Just started reading your story, and I like it. Just found it funny that you would choose the word baba which means father in a number of languages
its sad when a man was so weak and cowardly resorting to sell a child for a way out.even more sad when this does happen in real life.
Aww this is amazing!! Arina is such a nice name! You have really good descriptions and you write really well! :)
I thought it was really good it like i can sympathize with her: ) your writing us really good
I think your storyline is unique. Its not very different and yet it is. I don't know, but theres something about it that makes me want to go on reading...
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