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Name: Astor .D. oren
Epithet/Nickname: Black Curtain
Age: 21
Origin (Island/Sea): Foolshout Island (Grand Line)
Affiliation: The Dead Deer Crew
Role on crew: Captain
Bounty: — (not issued yet / unknown)

Appearance

Height: 198 cm (6'6)

Build: Tall and lean with long limbs and narrow shoulders—more quick and agile than bulky. Looks athletic in motion, not physically intimidating until Hybrid form kicks in.

Hair: Short-to-medium black hair styled upward in sharp, messy spikes with subtle dark-red tips. In Hybrid form the silhouette becomes more jagged and “horn-like” around the crown.

Eyes: Deep red. Usually calm and focused; when power surges they brighten and sharpen into a predatory glare.

Defining features: Antlers (permanent fruit imprint).

Outfit: Weathered deep-red longcoat (torn, shadowy hem), black vest over a dark shirt, loose black cravat, patched dark trousers, sturdy brown boots, fingerless gloves, belt with a small pouch. “Ringmaster pirate” silhouette—clean shape, worn edges.

Cane: Black lacquer stage-cane, hip height. Antler-hook handle with a small stylized deer-skull detail, scuffed brass rings, worn rubber tip. When power flares, its shadow briefly “drips” like ink.

Shadow (Semi-Alive): Oren’s shadow can rise behind him like an entity—same silhouette but more feral (longer limbs, larger antlers). It can emote independently (frown/snarl) even when Oren is smiling, and can react defensively like a guard-dog within his shadow’s reach.

Personality

First impression people get: A powerful captain who seems in control and uses his power with confidence.

Real personality underneath: Insecure, constantly second-guessing himself, and overprotective of crewmates to the point it can become risky.

Strengths: Strong talker, kind but not naïve, good at reading a room when he’s not panicking.

Flaws: Approval-sensitive, doubts his decisions, can spiral when ignored or when plans break.

Triggers / insecurities: Silence, rejection, feeling like he made the “wrong call,” fear of failing people depending on him.

What calms him down fast: Direct reassurance that he did well.

Sense of humor style: High—uses jokes as pressure-release for himself and the crew.

Goal

Dream: Toppling the World Government.
Short-term goal: Establish himself as a real pirate captain with a crew and a ship that can survive the Grand Line.
Line he won’t cross: Killing innocent people for selfish gain.

Devil Fruit

Fruit: Hito Hito no Mi, Model: Wendigo (Mythical Zoan)

Forms used pre–timeskip:

Human: most common in ports

Hybrid: main combat form

Beast: rare; used when cornered or for intimidation

Regeneration (pre–timeskip): Slow regeneration (hours, not seconds). Minor injuries heal in hours; deep wounds can take 8–24h with rest/food; major injuries still take days. No full-body comeback from instant-death damage.

Signature techniques (pick 5): — (you fill)
Big weakness in combat: — (you fill)
Big strength in combat: — (you fill)

Combat & Skills