I've never wrote a story so through out he story tell me stuff I should change to make another story that's better and at the end tell me what j thought of the story
It was late at night when Jeff was lying down watching TV on his couch with no shirt and black pants on starting to fall asleep when he heard a noise. It was his door and Jane was standing there.
Come into the woods with me Jeff.
Alright but don't try anything funny promise?
I promise I won't It's been about an hour now Jane where are we going? Jane is a little ahead then stops turns around with a hand behind her back. She starts running towards Jeff. Jeff blocks the attack grabs her wrist and said to no no no. And then he drops her to the ground. Jeff said don't try this again jane. Jane just sits there face in hands . Jeff starts walking then looked back. How come your not chasing after me to try and attack me?
Because...I know it's useless that I'll never win that your stronger and Invincible.
I walk up to Jane and hug her .
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Shocked she is says why are you helping me Jeff? Your not the type of person to help the girl who tried to kill you multiple times.
Well I thought u could follow me out of the woods. Jeff stands there grinning helping Jane up. 2 hours later Jeff and Jane arrive at Jeff's house Hey Jane wanna go upstaire? Blushing Jane says whaaaaaa!!!!!!??????!!!!! I figured you must be tired so I thought you might wanna sleep on a nice comfy bed.Ill sleep on the couch if you'd like?
Uh no it's ok Jeff but letting you know I'm gonna sleep in my tank top and underwear.
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