You should continue to upload to wattpad your story has potential you just need to work on more details like when you jumped from her being told about moving to the next day you could have put some details in there about how she felt and about the things she was leaving behind but other than that it's pretty good
lol u liked my story? i though it sucked so i just stopped writing it cause im too embarrassed to write wat really is on my mind lol. but im like still writing it, just not on wattpad..........
Thank you much for the fan! I hope you enjoy my works and have a great day!
@ForeverMalak thanks I'm looking forward to more chapters of your books :)
Thanks for fanning and voting! Welcome to watt pad