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Go to Japan to Feed the Deer

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It was a sunny day in Japan, Japan is on top of Taiwan. My dad told us that today we can go to a place called "Dong Da Shi" to feed the deer. When my brother and I heard that we are going to feed the deer we yelled because sometimes was scary to feed the deer and to touch it. But I think it will be very fun to touch the deer and feed the deer really close. My dad was really good because he will always take us to all place. My brother and I love to go around the world like a detective to find new things. It is really cool!

When we arrived at "Dong Da Shi" There has thousands and thousands of deer. There is kind of like a park but there is stores that sells deer cookies.

When I came down the bus, I am a little bit scared because there were too much deer. Some of the deer have the big and scary antlers. We went in the store to bought deer cookies. It smells like regular cookie but I don't think that it taste same like our cookie! When we bought the cookie some deer will come to me to eat cookies. When my mom is buying the another cookies a deer bit my mom skirt, then the woman that sells the deer cookies take a broom and hit the deer to tell the deer to go away. I thought this is the bad way to tell the deer to go away, I was sad to the deer. When the deer is eating the cookie, I see the saliva coming out of the deer's mouth.

My mother walked to me from that store and said that the deer eating action is super bad!!!

When my mom finished talking to me and we stood a little. All of sudden my brother scream, then I see the deer (That has antlers) run to my brother and me

so we run as fast as we can but the deer keep chasing us.

"Run" I said.

"What should we do" My brother said.

"OMG, OMG, OMG ,OMG,OMG," my brother shouted.

"Quick think of something" I said, rolling my eyes.

Then I said, "oh, I know it. One person throw half of the cookie on the ground, like this the deer will stop running and eat the cookies. OK , now Alvin throw half of the cookie on the ground."

Then my brother said, " WHY me"

Then I said, " Because I think of the plan. So quick throw the cookies on the ground!!."

"FINE" My brother said making the annoying face to me.

So my brother throw half of the deer cookie on the ground.

Wooo~~~ It was close! The deer didn't chase us anymore.

"My plan worked!!" I said and doing a victory dance!!

Finally, we say goodbye to all the deer, then we take bus to the train station. We went back to the pretty hotel.

"It was a big day", my brother and I said.

THE END!!!!!!!

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⏰ Last updated: Oct 09, 2016 ⏰

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