The Fallen Angel

Author's note

Hey, this is from the author, and this is my first story, and I would really like it if you would read this, then comment about the things in the story that needs to be fixed, or what you liked. Be brutally honest. If at least 10+ more people like it, then i will publish my other stories/parts. I will try to have them ready, so by the time people have noticed it, I could have already publish a couple. Sorry, but this chapter is going to be kind of short. I hope you enjoy. There are going to be some words that have no spaces between them, because my space bar doesn't work that good.

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Prologue

I was walking home when I seen it. A streak of red, white, and orange cross the sky. It was close. I kept walking. Then I heard a crash, and the ground wobbled. It shook for a few seconds, then stopped. I ran in the direction a seen it go.
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It took almost an hour for me to reach the crater. I expected to see a meteor, but I seen a huge hole in the ground,with a person in it. A person with wings.

His wings were white. There was only a few feathers that had a speck of black on them.

I slid down the wall of dirt. I walked over to him, tip-toeing. I knelt down and felt his heartbeat. I looked at his wings, amazed. They were sprawled out, and if I a ruler, it would've measured about 18 feet. I felt his wings, and they were as soft as silk, if not, softer. I smiled.

I sighed. "Are you an angel? Are you a fallen Angel?"I asked.

"Yes, in fact I am."

"Oh. Well, why did you come here?" Wait a minute. I looked over, and I seen his eyes open. His eyes were... red.

I jumped back, my school's uniform skirt flying up in the process."Gaahh! Jeez, when did you open your eyes?" I looked at his wings, then his face.

"When I felt a hand on my wing. Kori, tell me something. Have you ever had an encounter with a demon and or angel?" His eyes looked me over. He frowned, as if he'd seen me before.

"How... how do you know my name? And no... I haven't... why...?" I stammered."Heaven exists?"

"Yes. Now, I need to go to your place."
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Dad let him in too fast. The angel had his wings out, and my dad nearly fainted. "Uh... come...on in."

We ate dinner in silence. The angel sat by me, and Dad sat across. Dad looked back and forth between us, and I mouthed, Don't ask.

Soon, the silence got unbearable. I got up and announced,"I am going to go to my room."

The angel followed me. I opened my door, with a last glance at dad, i mouthed, Don't worry. I will keep him in check. He nodded.

I shut the door and walked to the bathroom. "Hey, angel. What is your name? I slipped off my uniform and stood by the door.

"My name is Shiyoku. You can call me Yoku." He hesitated."Kori, do you have a deceased member of your family? Or to put it more simple, did anybody die in your family recently?"

What an odd question."Well,my Mom died. She died two years ago, a week after my fifteenth birthday." I walked over to where my pajama bottoms were, and slipped them on my pajama bottoms.

"Your mother. Of course."Yoku cursed.

I suddenly got the chills. "Did you...did you see her?"

"Yes. She sent me here to protect you. Now, what are you doing in there?"

Before I can put my top on, Yoku opened the door. I crossed my arms, and I shrieked. "Go! Close the freaking door!"

Yoku looked amused."Nice boobs. I am here to protect you."

"I don't need protection!"I snapped."Now get out,and let me finish!" I could feel my face heating up.

He walked out laughing.

When I was done, I sat down on my bed. "So. What do you need to protect me from?"

"Oh, I'm sorry. I thought I heard you say you don't need protection!"Shiyoku teased.

I growled. "Oh,come on!"

"Fine. I need to protect you from demons."

Oh gosh. What is happening to me? Why cant I live my normal life?
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