Hi i wanted to introduce my self im Desirae and this is my first story so if your cringing please tell me so i could adjust some things and for the writers out there i would like your tips for how to make stories also some of the characters speaks tagalog
Character change: some of the characters are the opposite like in the anime they're sweet well here they are cold and yep i hope you like the story and if you feel something to do not like kindly tell me :)) .
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Tanjiro:
*sigh* "i finally arrived" my name is tanjiro kamado and im currently looking for a job here in japan *ring ring* i heard a phone call and immediately pick up "heyy onii-chan we're already outside the airport and waiting for you" nezuko said "yepp im already here I'll be there in a minute" i said while picking up my luggage while walking i saw a figure (he looks cold and scary) I said to my thoughts he has a flame like hair and he's wearing all black as if he's a celeb trying to disguise "whatever is happening here is none of my business" i said in a low tone not from far i can see my sister waving and jumping "BROTHERRRREE!!!!!" she said while running towards me i opened up my arms ready to hug her tightly "i miss you so much onii-chan" "I miss you too" i respond its been 2 years since i saw her "come lets go i have my driver waiting for me outside" she said while holding my hand "okay okay" i said 2 minutes later i get on the car my vision became blurry and i suddenly passed out . . . . "Onii chan wake up its already 10 am" i heard a familiar voice i opened my eyes and saw nezuko holding warm milk in her hands "i-im sorry i woke up late" i said grabbing the mug and nodding my head as a thank you "well i have a surprise!!! I found you a job the company pays high amount although they are strict" she said I don't really care much about how strict they are we're on a tight budget and i need to pay my sister's school fee "I'll take it" i said "are you sure? " my sister responded i said yes i am
3rd party pov:
After that day Tanjiro and Nezuko spend his first month together eating outside going to the beach and he even spoiled his sister with the remaining money he has
Tanjiro:
"Hey Nezuko im gonna apply tomorrow for a job okay? I'll leave you some money so you could spend the day i said " okayy onii-chan" i was glad that i have a sister like her
3rd pov:
After a while someone knocked at the door "I'll get it! " nezuko said while tanjiro is making lunch "GONPACHIROOOOOOOOO!" A familiar sound said "TANJIROOOO!" A following voice said while kneeling in the ground crying "ze-zenitsu? " tanjiro said while running towards them "*sniff* g-gonpachiro" inosuke said even tho he's wearing a mask you could clearly see he's crying the 4 of them hugged each other "i thought i wouldn't see you again ╥﹏╥" Zenitsu said while sniffing "what made you think that? Of course i will come back (￣∇￣)" Tanjiro said "*sniff* Gonpachiro is something burning i can smell ham- *sniff*" Inosuke said while pointing at the kitchen immediately tanjiro stood up running towards the kitchen "INOSUKE ZENITSU GRAB WATERRRRRR" he said screaming with a panicked voice they grabbed a bucket of water and started to throw in the stove to stop the burning
