ArtyGirl

Name	Mil
Location	Under you, baby.
Member Since	Jun 28, 2010
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ATTENTION: I am a grammar and spelling addict, so if you ever get offended I'm sorry - I like helping people make their stories better! Is that too mean? D: And if it hurts your feelings, tell me what I said wrong and I'll tell you what I meant, or apologize for being out of line. Although, some stories are so bad I'm forced to.

I may like writing, but nothing I love more is editing.


It is impossible to discourage the real writers - they don't give a damn what you say, they're going to write. ~Sinclair Lewis

The quote I read when I'm in a Writers block.

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Im a vampre werwolf forced to marry the half-blood prince of Djetjoerg. EEEEWWW!

2 parts / 2 pages, updated Aug 11, 2011

After Reagan found out that she was a product of her mother's teenage indiscretion and her so-called fathers reason for her abuse, so she... read more

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WattPad Writing Clichés

2 parts / 3 pages, updated May 01, 2011 PG-13

Some tips against clichés on WattPad.

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RemedyMelody
2 years ago

hello, can you please read my story Soundtrack to Her Heartbreak? please and thank you if you do! :)

wallflowerjona
2 years ago

keep writing

ArtyGirl
2 years ago

@pheonix-on-fire The grammer is good and i see nothing majorily wrong :) i wish i couldd go to the library mine is underconstruction... And thanks for telling me otherwise i wouldve forgotten as i have no comp at the moment and am on my ipod..

ArtyGirl
2 years ago

@pheonix-on-fire The grammer is good and i see nothing majorily wrong :) i wish i couldd go to the library mine is underconstruction... And thanks for telling me otherwise i wouldve forgotten as i have no comp at the moment and am on my ipod..

pheonix-on-fire
2 years ago

hi, chapter 14 is also posted. I hope u like it.

pheonix-on-fire
2 years ago

hi, chapter 13 is up, give it a read and tell me what u think. i hope u like it.

pheonix-on-fire
2 years ago

i am surprised u didnt point out any deficiencies in my grammar and stuff, does that means it passed muster with you? lol

pheonix-on-fire
2 years ago

thanx for reading and voting. oh and for becoming a fan, sure means a lot. Well u are right about the title, this isnt the real title of the book, to tell you the truth i havent really decided on one yet, i just called it "A Christmas Wish" because i had to call it something lol. I wud luv it if u could suggest something.
BTW i kno the evil bitch coming in is cliche, but then if you notice the whole premise of my book is. I just want to show all the doubters out there that even cliche's if done properly and written well can be gr8. After all they become cliche's cuz the concept apeals to ppl. My novel is an attempt to tackle the commercial romance genre, and unfortunately to do that i cant have everything be unique, some of the things have to be predictable, afterall even life is, most of the time. I think all romance subscribes to one cliche or the other lol. again it is how one tackles them that separates the good writers from the bad.
P.S my research is from library books and internet articles, too many sources to name here lol.

ellywyn
2 years ago

I would love to read any story of yours babe (:

rockmysocks
2 years ago

@Phantom0002 You have many spelling errors ;)

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