Okay first of all, mad respects to writers out there and if you disagree with the things I say here sorry to offend you but I'm ranting so shush.
Now.
Whenever I read a oc or Y/n story why do they put unnecessary angst?
And if you want to write angst can you at least put a warning. Is that too much too ask?! I've read 2fanfics now with ABUSE! And it's getting on my nerves!
And stick to your character's personality!!!!
If they emotionless then they became happy don't rush it! Like in one chapter they had a 180 degree change of personality
Make it make sense.
And! GOSH I know it's just fanfic but Do your research about onisan, onesan.
And the "arigatou" in a English fanfic? Just no!
I can tolerate Senpai,Chan,Kun, Onisan,onesan.
you're writing it English! Just say thanks is that too hard to do?!
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2-20-21.
4:13 am
