Perfection

Chapter 1: Speechless

Dana

As I walk down the small path away from home a tingling sensation runs down my spine. Run. Its what my subconcious screams in my head. Instead, i remain calm and take a deep breath. The sensation goes away as i turn my head just to see nothing.

It wouldn't be the first time i feel this when i go to my secret place; Although today it felt extremly odd, as if, as if someone was watching me. I continue my walk as usual and plugg in my headphones.

"When you say you love me,
no i love you more,
When you say you need me,
no i need you more"

I abrubtly stop when i spot someone sitting casually in the middle of the clearing. My clearing. My special place. Guess it wasnt as special. I thought. I narrow my eyes to see who it is, a small gasp escapes my lips. Its a guy. I step a little closer just enough to makeout his face. A strong jawline with big full lips, a prominient nose, bushy thin eyebrows, but what startles me the most are his dark blue eyes. Dark as the ocean at night, feeling as if I stare any longer i could get lost in an ifinite sea. They hold so much sadness it makes me want to ease his pain.

"I dont wanna hurt you,
but you live for the pain
I'm not trying to say it
but its what you've became"

He is holding a brilliant small object the size of a pea with his eybrows drawn in contemplation.

Out of nowhere, he is standing up looking straight into ny eyes with such force as if devouring my soul. I break out of his gaze to scan him. He rapidly hides the tiny object in his back pocket, making me wander what it is. A black T-shirt, ripped jeans and black snickers are all he's wearing. I can see through his tight shirt how well defined his body is complementing his overall look. However, that isint what catches my eye but, a wide and long now white scar in his right arm expanding from his forearm all the way up to his shouler.
I make my way towards him never breaking eye contact. When im almost arm length from him he breaks into a run, opposite from where I came leaving me speechless.

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