woah u timedskiped so fast but i love naruto :P and Sasori is mine!! but i love it.
fantastic beginning :) i have never read a story like this before, so i'm reading on :D voted!
this sounds interesting...my only suggestion would be to re-edit it since there are misspellings and grammatical errors, but overall nice job =)
Good start ! I havnt read the story this is based off, but its interesting ! You have some spelling mistakes, thoughh. Nothing majorr xP
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