Chapter 2 : Kumagawa, what will you do?

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Disclaimer :

1. I am not a native English speaker

2. Because this is my first story (book), if you want me to rewrite this story it's okay for me

3. I only read until vol 6 for Tensura LN, but i already finished reasing medaka Box manga (minus LN)

4. Is there anyone here who wants to help me become a beta reader for this story?

5. You can comment like make a correction if i using English incorrectly

6. I think this chapter feels rushed

Serious : Please don't redistribute my work without my consent

" Talking "

' Thinking 'Date

「Kumagawa (special) talking pattern」

note : at some point, Misogi Kumagawa can talk using a normal pattern (no brackets)

before you start reading the story :
I'm currently using my smartphone rather my laptop for writing this story
, so you won't find any 100% correct sentence (since i can't use Grammaly for the grammar enchantment)

Why use the smartphone you ask? i sold my laptop

+ If you find some typo for this chapter, then tell me right away please

(let's see if my B level (B1/B2 or around intermediate level) of English is enough for me and for you all as reader)

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Date : -

3rd POV

After Misogi Kumagawa's altering anyone (especially anyone from Falmuth), the current Falmuth King (Edmaris) announces this moment as a serious problem, since Razen reporting what actually happened.

Flashback a hour ago

Razen the Magician goes back to the summoning ritual room.

Razen : *looking at the other summoner's condition* " What is actually happened? " ' Wait, since when did we conduct a summoning ritual to summon Otherworlder '

Random summoner 1 : *looks at Razen* " We, don't really know actually happened Razen-sama but i don't remember what actually happen "

Razen : " I see, i believe you since i also have the same suspicion "

Random summoner 1 : " I see, thank you for believing in me, Razen-sama "

Razen : *nods* " I'll report this to King, you all can rest "

All summoner : " Thank you Razen-sama " *bowing their head*

After that Razen teleported himself into the front of King's room

Razen : *knock 2x* " Excuse me, my King, it's me Razen "

Edmaris : " Oh Razen huh, you can come in " he said while sitting in his throne

Razen then opens the door to Edmaris's room and after that, he closes the door, after that he told Edmaris about what actually happened while kneeling.

Edmaris : " *shocked* I see, but what are your thoughts about it, Razen? "

Razen : " I have my suspicion my King "

Edmaris : " You may speak "

Razen : " My suspicion is : this Otherworlder casting some skills/magic to alter our memories about this otherworlder "

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