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It was very dark and we wanted to get a good scare so we went to doomsday and we paid for are tickets and got in line and it was me mom and dad and niece and my niece was only 8 years old and as we stood in line in the dark fish man came up with a knife and it was a butcher knife and he had two of them and my niece took a step back as tears field her eyes and I said to her don't let him see fear in your eyes and she said why and he noticed her and he went up to her and took his knife and hit it on a medle garbage can and it popped and he did it 3 times and we went down the path and I was short of breath so I stopped for a second and it was really dark and I really couldn't see but I saw something hanging in the trees a and didn't know what it was but a man came up and stopped by me and said can I help u and I said no and he said well you better keep moving or you will end up like the dead bodies in the trees and I said uh oh so we keep going down the path and we came up to a electric chair and it had a woman in and he and the other man had another man in a cage and he said he had been there for a very long time and he had a tazier in on hand and a hammer in the other hand and he said were was all his people and the man said I don't know and he came up to my niece and tristed his hammer up and said were are they and he said look like you are the smart one and she said all overrrrrrrrrr and he kinda chuckled but they ant spuse to laugh so he walked around to me and said you better not let her smart off like that to somebody she might not live and I said yes sir and he walked back around to my niece and said well you ant book smart you got a smart mouth and we walked on got to a bathroom stall and boys went in one room and the girls went in one room it was very small and I didn't hear the man the first time so I wasn't scared I just asked the man where do I go he right he and he kinda gave me a scary look trying to make me scared and I looked up at him and smiled and went right in the stall and he said hey we got a chicken nugget and he was talking about my niece and he said I love chicken nuggets and he asked what my name is and I told him vanzula because he didn't need to no my real name and he asked another girl and she was scared so she wouldn't tell him and he said I guess I'll get it out of you and he got a chainsaw and I don't like chainsaw but he looked up at me and kinda put it like he was going to cut me up and I gave him a better back off look and he backed up like he was scared of me and I thought to myself that's right big boy and we went to a frunal and there was a man in a casket and the woman had flowers for people to give to him and she said pay your respects and she said try not to wake him up because he will get angry and my niece was the last one up there and she woke him up and the girl said you better run but before she got out run my niece and another girl tried to fit through one door and almost got stuck and then we went through a glow in the dark spinging tunnel and I got sick and I am terrified of clowns and one young boy he probably was a teenager but I scared him because I was about to pass out because of the spinging tunnel and strobe lights maze and he grabbed me by the hand and my niece said you know that is a clown and I jumped and I couldn't see because I was passing out but I didn't but he helped me out and called someone to check on me but we left they were all so very nice about helping you if you were sick that all guys love y'all hope y'all enjoy

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