He retorted looking at him. Susan sighed. "What was it this time?" Peter stood up and walking a few feet away. "He bumped me." Peter said not looking at his siblings. Lucy jumped up slightly. "So you hit him?" She asked.

"No. After he bumped me, he tried to get to
apologize. That's when I hit him." Peter said turning to look at them. Susan groaned inwardly. "Why can't you just walk away?" She hated how easily her brother could pick fights. Peter glared at her. "I shouldn't have to! Don't you ever get tired of being treated like a kid?" He exclaimed.
Edmund chuckled. "Uh, we are kids."

Peter sighed and went vack over to them and sat. "Well I wasn't always. … It has been a year. How long does he expect us to wait?" He asked looking at them. Susan shrugged her shoulders. "I think it's time to accept the fact that we live
here. It's no use pretending any different." She was tired of them moving around. Susan suddenly looks up and notices the geeky boy who had tried to talk to her earlier, approaching. Susans eyes grew wide. "Oh no. … Pretend like you're talking to me." Edmund leaned forward and looked at her. "We are talking to you." He said. Suddenly Lucy shot up and cried out. "Ow!"

Susan looked at her sister. "Be quiet, Lucy." Lucy looked at them. "Something pinched me!"

Peter suddenly jerks and looks at Edmund. "Hey, stop pulling!" Edmund gave him a bewildered look. "I'm not touching you!" He said. A train starts moving past.

Lucy smiled and looked at her siblings. "It feels like magic!"
Susan nodded and and grabbed Lucys hand and Peters. "Quick, everybody hold hands."
Edmund looked to Peter I'm not holding your hand!" Peter growls. Peter grabs Edmund’s hand. The train races past and the bricks are pulled away. The luggage, the seat, the platform, and the station completely vanish.

The four children find themselves on a beach. They step out into the sunlight. Susan and Lucy smile at each other, and run off. Peter and Edmund follow. They jump into the water and start playing. Then, Edmund looks up. Edmund looked at Peter. "Where do you suppose we are?"Peter was the one to give a bewildered look this time. "Well, where do you think?" Edmund sighed. "Well, I don't remember any ruins in Narnia." The Pevensies look up and see the ruins.

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