Writer's Book Award 2021 (Batch One)

Fantasy Results With Feedback

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kenzeyaaa | The Rebirth
Title: 5%
Book Cover: 5%
Blurb: 14%
Plot: 24%
Grammar: 9%
Written Style: 15%
Overall Impression: 24%
Total: 96%

FEEDBACK:

All I could say na ang unique ng story. Why? Bihira lang ako maka-encounter ng novel na may setting sa kulungan at korte. From the title to description, hindi siya nag-fail na ibitin ako sa pagbabasa. I was satisfied reading every chapters at medyo nadudurog ang puso ko sa emotions ng main character mo na si Aliesshandra. Isa ito sa mga iniyakan ko dahil nakaka-relate ang past story niya. Ang galing ng pagkaka-describe sa kanya sa five senses. Detalyado talaga. Hindi ako nakahanap ng issue dito sa story and need lang talaga ng konting polish. Splendid! Your story is worth the read. :>

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Mister_Ryu | Exquisite Disparity

Title: 5%
Book Cover: 5%
Blurb: 15%
Plot: 24%
Grammar: 10%
Written Style: 15%
Overall Impression: 24%
Total: 98%

FEEDBACK:

Nakaka-hook ang book cover and blurb of your story. The first Chapter totally pushed me to read till the end dahil sa pagka-maldita ng character mo na mas lalo kong nagustuhan. Nakaka-addict at ibang klase ang pagkakagawa ng plot. Ito'y kakaiba. Since it's slice of life, nakaka-relate ako sa bawat chapters na talagang nararanasan natin everyday. Sa mga crisis at problema ng society natin, nakaka-guilty pa kung tutuusin at may mapupulot kang aral. Again, wala namang issue na nakita sa story. Nakakita din ako ng warning sa simula kaya wala na 'kong kailangan ipoint out. Not bad, it's awesome. Galing galing, author!

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XandraaaZ | Himitsu No Nazo Academy
Title: 4%
Book Cover: 5%
Blurb: 13%
Plot: 24%
Grammar: 9%
Written Style: 14%
Overall Impression: 24%
Total: 93%

FEEDBACK:

I actually got curious in your title and book cover. Sa blurb naman, make it more catchier ngunit maayos pa naman at naiintindihan. Sa grammar, ayus-ayusin din and sa written style i-enhance pa.

Issues:
>Hindi siya catchy
> Kulang sa pag-dedescribe ng Academy (Sa Blurb)

Tip:
> Give your story some twist!
> Describe the Academy, the location, the magic etc. upang sa imagination ng readers mo, naglalakbay na sila sa isang magical world.

Not the worse. Readable and magical. Nice one! Keep improving author!✿

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readuxx | Westania: School of Witchcrafts and Wizardries
Title: 4%
Book Cover: 4%
Blurb: 14%
Plot: 24%
Grammar: 8%
Written Style: 13%
Overall Impression: 24%
Total: 92%

FEEDBACK:

The title and book cover in the story is pretty good. Dagdagan ng kaunting description ang blurb like parang summarization or introducing your character, Esther (but not all para hindi ma-spoil ang readers)  The grammar is not fully polished and sa dialogue, don't forget to put your punctuation mark. Additional, you don't need to longer the dots and three is enough.