this is my first proper story that I've written and it was a year ago so if there's any mistakes or grammar that needs to be changed please contact me via comments or message.
enjoy the story and go easy if you do decide to comment.
* very much later.
I've just re read some of this and it's awful in comparison to my new work. It's still my original piece and I'm working on the sequel, so you still want to read it if your interested. But to be honest the actual writing is terrible.
ESTÁS LEYENDO
The forbidden zone.
AventuraA simple check on a planet turns into a fight for their life for a group of marines.
