ArtyGirl

@pheonix-on-fire The grammer is good and i see nothing majorily wrong :) i wish i couldd go to the library mine is underconstruction... And thanks for telling me otherwise i wouldve forgotten as i have no comp at the moment and am on my ipod..

pheonix-on-fire

thanx for reading and voting. oh and for becoming a fan, sure means a lot. Well u are right about the title, this isnt the real title of the book, to tell you the truth i havent really decided on one yet, i just called it "A Christmas Wish" because i had to call it something lol. I wud luv it if u could suggest something.
          BTW i kno the evil bitch coming in is cliche, but then if you notice the whole premise of my book is. I just want to show all the doubters out there that even cliche's if done properly and written well can be gr8. After all they become cliche's cuz the concept apeals to ppl. My novel is an attempt to tackle the commercial romance genre, and unfortunately to do that i cant have everything be unique, some of the things have to be predictable, afterall even life is, most of the time. I think all romance subscribes to one cliche or the other lol. again it is how one tackles them that separates the good writers from the bad.
          P.S my research is from library books and internet articles, too many sources to name here lol.