I am no Prey
LinguisticsAddict85 / 100
It was nice that you started the story in the middle of an action sequence that gave us an idea of who the character is. It's an interesting world that you have a lot of nice detail too. Some of the descriptions seemed on the nose. You might consider editing them down to help the pace flow better along with the background information on the characters. This will allow for more show in the story and less tell. You have an interesting world started here that was nice to follow.
Project Harvest
RosesandSpiders94 / 100
The story immediately delves into a world full of injustice. It gave immediate sympathy for the main character and left me cheering that she would make it through her predicament. Nice world-building and descriptions. All of this and the pacing made for an enjoyable read.
To Cut a Turning Tail
BaepsaeING68 / 100
This book has a lot of creativity in it and some unique concepts. The title was also very unique. The paragraphs would work better if they were a lot shorter. A lot of information is put into them without a break to the reader's eyes. This also makes the dialogue tricky to read because it's all squished into the paragraphs for everyone speaking. There needs to be a separate paragraph every time someone speaks to give clarity. I would work on cleaning up the story to give a smoother flow. You have a very creative imagination that sparked some unique story ideas.
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