Most of the time we value things more than our relationships with others,this is very good,I must say.Be blessed.
LOL! What a fun poem! The date is in love with his car; has a feel for his automobile! Good work!
This is hilariousness at its best, lol. A wonderful, funny, delightful poem written with flair. Love, peace and freedom, Olan
Haha! Great poem! Really funny and great flow!!
One question though, In the 8th line did you mean to say tire? Or is it actually tyre?
LOL, loved it! Chuckled all the way through. I think she should just take a taxi home or call a friend to come pick her up ;)
Hahaha!!!! Omigosh so true! I could see the plot unfold as the evening progressed... hahaha wonderful!
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