When I felt human

I did it

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I tied the rope around my neck.I secured it so it wouldn't slip off.Then,I finally.Finally got off the chair.I was choking,then,everything was black.

I ringed my phone,damn mackerel.Why isn't he answering my calls?!Please pick up,please,p-please!God.I need to go to his house now.

Chuuya gets on his motorcycle and goes to his house).He bangs on the door,no answer,he calls Dazai's phone,he hears the vibrations from the inside.He slams the door open,runs to Dazai's door,opens it,the sight was horrifyingly...

Only 97 words?Fuck yeah,tell me what I need to improve cuz it's the first time I'm writing a fanfic,by my fellow readers(I bet that this is going to flop)