Chapter 1

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In Taj Palace

A boy comes with his whole team...

Boy- Silence...dekhiye hum aagye hai andar jo v fasa hua hai hum usse safely bahar le aayenge...Dd ek kam kro tum...

It's non other than Neil Khanna

Rekha- tumhari wajah se aaj mera beta andar hai...pta ni kaisa hoga vo

GIrl is cont. crying in her father arms

Jaydev- meri pallo andar hai...bechari kaisi hogi pta ni

Terrorist- dekhiye agar ap log sbki sahi salamti chahte hai toh us pink suit vali ko bag ke andar bhej diye

Jaydev- n nhiii yeh nhi jayegi...o or p pta ni m meri pallo kaisi hogi...

Girl- mai jaungi papa or ap dekhna mai sbko bacha lungi

Rekha- phele tum kudh toh apne apko bacha lo...pta ni andar jake tum sab kharab krdo

Neil- dekhiye ap mai se kon hai vo jinko yeh bag ke saath andar bula rhe hai

A girl cames forward and says I'm the one nd neil get lost for a moment

Neil- ap sure hai ki ap andar jake un sbko
bacha lengi...

Girl- jiii mai bacha lungi

Rekha- officer ap isse bhejke bhut badi glti kr rhe hai

Girl- aunty abhi yeh sab baat krne ka time nhi...jab mai rakesh ko bacha lungi tab apko mujhe jeetna sunana hai suna lena

It's non other Tanvi...

Neil- yeh lijiye bag or pta hai na kya krna hai...good luck

Neil smile nd handover the bag to tanvi nd she went inside the palace

Neil- haa dd vo ldki andar hi gyi hai so tum dekh lena...

Dd- ji sir

A terrorist girl comes nd takes tanvi inside the room

Rakesh- t tanu tum...tum kyu aayi

Tanvi- rakesh...(Her eyes filled with tears after seeing him)

Terrorist- so aa hi gya bag...ab jldi do merko

Tanvi looks at him angrily nd abt to handover the bag to him suddenly she drop the bag then boooommmmmmm

Tanvi- r rakesh m mai tumhe kholti hoon tum mere saath m milke sbko kholo

Rakesh- hmm

Rakesh joins tanvi nd unties the rest of the people

Tanvi- Rakesh chalo jldi se...a ab pallo o or deepu di ko v bachana hai

Rakesh- haa tanu chalo...I'm impressed tanu tumne kiti bahaduri se sbko bacha liya

Tanvi- abhi yeh sab baatein krne ka time nhi rakesh chalo

Rakesh abt to go suddenly one terrorist get up nd shoot Rakesh

Tanvi- Rakeshhhhhhhh....

Suddenly neil comes with his team nd arrest them nd tanvi sit down on her knees near rakesh

Tanvi- r rakesh utho na...dekho aunty bahar wait kr rhi hain o or dekho n next week hmari engagement honi vali hain...tum mujhe aise chodhke ni jaa skte

Pallavi nd deepika come there

Deepika- Rakesh...sambhal tanu apne apko

Pallavi- tanu dii sambhaliye apne apko...

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