I wasn't prepared for such emotion so early... Now I know I'll be in tears at some point. Can't wait to see what unfolds though :)
This is so emotional & touching.. I think you'll make me cry as the story unfolds :)
ooooh... I don't know if I can continue, although I will. I can tell this may tear into my heart. Nothing is more heart wrenching then the loss of a child.
Wow! Quite the powerful beginning. You communicated her pain quite well and vividly. As a mother, just the thought ofthat loss makes my heart weep.
Such a beautiful story, so much emotion and depth, I could really feel the pain. Truly wonderful, great job :)
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