I love the idea of the story so far :) And your start is impressive. Keep up the good work.
@LadyErato Wow. I'm usually not into books like this but this was really really good (: Keeep up the good work !
This is really an impressive start. I love how you insert flashbacks and create suspense in your story. It's well-written. I'm hooked now. :)
im usually not a fan of fantasy but this one really caught my eye. good plot line so far, it looks like a really good story!
wow, very ineteresting concept. The story was a little hard to follow at times but overall your writing is pretty good! Nice job!
This was lovely! I loved the beginning of this chapter and even though I haven't read all of this, it sounds interesting and different, voted!
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