Ever After: Double Crossed

Double crossed.......A ever after story

                                                                                                                                                                                                 INTRODUCTOIN: HEY GUYS!!!!! Can u guys do me a favor and be a little friendly.This is my first story that I have ever writen on wattpad. To give me ideas you guys could give me little ideas to improve my story =-). This story is mainly about raven and apple having problems with each other. Not the kind of problems like hey you lied to me blab blab blab problems but more like hey you were supposed to meet me in the enchanted forest at 5:00 and now its 8:00. Apple has also been bullying raven by calling her names and also telling all of ravens friends negative things about her. Raven finally gets tired of Apple's little games and she stands up to apple and strikes back with other people apples been bullying
Chapter one : the bully

Raven:apple leave me alone you have been very rude to everybody that is a rebel like me and I don't think that's the way to treat someone! Apple: your so ugly and your just like your mother. Raven:  NO IM NOT!! (Everybody looked at raven with tears falling down her face) just leave me alone, you don't understand. Apple: I do, I know how it feels like to be the bad guy but guess what now I'm popular so I have people to do my work for me just like my mother, she always gets what she wants just like me. I want you to be the loser in the school and you to always be sad!  Raven: ( runs through the doors and goes straight up to her room ignoring everybody that asks "are you okay".
Madeline: raven do I need to go knock some sence into apple!
Raven:no I can handle it my self Madeline:okay just checking, cause yesterday wooooooweeee I almost knocked her off her feet!
Raven:why, what did she do or say. Madeline: do you not know what she said, she called me a old lady because I ♥ tea!
Raven:it looks like almost all of us rebels have problems.
Madeline: I guess so!  Apple: I wasn't done toking to you!
Raven:oh trust me I knew I left in the middle of conversation!
Apple: well that was not nice (apple said with an evil attitude)
Madeline: back off apple go fetch some other prey!
Apple: be quite old lady I mean at least I wont be getting wrinkle until I'm 60
Madeline: THATS IT IVE HAD IT WITH YOU OLD BAG OF APPLES!
Madeline: (maddie walks away to head master grim but he is too busy so she just goes the the student lounge to breathe and relax)
Briar:what's wrong maddie are you okay =>
Maddie: yes I'm totally fine
Briar: okay just wanted to know about any drama that had happened.                 

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Hey Guys its me the author I have a question does anybody know how to flip the page? Do you guys like it so far?