One Shot/Short Stories Results With Feedback

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xkinglessqueenx

Title [4/5]
Book cover [4/5]
Blurb [13/15]
Plot [23/25]
Grammar [8.5/10]
Written Style [13/15]
Overall [22.5/25]

Total: [88/100]

FEEDBACK:
— For the second time around ay same feels pa rin habang binabasa ito, yung mala-rollercoster ride na emotions. This really one of my most recommended story sa mga friends ko na who wants to read a book na may thrill and suspense. Apakagaling eh.

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mscatflower | Euphoria's Escapade

Title [5/5]
Book cover [4/5]
Blurb [13.5/15]
Plot [23.5/25]
Grammar [9/10]
Written Style [13/15]
Overall [23/25]

Total: [90.5/100]

FEEDBACK:
— We can really find peace at somewhere else when we are hopeless. I love that she chooses to be with Lola Bam, she chooses to stay in the real world and face the reality. Thank you author for creating this wonderful masterpiece.

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Scarlettear_ | The Death of Me

Title [4.5/5]
Book cover [5/5]
Blurb [14.5/15]
Plot [25/25]
Grammar [9.5/10]
Written Style [15/15]
Overall [25/25]

Total: [98.5/100]

FEEDBACK:
— One of the best story for someone who's facing struggles, pain, sorrow, and hopelessness in life.

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girlinparis | Ang Simula at Wakas

Title [4.5/5]
Book cover [4/5]
Blurb [13/15]
Plot [24/25]
Grammar [9.5/10]
Written Style [14.5/15]
Overall [24.5/25]

Total: [94/100]

FEEDBACK:
— Speaks facts about life, love, and commitment. I understand Gen's point that she doesn't want to commit yet for the reason that everything may change. Though in the end, love will still win, love forgives. I'm still happy for them.

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Simplicityiscute | Frantic Year

Title [4.5/5]
Book cover [4/5]
Blurb [13.5/15]
Plot [23/25]
Grammar [9/10]
Written Style [13.5/15]
Overall [23/25]

Total: [90.5/100]

FEEDBACK:
— Love is truly limitless and unconditional. Not every love story ends happy together, though it gives you lesson in life which is an important factor. The amazing twist that I never expected.

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Waenghyun2 | Sining

Title [4.5/5]
Book cover [4.5/5]
Blurb [14/15]
Plot [23/25]
Grammar [9/10]
Written Style [14/15]
Overall [24.5/25]

Total: [93.5/100]

FEEDBACK:
— Ilang beses ko na itong nabasa at ang emosyon ko sa kwentong ito ay ganoon pa rin, ramdam mo ang lungkot at masaktan sa mga pangyayari.

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JyesthaWrites | Baka Sakali

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