Both Avneil are stubborn individuals. Their determined faces are shown.
Next morning, Neil gets ready and comes our of his room.
Shweta- aaja tillu. naashta kar le.
Neil- Nahin mom I'm getting late.
Bebe- par puttar, thoda sa toh kha le.
Neil- bebe main kar lunga naashta bahar hi. Okay main chalta hun.
Saying this, Neil leaves the house.
Shweta- isse kya hua bebe? Yeh rajasthani express kyun bana hua hai?
Bebe- mujhe kya pata? Ek second, ho sakta hai Avni ke paas gaya ho?
Shweta- oh God yes bebe! Aisa ho sakta hai. Kitne din se donon nahin mile hain waise bhi.
Bebe- Rab kare sab thik ho jaye donon ke beech.
Neil comes outside of sukoon ghar. He's about to enter inside, but then comes outside.
Neil- pata nahin woh kya sochegi, kahin koi galat matlab na nikal le.
He turns back.
Neil- tujhe kya farak padta hai Neil ki woh kya sochegi?
He turns to enter again, but then his eyes land on an ice cream stall.
Neil- yeh sahi rahega, kaam bhi ho jaega aur shak bhi nahin hoga.
After a few minutes, he rings the bell if Sukoon ghar.
Avni- Sunheri, door check karo zara.
Sunheri nods and opens the door, and gets surprised.
Avni us arranging the sofa, she doesn't look up.
Avni- kya hua? Kon hai?
Sunheri- haan woh actually.. Neil hai.
Avni looks up wide eyed.
The kids were playing games on the floor. Mowgli sees Neil.
Mowgli- Superman! Superman!
He runs and hugs Neil. Neil smiles at him, while Avni's eyes well up.
All the other kids- Neil Bhaiya!
Neil smiled at all of them.
Neil- Isse pehle ki main bhool jaun aur gadbad ho jaye, yeh ice creams tum sabke liye. Enjoy karo!
The kids happily take the ice creams and move aside to eat.
Tara- waise Neil.. tum yahan?
Sitara- koi kaam tha?
Neil- andar aa jaun pehle?
Neil comes inside and Sunheri closes the door, and goes to the kitchen.
Neil- main paas se guzar raha tha.. aur nazar ice cream pe pad gayi, toh socha kyun na inn shaitanon ke liye le lun. Inse mile hue bhi itna time ho gaya hai.. aur ghar bhi soona- soona lag raha hai.
Sunheri- ab aaye ho toh pet puja bhi kar lo.
She hands Neil a bowl of snacks.
Neil- iski koi zarurat nahin hai.
Sunheri insists him to take a bite, and Neil agrees.
He eats a spoonful of the snack and his eyes well up. He gets emotional.
Neil- Avni.. yeh Avni ne banaya hai na?
Tara- 10 saal baad bhi..
Sitara- apko unke banaye khaane ka taste yaad hai.
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FanfictionAn avneil story I wrote a few years back.. posting it finally. Hoping for positive response. The story starts after Neil finds out that Avni is alive and Avni moves to Mumbai. It's after the 10 years leap. So if anyone wants to know the pre-story c...
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